Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

OMG I just read through this and it is FABULOUS!!!

Great detailing, wonderful portrayal of emotions and awesome story line...

Please do continue soon!!

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

I like it,more so because its drastically different from other after hate marriage ff's.
Arnavs character is edgier..too many questions are sailing in my mind..guess i m very eager how you'll reveal them..a great effort u've put in..thank you for writing this..

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Woww nice ff just read first two parts

Loved them

Continue soon

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samarablog

@samarablog

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Loved the end!
It was such a good read!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: casker
I am really confused. Arnav still believes Kushi is in love with Shyam. But Anjali and Shyam are divorced. Payal knows why Arnav married Kushi and she blames herself for it. Kushi left after the 6 months contract. Anjali is not angry with Kushi. Everyone in Shantivan knows about Kushi and Shyam and Arhi's 6 month contract. if Arnav still believes Kushi is not innocent why did Anali and Shyam divorced or Arnav forced Shyam to do that. 😕

Hey there Casker! Yes, confusion! I see... lets see. Actually, you've got most of it spot on, I'd say. No scope of confusion there😉 And the rest that doesn't make sense yet, some of it has been deliberately written in like that, some of it, will be revealed to you as the story proceeds, hopefully, you'll be able to peel a layer of confusion away with every update, and it should all come together by the end! Hope that helped :)

Thank you for your comment.

Aria

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Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: truptscool
Nice...
Loved it!!!

Thank you for your comment!

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aura9

@aura9

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Waiting for the contents of the envelope to be revealed. I think this story is gonna have a lot of parallel leads. For now I love the feisty Payal, insane Arnav and the headstrong Khushi.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: soaringskies
oh mie...that was a deadly cliffhanger...😲😲😲 the beggining of the update is written beautifully aria...!!! plz update soonish...!!😃😃

Thank you Soaringskies. Have I told you before that I love your username :)

Will update at the usual time, either this weekend or next.

Cheers!

Aria