Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

nice dr

thnx a lot 4 the pm

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AneesahJabeen

@AneesahJabeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

What a cliffhanger?! :O
Arnav still loves khushi but shes left
He still believes theyre together
Confusing

But cnt wait to read mre xD

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saucechips

@saucechips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Oh you had me completely in awe of your writing. I was itching to read a good repentance track since we all know how it remained a dream unfulfilled in the actual show.

Your way of describing emotions is so vivid and what I absolutely adored was how you made Payal someone who could mirror an actual sister's emotions in the case we have at hand.

At the cost of repeating myself, your writing totally has me gripped and I can only be happy that my long search for a good repentance track FF, didn't turn out to be futile.

Surely waiting for your coming updates anxiously.

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sakthi25

@sakthi25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Pretty much of a nice shantivan atmosphere...
Envelope at the end was such a cliffhanger...

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Izadora

@izzy0502

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

very nice update..

great writing

continue soon

ty for the pm

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: saara76
envelope 😳 waiting for next

Not looking forward to the contents of the envelope, are we?😆

Will update soon, hopefully!

Thank you for your comments :)

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inajnar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Oh My ...Anjali knew something all these 3.5 years and didn't tell him...

Whattay place to end the update ...😛

Waiting waiting ...

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

What??!!! NOoo!! What did she leave him??!!! Cliffhangers are the bane of my life!!!

Now I'm going to have to spend day after day stalking this story for the next update...just when I was getting good at not obsessing!

Brilliant chapter. I love the subtlety.