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Diala thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kya Sona jaanthi hai ki "Adrit" kon hai? For that matter does she know who La is?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: speedgal

Kya Sona jaanthi hai ki "Adrit" kon hai? For that matter does she know who La is?



well jaya ne usse keh diya k shyla sona hi hai..aur mohit is story ka hero hai..even mohit=sona k siggy to 1st page mein hi hai..there is no point of not knowing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaishree Sona has read your FF so happy for u and all Sonarikans😃. Congratulations and very nice romantic updates but because it is past tense makes me sad and a little afraid for what is going to come.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks jaishree for the romantic updates of Adla. Sona has loved it. So that is double happiness. 🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow super roamntic update on valentines.

and kya sona read your ff wen and wer??
m happy for you jaya,
tussi to cha gaye👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

HMMM... THINGS GET A LITTLE ... READ ON...

Shyla was looking at the calm sea for any sign of the Dolphins..

She climbed on to the edge to have a better look.

She tied her duppatta to her waist.

Adrit almost immediately knew what she was going to do.

La he called out, but in that split second of him calling and she hearing. She had already leaped into the deep waters of the sea.

Shyla heard his call just as she went into the waters.

Realization dawned.

TARUNNN and

She saw Vishak's come up from behind Adi

VISHAKKK'

I AM GOING TO KILL ALL OF THEM '.

She bobbed inside the water spluttering angrily.

Vishak grinned, Adrit tried not to.

He held his hand out to help her her into the boat.

Bhaiyya, ALL THE BEST whispered Vishak as he quickly leaped into Shyla's boat.

Vishak,No you wont, Don't you dare take my boat.

Byeee, he waved... as he started the motor, even as Shyla glared at him angrily.

He was gone in a few seconds, leaving a very cold, wet and disgruntled Shyla and one Happy, VERY HAPPY Dr.A.


She continued to swim in the water, ignoring him totally.

Common sweetheart, you will catch a cold.

Not talking to you Dr.A

You can sit inside the boat and not talk to Dr. A.

She stuck her tongue out at him.

He looked down at her in the water...

Ok then I am going to eat up the Gold round wala all by myself, he opened one as he spoke and made a show of eating it.

She almost gulped down a whole mouthful of sea water.

Dr.A.. stop teasing.

Teasing? He asked poker faced.

He was popping in the third one, when she held up her hand.

He pulled her up

She climbed in, and straight into him

She shivered as she dripped all over shirt.

I am still not talking to you, her voice shaking.

His fingers moved the wet hair from her face, catching a drop of water as it slid down her cheeks.

She looked up her lips slightly open, innocently inviting.

All his intentions went for a toss.

His lips came down to capture its softness.

He tasted salt as he held her lower lips between his, pulling her wet body closer to him.

She felt little tingles run down her spine.

His tongue brushed against just the tip of hers.

His kiss deepened..his fingers pressed the small of her back...

A shiver ran through her, her fingers grabbed his shirt..

He groaned , hugging her and cursing himself for losing control.

LA LA you drive me crazy my Little Princess.

She stood within his embrace trembling, not sure from cold or the kiss.

He quickly removed his denim jacket and pulled it around her.

You make do things, that I should not be doing, his words warm.

She was too shaken to say anything, instead she went on her tip toes and murmered I LOVE YOU Adi and bit down hard on his ear lobe.

Ouch ' you minx, momentarily letting go of her, which was enough for her to make an escape.

I thought you were on your way Dr. A, she was breathlessly asking him.

You think I would leave without meeting you?

She grinned a happy grin and nodded.

Come here, he ordered.

No, you still have that glint in your eyes.

Glint? making a puppy face at her, I will be good, trying on an innocent look.

La come here angel, his soft voice was melting her resistance.

The boat gently rocked, as she walked into his arms.

He pulled the jacket closer around her as the breeze blew, she rested her head on his shoulders, his hand spanned her tiny waist holding her against him. Her hair was curling as it dried, he twirled it between his fingers,

Have I told you how beautiful you eyes are?

They are beautiful because they are looking at you Adi, lifting his palm she placed her lips on it.

Have to get you into some dry clothes La, don't want you falling sick when I am not there.

She promptly sneezed.

She grinned.

Sneezed again.

Since you are going away, Papa will have to call Doctor Satya..

Satya, now who is that?

He is the one who used to come over before you. Very handsome and really good with ankles also.

You deserve a slap for that Princess..

Pulling his jacket together, she looked at him with her large lovely eyes which was all brimming with tears.

LA!!!! What...?I did not mean that' silly girl'.

Don't go . shaking her head.

LA, baby, lifting her into him, placing small kisses on her forehead. I will back soon.

Really soon?

Really really really soon.

Her finger curled around his rudraksh, she sniffed, you did not give me the round gold wala?

I have to compete with chocolates for you love?

She nodded, sniffed

Aatichhooo.



I am just spell bounded by you Jaya..what are you doing with me?
After reading this I am not with me...😭

Don't go anywhere Adi I need you.
In every second I miss you.
I love you this is very simple to say...
But how much I love you.
Its really very difficult for me to say.
Please don't go ...
Stay with me.
Or God please do something...
That this moment can be freezed.
Forever only for me.
Oh God...God of Love do something...
That I can stay in his arm, can feel his lips on mine...
Can stand along with him on this boat,
And everything will be fine.
God Please do something...
That this moment may freeze.
Forever only for me.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

VALENTINE SPECIAL [ FOR JHUM]

Adrit disconnected, looked towards Vishak and winked.

Hope Tarun is doing what he is supposed to be doing bhiayya.

Relax Vish, I am sure the she will be here soon Adi grinned cheekily.

The two of them sat back in the large boat and waited.

Adrit leaned back, so that he was not in view when she came along and smiled a satisfied smile.

Shyla was still dreaming. Di di' DIII'

Dolhins'. The dolphins Tarun was telling her breathlessly.

Taru, slow down baby, what of the Dolhins.

By now the old aunts and others had perked up their ears.

Something is wrong' they are behaving strangely.

He got a suspicious look from Shyla,

Who told you that?

Viji Di,,

Viji?

Satya told her!!

Don't know who told Satya, he said quickly before he was questioned.

Shylu better go and see what is happening, her mother called out. The aunts nodded, go dear, you understand them better than anyone else, .

Tarun was tugging at her hand, come fast Di.

Adrit had managed to get a boat which had enough decorations to keep them hidden from her view.

NOW

He had promised Meena he will be really careful.

He watched her from the shadows ,

His heart filled with sorrow.

Her boat came to a halt some distance away.

He watched her, his heart filled with happiness.


NOW

Sorrow, because he had thought he had lost her.

Grief because she was so alone in her pain.

You are my celebration La.

My very breath calls your name.


NOW

LA, each second of the last two years I had only you in each breath that i drew.

I want to lift you in my arms and tell the whole world that I LOVE YOU LA.

NOW

I want to gather you in my arms and say EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE ALRIGHT LA.



Oh Jaya I am in love with you as you have described the past and present together very well...
And I like to sing something from the behalf of Adrit now( Of course if you allow)
Jo tum na milti...
Hota he kya haar jane ko?
Jo tum na khoti...
Toh hota he kya dhund lane ko?
Meri Amanat thi tum.
Meri Mohabbat ho tum.
Tumhe kaise main bhulayoon.
Tere dhadkanon mein baskar.
Tere sanson mein reh rehkar...
Tumhe palpal main satayoon.
Kabhi yadon mein aayoon...
Kabhi khwabon mein ayoon.
Teri palkon ke sayein mein...
Aakar jhilmilayoon...
Main woh khushboo nahi...
Jo hawa mein kho jayoon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
NOW
Point to the readers: Shyla uses sign language to communicate.

Adrit sat next to her and watched as she slept, for a very long time.

He needed answers, but they had to wait.

The doctor in him took over. He had move from the room before she got up. The attendant came in as soon as he rang the bell.

Be near her, his voice firm, let me know as soon as she awakens.

He walked slowly back to his room .

Sinking into the chair, he covered his face with his hands. 2 years'.2 years he had grieved silently, never allowing anyone to see his sorrow, not even Naren and Ridhi knew about his suffering.

Her laughter, her chatter, her giggles, her questions, Dr. A'.. she would start'.., her constantly dipping into his dimple, can I borrow those' her words echoed inside his mind'..

He opened his laptop.

The screen got flooded with Shyla.. he remembered every moment when the camera's shutter clicked.

My angel, princess,my darling La...

The tears flowed and flowed.

*******

Naren and Ridhi just sat holding each other.

How is it possible Naren, Ridhi asked him for the hundredth time.

Her eyes filled with fresh tears.

They looked at the picture Adi had sent, Shyla's face looked at them, except of the scar that marred, it was HER.

Shylu.. Naren and Ridhi both ran their fingers on the screen. Tears flowed '

Naren held her tightly, their tears mingled.

We need to be with him as quickly as possible Ridhi, don't know how is holding on.

******

Meena was in the store room, she quickly found the box labeled Shyla.

She looked in, the lord does work in mysterious ways, she told herself.

She took the box back to her room, she will have to show it to Dr. Adrit.

******

Shyla slowly awakened, the sun was already setting casting a golden shadow inside the room.

She lay still, she had slept for a long time, calming her mind.

She sat up, reaching for the glass of water beside the bed.

A frown formed on her forehead, as she tried to remember the day.

The doctor, she shut her eyes tightly trying to see, why did I call Meena?

Why was I not afraid of being with him?

She groaned inwardly, so many questions.. she did not want another headache.

Her stomach growled,

The attendant came running when she tried to get up from the bed.

Shyla Di please wait, Meena will be here soon.

She had already sent word to Meena and The Doctor that Shyla was awake.

Meena came in smiling, hungry dear she asked cheerfully,

Made your favorite, Paneer and Aloo.

Adrit stood in the shadows, watching through the door which Meena had deliberately left wide open.

Your going to walk to the table, and NO arguments, watching Shyla shaking her head in a NO.

Shyla, I can hear you stomach growling, get up.

His heart squeezed as she made the familiar pouting face.

She gingerly put her feet down, and taking support of the bed post she stood.

His fingers clenched when he saw how thin she had become.

She dragged her feet a few inches, shaking her head she sank back on the bed, her head buried in her hands.

He wanted to rush inside and gather her in his arms.

Shyla you do want those chocolates after dinner na?

Yes she nodded.

Then you better hurry, Meena gently coaxed her.

The table was only a few steps away.

She got up again.

She made slow progress, but she made it, sinking into the chair.

She reached for the Aloo as soon as she sat down.

He remembered all the Aloo she ate, just because he loved them.


After a couple of spoonful, she put down the spoon and looked at the chocolates.

NO you are not getting them till the plate is empty.

He remembered ...Shyla sweetheart, you are not touching the chocolates till the dinner is eaten!!! She looked at him grumpily. You are so bad. He smiled'.


Midway through the meal she stopped,

Why did I sleep for so long, she asked in sign language..

Meena looked towards Adrit, who was hearing the conversation.

You don't remember Shylu?

Frowning and thoughtful she looked through the open door seeing unseeingly towards Adrit.

Standing in shadows he felt she was looking at him, My angel, he murmured,, ... it took him all the strength in his body to stop himself from walking to his LA.


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh ohh i can't omment much my breath has been stopped to get answer for my questions
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rimi darling thank u sweetheart. love ur poetic touch to my writing . love u .. please do read the now. Hoping u all like it

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