Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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vyasakshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

great work dear
thanx for pm

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KaaliBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Where does the ache begin? Where does one lose his or her modicum of right and wrong to continually plummet in the eyes of one person they hold a candle for? Arnav's irrational adoration of his sister has made him sink to his knees and the dichotomy of his attraction to Khushi and hatred based on suspicion at the same time has made him choose - nothing for the good, as I see.

A rendition of megalomania where the man aspires for second chances and hopes for redemption.
The self-respecting woman makes a decision not because she wants to but she has to; a point where one starts to question the sanity of the situation and the brutality of actions.

I like Khushi for the decisions she made, for saying the words she did and not saying when she didn't have to. I like Arnav for recognizing what he was and so furiously flawed for not being what he wants to be.

Interestingly she becomes a chef, an Italian one at that. I am impressed that this Khushi overcomes her abhorrence for anything unconventional.

Looking forward for more.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: serendipitylove
First of all let me say...Ur writing is truly astounding! Ur way with words, the descriptions and the intensity woven into each sentence is amazing!! I only wish u update more often...coz at this juncture u have us hanging to the edge of our seats waiting for the next scene to unfold...and arnav n khushi haven't even met yet! I'm waiting for Arnav to pay for his sins...

He realized losing her was not the worst that had happened; things got progressively worse with every single blow after that.
Really...to think of her...young, newly divorced, no money no family...Where did she go? He broke her completely didn't he? The more he realizes the repercussions of his actions..the worse they become.. He deserves to wallow in guilt...he deserves to suffer...

he knew there was something very odd about her behavior
Why does Anjali seem odd to me? She herself says that Khushi deserves a second chance away from arnav...I'm guessing Anjali knows where she is and gave her the money to join culinary school and do whatever she wants with her life now..thats the least she can do for the innocent woman they've all wronged so much

She is my wife" he shot back at her. I loved that!! There we go back to the possessive arnav who gets what he wants at any cost! I would love to see more of him... Arnav wanted to make amends and he didn't really want to get out of the sham marriage...and the ungaurded moments few and far convinced him that she isn't an actress...She's sincere... Well finally all MUs are cleared...now what happens when they meet? and how will they meet?

one of them did not have a return address. Is that a letter from khushi now? But why would she contact him? Pls dont make her forgive him and accept him with open arms so soon...he's gotta redeem himself first!!

Thanks for the PM...please please please please update soon!!!!! This is like a cliffhanger!

Thank you for your words of appreciation. Its always nice to hear back from readers, I'm glad to know you have enjoyed reading the story so far.

Two updates a month is what I was initially going for with this FF, but I do agree I have not quite managed to keep that up. Hopefully, the updates will be more regular from now on. Yes and no, about Arnav and Khushi, there is a bit of them in every part. :P

@Red, you guys don't want it easy for Arnav do you? KKG has to make it hard. But how does he go about redeeming himself? Any ideas?

Let's see what Khushi does, she is little crazy so be warned!

We all love that possessive guy, I'm sure when the time comes, that will return. Old habits die hard.

Thanks for the wonderful comment SL. I promise, next update will be exactly a week from this last update, no waiting this time.

cheers,

Aria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: zyanah
You know many people often complain about slow pace of the story but I am really comfortable with it.
But sweetheart the speed at which you are updating its going to take centuries to complete the story.
Coming to the update it was truly a bang. Anjali finally behaved like real woman by helping her to set free.and I know its your story and I am not supposed to interfere but please don't make Khushi walts back in Arnav's ready arms just like that.
I am really looking forward to a actual winnig back and letting go track.

A century is too long love, even by my standards. Although, I do have another FF which has been running since the last five years, so yeah, ermm...I don't exactly have a great track record there 🤔 Just saying...

@bold, yes it would appear so isn't it. If anyone else besides Arnav had the authority to set Khushi free, it would have to be her.

@Red, you guys aren't going to make it easy for me are you? Let's see what happens eventually :P

Thank you for your comment Zyanah.

Aria

Edited by -Aria- - 12 years ago

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soaringskies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#335

it's been ages that you have updated aria..but the update was amazing..! if only u update faster..!*sigh..!! this is one of the most interesting stories i have read on redemption..!! u kindaa made me relive the ol ipk days..!! *sigh i miss ipk and wish if only makers of ipk had shown something like this...!!

P.S - i have a complaint aria, u should update more often..!! BAS

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Japonica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: -Aria-

Hey!

You are seeking mercy for him already? And the 'beast' hasn't really made his presence felt yet!! 😲

I agree though Khushi would be the most upset to see him in a sorry state and perhaps the only one who can bring him out of his misery. But he has miles to go...

@bold, beautifully worded, I'm not sure he is there yet. But there is truth in your words, lets see how this pans out.

Lots more to come. Thank you for your comment Japonica :)

Aria

At last, Aria you have updated. And I have, as I had been meaning to for a while, gone back to the beginning and reread the story.

And having reread the story I have to agree with your comment that we had not yet seen the extent of his beastliness - he truly hates himself so much that again and again he strikes at the one thing that can save him, just to make sure he is not saved.

After your latest update update I am wondering if even Khushi's endless reserve of love can redeem anything.

Well may be their love for each other can, but they will be forever marked by his repeated strikes not just on her and himself but on their nascent relationship, He will forever have to be beholden to her love, that is his punishment

I have read so many redemption stories, and such fabulous ones, but yours Aria, really brought me to tears.

Thank you for giving us a strong Payal. So much injustice was done ot all the characters in the show.

And now please update soon, I need to know how the inevitable will pan out!

Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Fantastic and brilliant update, written perfectly and exceptionally well.

Wow the letter Khushi left Arnav was quite sad but touching, I'm glad she left and she had explained the reason why, awww she even left him her stars.

Why is Anjali being so mysterious, she probably knew about Shyam and Khushi and is not telling Arnav the full truth. But it was sad when Arnav said she is my wife and Anjali goes you should have treated her like one then.

The flash back was so sad when Payal explained how Buaji had thrown Khushi out of the house and told her she was an orphan. I can't believe even then Arnav did not feel guilty he was still shouting at her.

So finally when he had left for London on his return he had realised that khushi was innocent, but his realisation had come to late as khushi had left by then.

Awww he had taken her diary the one that said 100 ways to annoy lard governor, will we get to read whether he read the diary or not.

Finally khushi contacted Payal and Arnav has received a letter, is it from khushi.

Eager to read more, please continue soon.

Thanks for the PM xx

Hi there,

You have summed it up pretty well. One thing is certain, its not just Arnav who needs repenting, in their own ways and varying degrees everyone owes that to Khushi...will they is another thing? But with everything that has happened, will Khushi remain the same and forgive them? Does she have it in her? Let's see if love can do that... and to gather this broken family back together.

Thanks for a wonderful comment . I will update exactly a week from this last update ;)

cheers,

Aria

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: zariya123
update after a long time

well written

especially last part is awesome

Late by a month!!😆

Thank you for commenting Zariya :)

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: laksh65
awesome update loved it.
the letter of khushi was so touching, loved the way anjali gave arnav a piece of mind.
cont soon.

Glad you liked it. Yes, Arnav is getting it back from all the women in his life. Poor thing, I guess Newton's words playing out now...very action has an equal and opposite reaction. Its Arnav's turn to take the blows now😆

Next update, real soon!

Thank you for your comment.

cheers,

Aria