JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF]

Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

On your NOW ..I am trying to understand Shyla's state...why is she so weak and thin??ANd why can't she speak?? What happened in the past??
Naren and Ridhi please come soon ...because Adrit needs you...and so am I. I need a speedy recovery...
Shyla Get well soon dear.

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

Originally posted by: jayvenk
Rimi darling thank u sweetheart. love ur poetic touch to my writing . love u .. please do read the now. Hoping u all like it

Jaya I have come second...😭😭Next time please PM me before your update...Please please please.😭

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priyanka tripathi

@mandisapari6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

Really great... u r very nice.

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#684

Main tumhe Yaad nahi yakeen nahi aata mujhe...
Itna bebash kabhi nahin dekha tumhe.
Nahi seh sakta bebashi tumhari...
Mujhe yaad hai woh sare wadein humari.
Ek duje ka denge sath...humesha..
Har sukh aur dukh mein...
Har bude aur achche pal mein. phir kaise chhodoon-
Inn bina yaad ki andherein mein tumhe??
Katra rahi tadap rahi ho tum...
Par dard ka ehsaas ho raha hai mujhe..

Nahi seh sakta aur dard ab...na tumhara na mera...

Kyunki Apne se zyada pyar karta hoon main tumhe.

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Arijit

@Arijit007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#685

I got tears in my eyes after reading it. It was realy good.

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Gopiii

@Gopiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

Such a wonderful writeup this is. Touching your heart strings and making you fall in love with this beautiful jodi. Adi wanted to console and care for his LA it must be so tough for him to see her like this.

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Anushya

@Anushya93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#687

it was an awesome update👏👏

its heart wrenching to see both Shyla and Adrit in this condition..Adrit's pain on seeing her in this condition was clear.he remembered every small thing like her eating Aloo just becoz he liked it and her pouting at him .Oh poor how he managed this 2 years without his Shyla.can't wait for the next update..

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