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Posted: 12 years ago
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ART ...PLEASE PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE

IT IS DARK I GUESS

JUST CURIOUS

THANKS






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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting concept ..plz do pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Precap:

She stopped the scooter and moved towards her favorite place. She entered the Sheesh Mahal's rose garden.

Kithni acchi kushboo hai.. she though as she moved towards the garden. She had always come here when she felt alone and missed her parents, to see the stars at night sitting between the rose bushes. (such a nice smell)

She was about to reach the garden when she was forcefully turned around, and then she saw his face. She recognized him… it was him, the man who dropped her home and left without a bye.

Aap yahan…? she asked (you here?)

Actually, mujhe tumse yeh baat puchnithi… this is trespassing do you know he asked her irritated (I have to ask you this)

Wo hum… before she said anything, he stopped her asking tum iss waqt tum yahan.. akele ayeho kya he asked looking here and there searching for someone.(actually i… )(you here, at this time.. are you alone?)

Damit, are you following me? He growled… I get it.. big car.. costly clothes.. so tumne socha hoga apna luck try karoo.. right? (you'd have thought I'd try my luck)

Par me tho lucky nahi hun she whispered referring to the small dog near her house…. (but I'm not lucky)

What...?

Suniye sabhji.. hume appse thanyavad kahana tha… aapne hume ghar choda na.. she said rubbing her hand….(listen sir) (I have to thanku for dropping me home..)

No you listen,,

At the same time he saw her rubbing something, he saw it and recognized it as a nail mark and a bruise may be she likes it rough. It suits me though.. its high time I got her out of my head.. he thought

good you are here… chalo for tonight he said dragging her towards the house…

Kushi dint understand anything… then it struck her… yeh tho mujhse bath karne lejarahai hai … han han.. bade log thodi road pe bath karthe honge.. issliye wo andhar le jarahe hai… thinking she stopped walking… and said ek minute rukiye sabji…. Hume ander nahi ana… hume bhahar hi rehena hai.. (he is taking me inside to talk… yes yes.. ofcourse big people don't talk on roads that is why he is taking me inside the house.)(one min stop sir… I don't want to come inside. I want to stay outside only)

What! are you crazy? Bhahar???(outside?)

Aap na… suniye tho… yahan hi…chand sitaro ke neeche, gulabh ki khushboo me samete, maza ayega.. she said cheerfully… (you just listen.. here oly.. under the moon and stars.. surrounded by smell of roses it'll be delightful.)

Unbelievable he said shaking his head. Not that he was bothered… but he never expected it coming from someone living in this small city.

Tum yahan karna chahte ho? Bhahar.. sab ke samne?(you want to do it outside.. infront of everyone?)

Par yahan to koi nahi hai? Aap bohot waqt lagate ho…mujhe ghar bhi jana hai.. saying she held his hand (but there is no one here? You take too much time.. I have to go home also..)

chaliye yahan saying she walked him towards a clear place near the garden, she sat down baitiye she said and pulled him… losing his balance he Arnav fell on top of her…(come here..)(Sit down)(pls just imagine this in the garden.. sorry dint get accurate pic)

Jasmine he whispered

… Letting the mild smell…

Intoxicate his senses….

This is the precap….so what do you get from the precap…. Arnav and kushi are thinking something differently… so will have to see what happens in detail… will update on fri or sat… like it and do comment. If you have any doubt pls ask..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Interesting precap. Please update the next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Part 1
Like it.still confused about smthng bt will wait for story to get unfoald. (i hate this buaji 😡)
luv precap looking forward to read it.thnx for pm
Edited by Drishuluv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting precap.. Both are thinking different things..
Waiting for the update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very exciting precap..plz update d nxt part sooner..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ch 1 ..interesting start ..hate this buaji ..and what she will get khushi married to that shyam ...well written waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the precap is really funny 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz update soon ... its so long since u updated 😲

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