Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Great update...

I wonder What's in the letter??

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ag0502

@ag0502

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

i been waiting too long for the update

and now i have to wait for the letter

please update soon

thank you for an awesome update

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nee

@march2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

I loved it aria...the mystery and the flashback its just fantastic...please do pm

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harsha

@harsha..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Read all the parts together . Loved it !!

I love Payal in this story.She is strong and determined.The way she talks to Arnav is a glimpse of her loyalty towards her sister.She is repenting for not taking Khushi's side.

Update soon !! I want to know waht is in the parcel.

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Venicestar88

@Venicestar88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

I'm a teeny tiny bit confused! Why does he think she still loves Shyam? Is it just Arnav being pig headed? But overall I really liked it... Now tell us soon what's in that envelope?? Pretty please? Thanks for the pm :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: kukku095
nice dr

thnx a lot 4 the pm

Thank you for your comment :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: tanu3579
wow... :) waiting...

Thank you for your comment :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: AneesahJabeen
What a cliffhanger?! :O
Arnav still loves khushi but shes left
He still believes theyre together
Confusing

But cnt wait to read mre xD

Arnav attracted to Khushi and in denial! Nothing new in that is it? But obviously, he still says they are married for whatever reason! But Khushi has left him... hopefully things will clear out in the next few updates. Thank you for your comment AJ.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: saucechips
Oh you had me completely in awe of your writing. I was itching to read a good repentance track since we all know how it remained a dream unfulfilled in the actual show.

Your way of describing emotions is so vivid and what I absolutely adored was how you made Payal someone who could mirror an actual sister's emotions in the case we have at hand.

At the cost of repeating myself, your writing totally has me gripped and I can only be happy that my long search for a good repentance track FF, didn't turn out to be futile.

Surely waiting for your coming updates anxiously.

Thank you for your encouragement SC. It's always a pleasure to come across new readers and their comments :) I agree with you, a good repentance track remained a dream unfulfilled. And to think that was a major part of the story line just scrapped like that! It was unfortunate for the viewers!

I just wanted to explore one of the ways that could have played out with a strong and resolute Khushi who does not run around ASR trying to prove things... and goes out there and tries to do something for herself for a change. Let's see how far this goes...

Hope to see you around!

cheers,

Aria