Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: greenMoss
Arnav is repenting big time. I liked the line where you wrote that the flimsy stars never felt so nice before for Arnav. It spoke volumes about how Arnav misses Khushi.

Anjali is not divulging a lot of things.

I liked the description of the Airport scene.

Thanks for the PM.

He does miss her, even though he won't admit it even to himself or to others at this point.

In this FF, all characters will have erred at one point or another.

Thank you for your comment GreenMoss :)

Edited by -Aria- - 12 years ago

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Nice update.
Anjali seems to know more than she shows.
It is strange that Arnav did nothing to find the truth after Khushi left.Was it his fear of him being wrong?
Excited for the next chapter.
Thanks for the PM.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: Neha2014
Wonderful update!!!

Thank you Neha :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: -Sanz-
Interesting :)

Welcome to the LB thread.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: scarlet2012
nice update, Good that Khushi left him, he need to understand his mistake.

I agree. He has a lot to fix...

Thanks Scarlet!

Edited by -Aria- - 12 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: cappacuino5
Thnk u for pm-ing me !
I havnt commented before but i would always check if you had updated this story or not. Thnk u for updating.I like the fact that you have potrayed Khushi as an independent girl. Good that Arnav is feeling guilty now, I want to see Khushi more successful and rich before she meets Arnav (perhaps one of the best chefs of the world owning a chain of hotels/ restraunts , I know that would make her a hotelier but since cooking is her passion therefore she's a chef , something like that , its just my idea since Arnav has always taunted her on her status).

Update soon !

You are welcome for the PM - your id stood out - your user name, one of my favorite coffee drinks :D. First of all, welcome to the thread and Thank you for commenting. I was hoping to see Khushi grow into that independent girl in the show but that sort of growth never really happened. You guys are not going to make it easy for me are you? No one is willing to make it easier to Arnav! Here's the deal, if she were to owe a chain of hotels, that would mean, these two wouldn't meet for a very very long time! Now take your pick? I'm not suggesting anything... or trying to give away anything either. Ok jokes aside, I agree, he needs to make up big time. Let's see how he goes about it here.

Thanks again!

Cheers,

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: dhrashtee
Great update after a long time... Is that a letter from Khushi? I highly doubt! May be some news abt her! Eagerly waiting for next update... pls cont soon...

Thank you for your comment Drashtee. Is it from her? well just a few more days, you will know soon. Update soon!

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: vyasakshita
great work dear
thanx for pm

Thank you :)

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#349

Anjali clearly knows more...is the bond between Anjali and Kushi because of being in loving the same man under all circumstances or because of being deceived by another..?

Arnav is going in search of Kushi...?

Clearly Kushi is ready to let the past go in parts...hence the call to Payal...!

What is Arnav going to do now...clearly in repentance mode but what will he or can he do to win Kushi back..or can he...?

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: _disha_
I am sorry for the late un res but really you updated after so long i needed to go back and read and refresh my memory in order to read the new update.

So now he has another letter...Waiting to know more abt it!

Khushi has taken the leap after 3 yrs and got in touch with Payal... so thats a start in the right direction.

Anjali clearly knows a lot more but i do agree with her to reveal only the info she is allowed by khushi (i am assuming this ) and he needs to do the grovelling and repentance on his own.

This story is so powerful and i love your narration style ..please do continue this story with timely updates.It really needs to be told.

I was late by a month!😆 sigh!

Yeah, like someone else mentioned elsewhere on the thread, every part seems to end with a mysterious letter...I didn't plan it but its turning out that way. lol

More on Anjali and Arnav in the next update.

Thank you for your wonderful comment Disha. I will update soon this time around, a few days!

Cheers,

Aria