Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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aveeshakiran

@aveeshakiran

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

nice concept...loved your story...plzz continue

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penguin143

@penguin143

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Anjali is really confusing me...😕.She want Lavanya n Arnav 2gthr.?
Arnav is still not aware of the truth..?
And then the envelope..!!

Waiting 4 d next part..!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: aura9
Waiting for the contents of the envelope to be revealed. I think this story is gonna have a lot of parallel leads. For now I love the feisty Payal, insane Arnav and the headstrong Khushi.

I like the sound of the "headstrong" Khushi :)

Thank you for your comment Aura, will update soon!

cheers,

Aria

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Samyxx
Great update...

I wonder What's in the letter??

Thank you Samyxx.

More on the letter in the next update :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: ag0502
i been waiting too long for the update
and now i have to wait for the letter
please update soon
thank you for an awesome update

Thank you for your comment AG! Will update soon.

Aria

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Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: march2011
I loved it aria...the mystery and the flashback its just fantastic...please do pm

Thank you March, glad to know you enjoyed reading it :)

Aria

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reshmimohan

@reshmimohan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Just read all the chapters.

Lovely.

Loved it!😊

What's in the envelope?

Awesome.

Waiting for the update.

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zyanah

@zyanah

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

thank you so much for the amazing update

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: harsha577
Read all the parts together . Loved it !!
I love Payal in this story.She is strong and determined.The way she talks to Arnav is a glimpse of her loyalty towards her sister.She is repenting for not taking Khushi's side.

Update soon !! I want to know waht is in the parcel.

Thank you for your comment Harsha. Yes we all appreciate Payal's stand don't we? Someone who finally stands up for her sister.

Will update soon :)

Aria