Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Are you going to end every chapter with a suspense letter?!!! 😡 😃

Loved the update. There was a quiet dignity to Khushi's letter...no desperation and no sense of feeling sorry for herself. For all the bravado in Khushi's character, I love that quiet dignity.

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Anuradha

@lovebarun...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Hi, this story has so much potential. great update..

write regularly, thanks

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Awesome update.I really felt the pain and angst in Arnav and Khushi's relationship. I just have a request...please have a happy ending because Arnav and Khushi should be together...hamesha 😊

Thanks for the PM 😛

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Awsum update...

Emotinal really feel bad for both of them ...

Is that khushii who send letter to him??

Pls continue soon

Thanks for pm

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serendipitylove

@serendipitylove

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

First of all let me say...Ur writing is truly astounding! Ur way with words, the descriptions and the intensity woven into each sentence is amazing!! I only wish u update more often...coz at this juncture u have us hanging to the edge of our seats waiting for the next scene to unfold...and arnav n khushi haven't even met yet! I'm waiting for Arnav to pay for his sins...

He realized losing her was not the worst that had happened; things got progressively worse with every single blow after that.
Really...to think of her...young, newly divorced, no money no family...Where did she go? He broke her completely didn't he? The more he realizes the repercussions of his actions..the worse they become.. He deserves to wallow in guilt...he deserves to suffer...

he knew there was something very odd about her behavior
Why does Anjali seem odd to me? She herself says that Khushi deserves a second chance away from arnav...I'm guessing Anjali knows where she is and gave her the money to join culinary school and do whatever she wants with her life now..thats the least she can do for the innocent woman they've all wronged so much

She is my wife" he shot back at her. I loved that!! There we go back to the possessive arnav who gets what he wants at any cost! I would love to see more of him... Arnav wanted to make amends and he didn't really want to get out of the sham marriage...and the ungaurded moments few and far convinced him that she isn't an actress...She's sincere... Well finally all MUs are cleared...now what happens when they meet? and how will they meet?

one of them did not have a return address. Is that a letter from khushi now? But why would she contact him? Pls dont make her forgive him and accept him with open arms so soon...he's gotta redeem himself first!!

Thanks for the PM...please please please please update soon!!!!! This is like a cliffhanger!

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zyanah

@zyanah

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

You know many people often complain about slow pace of the story but I am really comfortable with it.

But sweetheart the speed at which you are updating its going to take centuries to complete the story.

Coming to the update it was truly a bang. Anjali finally behaved like real woman by helping her to set free.and I know its your story and I am not supposed to interfere but please don't make Khushi walts back in Arnav's ready arms just like that.

I am really looking forward to a actual winnig back and letting go track.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Fantastic and brilliant update, written perfectly and exceptionally well.

Wow the letter Khushi left Arnav was quite sad but touching, I'm glad she left and she had explained the reason why, awww she even left him her stars.

Why is Anjali being so mysterious, she probably knew about Shyam and Khushi and is not telling Arnav the full truth. But it was sad when Arnav said she is my wife and Anjali goes you should have treated her like one then.

The flash back was so sad when Payal explained how Buaji had thrown Khushi out of the house and told her she was an orphan. I can't believe even then Arnav did not feel guilty he was still shouting at her.

So finally when he had left for London on his return he had realised that khushi was innocent, but his realisation had come to late as khushi had left by then.

Awww he had taken her diary the one that said 100 ways to annoy lard governor, will we get to read whether he read the diary or not.

Finally khushi contacted Payal and Arnav has received a letter, is it from khushi.

Eager to read more, please continue soon.

Thanks for the PM xx