JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF]

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Diala

@Diala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#691

Jaya, you r inspiring a lot of poets here. We r all so into the story !

There r so many self publishing web sites around. You shd. try to do that.
Seriously,do they still make guys like Adrit? No wonder he is in so much demand...

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Foram

@foram.

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#692

Oh, m crying nw. Cant see both in pain. I cant even imagine how adrit was able to live without her. Naren-riddhi crying. And what made shyla in dis condition. How adrit must be feeling seeing his La like dis. But why he was hiding. I thought as soon as she wil wake up he wil run towards her. Waiting for next

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@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#693

jaya your Shyla (sona) is saying she wants Adrit?/ le le na..tere samne hi to khada rehta hai dinbhar

Edited by Kadamvari - 12 years ago

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Tinacool

@Tinacool

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#694

All the updates are sooper Jaya. The last one was sentimental. Adrit is a sweetheart. Feels sad for both these lovelies for fate had something drastic in store before they could become one.

Jaya also a big congrats to you for the super success of your first FF. The target audiences have found it and loved it too. So happy for you. 😊

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Diala

@Diala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#695

Jaya, saw ur question to ur readers on Now vs Then in Sona's AT thread... Thought will give my opinion here...I feel that as the author and narrator you r in the best position to take the story forward. It might depend on how long it takes to get from Then to Now and the ground you need to cover in between.

I do have a very detailed description of the wedding in my wish list 😳 ! Even in Dkdm the wedding sequence was the most romantic. I am sure you can top that !

Just my take. But as I said u r the boss !!

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#696

Originally posted by: speedgal
Jaya, saw ur question to ur readers on Now vs Then in Sona's AT thread... Thought will give my opinion here...I feel that as the author and narrator you r in the best position to take the story forward. It might depend on how long it takes to get from Then to Now and the ground you need to cover in between.

I do have a very detailed description of the wedding in my wish list 😳 ! Even in Dkdm the wedding sequence was the most romantic. I am sure you can top that !

Just my take. But as I said u r the boss !!

thank u sweety.. i will follow.. my heart I think...why wait till the wedding I will try and give a detailed engagement too 😃

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Sindhu_us

@Sindhu_us

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#697

I liked the engagement ring idea by both Adi and Shy. They are a very sweet romantic couple. He teasing her her is so sweet. I love their romance which is so very pure. The now part and the emotional turmoil of Adi is heart wrenching. Your updates are mind blowing.

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sindhupv

@sindhupv

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#698

She and he both seem to have adjusted well and accepted each other and their preferences in life. So that is what they say true love is all about. Does an age difference really make a difference when two hearts beat as one. These two prove that age is just a number after all. Sure they must have difference in ideology but than that is the fun and like they say opposites attract more. It is sad what happened to these lovers but very optimistic about where it will lead to. 😊

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sweetsandhya

@sweetsandhya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#699

Thanks Jay for the updates of our dearest couple Adla. I felt so sad reading the last one. I can't bear to see either of them sad. They are very close to my heart.

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Diala

@Diala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#700

Originally posted by: Kadamvari
jaya your Shyla (sona) is saying she wants Adrit?/ le le na..tere samne hi to khada rehta hai dinbhar

😃 .

Isle Peale ki woh aise kuch soche...khabi lecture shuru ho jatha hai, or else CVs too start thinking bechara dinbhar khada hai, chalo use leg massage ke scene de dethe hain...hamare Adrit ke sath aise jhanjhat nahi haina?

Jaya, next time she asks for Adrit, you should simply gift wrap him and send as parcel to her 😳