JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 71

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Posted: 12 years ago
lolz gift wrap him !!!!!!!! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Oonagh

She and he both seem to have adjusted well and accepted each other and their preferences in life. So that is what they say true love is all about. Does an age difference really make a difference when two hearts beat as one. These two prove that age is just a number after all. Sure they must have difference in ideology but than that is the fun and like they say opposites attract more. It is sad what happened to these lovers but very optimistic about where it will lead to. 😊


Exactly Oonagh... Thanks a lot for writing these lines 😊🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: speedgal


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Isle Peale ki woh aise kuch soche...khabi lecture shuru ho jatha hai, or else CVs too start thinking bechara dinbhar khada hai, chalo use leg massage ke scene de dethe hain...hamare Adrit ke sath aise jhanjhat nahi haina?

Jaya, next time she asks for Adrit, you should simply gift wrap him and send as parcel to her 😳



but parcel karke bheje kya..jaya k pass to sirf pic hai😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUNDAY READS.
TWO BODIES, ONE SOUL


Adrit had his hand around her shoulders as she motored the boat back to the docks.

He felt a pleasant sensation as her head bobbed against him as she sneezed, sneezed some more and sniffed..

She could feel him grinning even without looking.

Dont you grin achchooo... Dr. A, It is all be... achchooo.. because achchooo of you she grumbled.

Her nose had gone a lovely shade of red... she sniffed..

A pristine white handkerchief was put on her nose.

Blow he commanded..

Ewww Dr. A, I don't.... and sneezed into it... Now I will have to keep this, taking the hanky from him and blowing into it.

He moved to stand behind her, her hair blew gently into his face.

She moved back to rest against him.

Words were no longer needed.

The silence was filled with love.

...

Tarun and Vishak waved as they neared.

Brats, all the three of you, lifting her head back wards, her neck arched to look at him.

He could see the tip of her red nose, her eyelashes long and black fluttered.

Cupping her neck, he placed a kiss on her forehead.

She sneezed, he frowned, he did not want her falling sick.

Vishak secured the boat when they reached.

Adrit got off and lifted her out.

Her cheeks were flushed, eyes watery and nose now a bright shade of red.

Common angel, we better get you home quick, he pulled the jacket tighter around her.

Naren's grey fortuner stopped as they walked on to the road.

What did you do to her demanded Ridhi as she stepped out??

Last time she was sobbing and this time .... Awww come here Shylu, Naren held her against him ..what did this big bad Dr.A do to you, he asked teasingly.

She launched into details in between a series of sneezes.

But Satya will take good care,

Satya is my class mate, Tarun was whispering to him.

Really!!

I am sure Satya will take good care of you Doll said Adrit as he grabbed her back, she stood with her hand around his waist.

We should get going Adi, may be we should just take her along,

Vishak, Tarun, take you Di back safely, don't want the aunts getting suspicious, Ridhi was instructing the boys.

Naren was getting back into the car, Adi, get in, we have a really long drive.

Adrit moved towards the car, her small hand tightened around his and he felt her other hand clutching his shirt as if restraining. He groaned inwardly.

Her lips were smiling, but her eyes said something else.

He gently rubbed her hand with his thumb, comfortingly.

He bent his head, I will be back soon pumpkin he said, his lips brushing her ears.

She sneezed, grey eyes watered.

He hugged her knowing they were tears. He hated leaving her.

He kissed her fingers as he settled inside the car.

Shylu, Adrit will be back so soon, you wont even have time to miss him darling, Ridhi comforted her.

She stood watching till the car turned the corner.

He felt tightness in his throat as she disappeared from view.


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
JAi... why dont you write novel and print and publish it 😛 They way you write is awesome... very good command over language... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

but parcel karke bheje kya..jaya k pass to sirf pic hai😉

Picture hi sahi...unless Jaya knows where to find him and package him..poor guy won't know what hit him and why... Anything for Sona ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am really addicted to Adrit and Shyla..what did u do to me jaya?? every night in my dream i feel AdLa...seriously kuch ho gaya hai mujhe😲
its a cute update
you know i refused many marriage proposal as the persons are 10-15 years elder to me ..but first time i am just loving this 10 years olde Dr.'s fatherly concern to his little, childish angel
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: speedgal


but parcel karke bheje kya..jaya k pass to sirf pic hai😉


Picture hi sahi...unless Jaya knows where to find him and package him..poor guy won't know what hit him and why... Anything for Sona ❤️


are but jisko sochke Adrit ko banaya gaya vo jaya ko kahase milega😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Have to make do with pictures now. Full makeup mien, she is not able to recognize, maybe with the picture she might start seeing the resemblance. However, that will only cover the looks plus dimple. Many more things have to be fixed,like instead of her feeding kheer, he has to start getting chocolates, make a proper bhavan for her, if not complete shrungar, at least comb her hair once in a while...long list.

Anyway, Kadamvari, that is Jaya's task. We r mere cheerleaders

Almost forgot...Jaya 👏 for the update. Love it!



Edited by speedgal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: speedgal

Have to make do with pictures now. Full makeup mien, she is not able to recognize, maybe with the picture she might start seeing the resemblance. However, that will only cover the looks plus dimple. Many more things have to be fixed,like instead of her feeding kheer, he has to start getting chocolates, make a proper bhavan for her, if not complete shrungar, at least comb her hair once in a while...long list.


Anyway, Kadamvari, that is Jaya's task. We r mere cheerleaders

Almost forgot...Jaya 👏 for the update. Love it!





😆😆..dimple hi nhi rahega to reh kya jayega

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