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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

I THINK THE AGE FACTOR IS FINE

BUT TONE DOWN THE GORY PARTS

LEAVE IT TO THE READERS IMAGINATION

AND DONT STOP WRITING

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

I did't like her getting married to that devil.

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: punam2712
I THINK THE AGE FACTOR IS FINE
BUT TONE DOWN THE GORY PARTS
LEAVE IT TO THE READERS IMAGINATION
AND DONT STOP WRITING

Yap was planning to do so yaar...thanks for the reply

Edited by ar_art - 12 years ago

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi
I did't like her getting married to that devil.

Defo yaar... But dont worry she's not gonna stay wit him for long... Moreover 17 is not legal marriage age... Oops tat was a slip 😉

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Pavin

@..Sugar_ArHi..

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Plz pm next part to me
n plz dont make tht SR happen
its already too much by shyam n khushi marriage
plz make her only for arnav
n thanks to penny he introduce tz fiction to me
thanks

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: arnavkhushi1991
Plz pm next part to me
n plz dont make tht SR happen
its already too much by shyam n khushi marriage
plz make her only for arnav
n thanks to penny he introduce tz fiction to me
thanks

its gonna be shyam worthy Sr yaar... dont worry I am gonna give u something to hate him even more

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MaankigopiMadhu

@MaankigopiMadhu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

OMG .. The SCORPION married to Khushi 😡 My head / heart hurts knowing this .. and the SR will be done too 🤢 Want to know more .. PLEASE PM ME .. :D

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

am scared to read more

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -memorable-
am scared to read more

😈 atlast the title worked... 🤣 more is gonna happen in the coming few updates... Do read and tell me how it was...

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: MaankigopiMadhu
OMG .. The SCORPION married to Khushi😡 My head / heart hurts knowing this .. and the SR will be done too🤢 Want to know more .. PLEASE PM ME .. :D

As I said the Sr is gonna depict the true nature of shyam yaar...hope to give update soon...