Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Escapist

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Hola,

What's with Aakash and Payal?? Where are you heading with this couple. I seriously felt they hardly explored the intricacies of this couple and just kept it to silent longing gazes where none speaks. Waiting eagerly to see the feisty Payal.

Anyways where is Khushi, it's like she has vanished in thin air...and I don't get Arnav. The Part 1 and Prologue Arnav; they seem like two different people then again a person can be multi-faceted.

Looking forward to this one esp coz it updates a lil earlier than others :D

Cheers,

P.S: Aria meaning music or lioness which one is you ?? :)

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sakthi25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

That was really awesome...
Found this new FF and inspired by the title...

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casker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

love this Payal. For Kushi she left Akash.

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penguin143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Great start..

Waiting eagerly 4 d story 2 unfold..

Continue soon..

Thanks 4 d PM..😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: inajnar
V interesting ...
In the intro ...Is Khushi a figment of his imagination ? Just wondering

Hi,

Yes, she is. I can't tell you more without giving away whats to come next. Don't treat Part 1 as an extension of the intro. But rather the intro as an insight about what this FF will be about, hopefully!

Thanks for commenting!

Aria

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: saomom
Ooh, you have me hook, line and sinker! I'll be watching for more!

Thank you! Your words are encouraging. Glad you've enjoyed reading this FF so far. Hope to see you around!

Aria

Edited by -Aria- - 12 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: lakharnshi88
oh finally a proper full on redemption track... rubbing my hands in glee!!! BRING IT ON. Superbly written Aria... i've read both the start and ch.1 with great interest!! i'm going to kep an eye on this one for sure!!

Every time I read the word redemption, writing this FF is starting to feel a bit daunting!😆

Thank you for your encouraging words. Will hopefully see you around!

cheers,

Aria