Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: mishachwdhury
the story is great..you describe it very nicely dear

Thanks Misha, glad you liked it. :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: 1408
welcome back...awrsome update

Thank you!

Glad you liked the update.

Stay tuned, more to come, soon!

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: madhusquare
hi aria

just came acroos ur ff Liquorice Burning on the forum

its awesome would love to read more on this .

i have sent a buddy request to u. pls accept and pm me for future updates

Hi Madhu,

Welcome to the LB thread and Thank you for commenting. I have responded to your request. I send PMs to those that have commented on either of the last two updates, no other way to keep track of who has asked for updates otherwise.

Cheers,

Aria

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: raws
it is so good ...

Thank you :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: neverbefore
Are you going to end every chapter with a suspense letter?!!! 😡 😃

Loved the update. There was a quiet dignity to Khushi's letter...no desperation and no sense of feeling sorry for herself. For all the bravado in Khushi's character, I love that quiet dignity.

😆 It is turning out that way isn't it?

Can you wait a few more chapters to know what it is?😛

I liked what you have to say about Khushi's letter, you summed it up pretty well- quiet dignity. Not the one that dressed up as a Peon to steal Aarav's birth certificate they totally killed her there.

Oh well, I better get back to writing...about that letter of course ;)

Thanks for commenting.

cheers,

Aria

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: aveeshakiran
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING STORY...LOVED IT...

Thank you :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: missmk
Superb

Thanks a lot missmk :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: lovebarun...
Hi, this story has so much potential. great update..

write regularly, thanks

Thank you for those encouraging words :)

Will try to update more regularly.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: Hriju321
Awesome update.I really felt the pain and angst in Arnav and Khushi's relationship. I just have a request...please have a happy ending because Arnav and Khushi should be together...hamesha 😊

Thanks for the PM 😛

Welcome to the LB thread, reserves don't count! ;) And Thank you for commenting Hriju.

Hamesha? Why worry about the ending now - besides what counts is the journey, wouldn't you agree? Would a sad ending be so bad?

Just curious, since you brought it up.

cheers,

Aria

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: yashal_khan
Awsum update...
Emotinal really feel bad for both of them ...
Is that khushii who send letter to him??
Pls continue soon
Thanks for pm

Hello Yashal,

You will have to wait till the next part to find out who sent that letter ;)

Thank you for commenting, will update soon.

Aria