Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: KaaliBilli
Where does the ache begin? Where does one lose his or her modicum of right and wrong to continually plummet in the eyes of one person they hold a candle for? Arnav's irrational adoration of his sister has made him sink to his knees and the dichotomy of his attraction to Khushi and hatred based on suspicion at the same time has made him choose - nothing for the good, as I see.

A rendition of megalomania where the man aspires for second chances and hopes for redemption.
The self-respecting woman makes a decision not because she wants to but she has to; a point where one starts to question the sanity of the situation and the brutality of actions.

I like Khushi for the decisions she made, for saying the words she did and not saying when she didn't have to. I like Arnav for recognizing what he was and so furiously flawed for not being what he wants to be.

Interestingly she becomes a chef, an Italian one at that. I am impressed that this Khushi overcomes her abhorrence for anything unconventional.

Looking forward for more.

RockBarbie

I'm enjoying writing this FF more than I thought I would. At some level, those flaws make him so much more real...and not just him but people around him as well because everyone errs or has erred. What may seem like just the repercussions of his irrational adoration of his sister - could infant be a result of so many other things, so many decisions that other individuals made, everything culminating at that one high...he simply the catalyst...the one that lit the fire that was already simmering in the surface below.

I wonder if Khushi even realizes why she joined an Italian restaurant,...may be she doesn't yet. May be its just about feeling closer to things that make sense somewhere deep within...even those that you refuse to give a voice or shape to...

And the exploration continues.

Thanks RB. or KB.

Edited by -Aria- - 12 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: soaringskies
it's been ages that you have updated aria..but the update was amazing..! if only u update faster..!*sigh..!! this is one of the most interesting stories i have read on redemption..!! u kindaa made me relive the ol ipk days..!! *sigh i miss ipk and wish if only makers of ipk had shown something like this...!!

P.S - i have a complaint aria, u should update more often..!! BAS

@bold, all my readers have the same complaint, it seems.😆

Thank you for those wonderful words of encouragement SS. An actual repentance track on the show would have been so wonderful, ahh well, I suppose we had to make do with the kidnapping track instead :S

Thanks again!

Will update by the end of the week.

cheers,

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: Japonica

At last, Aria you have updated. And I have, as I had been meaning to for a while, gone back to the beginning and reread the story.

And having reread the story I have to agree with your comment that we had not yet seen the extent of his beastliness - he truly hates himself so much that again and again he strikes at the one thing that can save him, just to make sure he is not saved.

After your latest update update I am wondering if even Khushi's endless reserve of love can redeem anything.

Well may be their love for each other can, but they will be forever marked by his repeated strikes not just on her and himself but on their nascent relationship, He will forever have to be beholden to her love, that is his punishment

I have read so many redemption stories, and such fabulous ones, but yours Aria, really brought me to tears.

Thank you for giving us a strong Payal. So much injustice was done ot all the characters in the show.

And now please update soon, I need to know how the inevitable will pan out!

@bold - Does it start somewhere and end at a definite point, or is it like you wrote, vast..beyond comprehension? One thing, I realized while watching one of the earlier clips this past week, she never held a grudge against him did she, for all that he did...and dished out! Coming back to your question, at this point, its hard to say... I guess we will find out when we get there and yes it includes me as well :)

I agree though, they will forever be marked...but then again, if they survive this, it should result in a stronger bond.

I can see how much everyone wanted to see a stronger Payal through the comments in this FF.

Thank you for your wonderful comment, and yes I will get back to you on that PM :)

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: savy.fernis
Amazing please pm me

Thank you!

And yes, will send you a PM for the next update.

Aria

Edited by -Aria- - 12 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: vidya.sanjay
Nice update.
Anjali seems to know more than she shows.
It is strange that Arnav did nothing to find the truth after Khushi left.Was it his fear of him being wrong?
Excited for the next chapter.
Thanks for the PM.

More on Anjali in the next update. Arnav did try to find Khushi after she was gone as you will see in the next few parts but was he in the right frame of mind? Did he really know what he was searching for?

Will update by the end of the week.

Thank you for your comment.

Cheers,

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: Dimz13
Anjali clearly knows more...is the bond between Anjali and Kushi because of being in loving the same man under all circumstances or because of being deceived by another..?

Arnav is going in search of Kushi...?

Clearly Kushi is ready to let the past go in parts...hence the call to Payal...!

What is Arnav going to do now...clearly in repentance mode but what will he or can he do to win Kushi back..or can he...?

So many questions but valid ones!! I wish I could answer them all :) I hope you will find those answers one by one in the coming chapters.

@ bold, I think about the same, what can he do? but the may be we should ask, can he?

Thank you for your comment Dimz, and welcome to the thread.

Aria

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Aria,

Finally I caught up with all the parts that were unfinished and wow...So lengthy chapters how did u even manage to write so much?? I took me an hour to read it perfectly. Anyways coming back :D

I like the way Khushi took her own front and left but I didn't like was the attitude of the family, then again I can relate to this far better than what was shown. This happens in reality and sometimes it is far more worse. Somehow I'm both bothered and glad about the way Arnav is being tortured. After all one needs to get a taste of their own medicine too.

So what's up with Anjali why suddenly all the protector act?? I mean if she meant to understand her this much and care for her then why hurt her in the first place by ignoring her. Isn't that similar to hypocrisy?? I dunno maybe I'm interpreting it wrong then it should be or maybe not.

I'm glad that finally we're in the present still there seems so much that is hanging in mid air and mid thoughts that even I dunno how to put that across maybe I'll be able to in the coming chapters if it makes sense.

And hey do pm me everything..blog and et al. that I've missed. I can say I'm back at least I've not taken hiatus from reading :D

Cheers,

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dmegha_PM

@dmegha_PM

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

What a wonderful update, it was.

Loved it to bits.

Continue soon.

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

I just read this ff! It is amazing!! Please add me to your pm list!

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vann

@vann

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Really like the women in your story...something we miss out in all tv serials. A strong and indendent central character who decides to walk out when she realizes that her husband is not willing to let her have her say...Anjili respecting her sister-in-law's right to choose if she wants to be with her husband (I presume that is what Anjili is doing) and of course Payal, the true and courageous sister - cant say enough about these...Arnav we know should repent, hopefully he would. Though forgiveness does not equal forgetting...but yayyay to the sisterhood!

Ps. Update as you promised...by the end of the week!

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