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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you LaxshaLOVEArshi for the lovely banner... 😃 i really like it...⭐️👏

Prologue:



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The silent beast



Every muscle in my body slowly begins to tense. I feel the dark side of me creeping up.
They don't know but deep inside of me, the anger begins to well.
Once the spout has been opened, it cannot be closed with soothing words.
I close my eyes and breathe deeply but I can hear his voice in my ear.
He tells me lies that my heart knows aren't true but my mind doesn't seem to care about the truth.
I clench my jaw and bite back the hatred that has grown so large.
But all the biting back doesn't suffice and I feel the remaining sanity I have snap.
I explode and hurt people I don't mean to hurt, say things I don't mean to say.
But the damage has been done and as the beast creeps back into the recesses of my mind, the anger of those around me grows and the endless cycle begins
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Written by nameless_shadow





Arnav Singh Raizada stood slightly resting his back on the pillar facing the terrace in his penthouse. Why is she not moving? It has been half an hour'. Damit I hope she is not dead'. She has to suffer more than this' he thought looking at a crumbled naked figure of a woman, who lay in a fetal position in the garden.





The sky screamed and cried looking at the suffering of a mere 17yrear old'.. he placed his glass of whiskey on the table and moved out, towards the girl. Damn the rain'. He grumbled, annoyed.



Arnav and Khushi in Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon



He picked the girl up in a not so gentle way and placed her on the bed. He walked towards the mini bar and poured a glass of brandy. He came near her and held her head through her hair and forcefully drowned the brandy into her system. The smell and taste of the liquid made the girl vomit on him. Smack' he hit her. His eyes glared at her. he then pushed her down and left to clean himself.



He went into the washroom removed the clothes and took a bath. When he came out he saw her slightly getting up. Wash my clothes he ordered giving her a disgusted look and left from there.



The girl was numb all over. Tears dried up, her throat hurt apart from the other body parts. She tried getting up but fell down. She somehow crawled to the bathroom to comply his orders.



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<p>Hi'' I'll b maintaining the main ploy of the show in this ff. You get to c Arnav and Shyam in the meanest form. This ff will be dark. It'll be a bit sadistic too so pls be mad at me. Pls comment as I need them to know wat I'm doing. Be frank... I can defo handle criticism. If you don't do it then you'd have to bear with my story for a long time. So kindly comment and like it.

One more thing I need someone to make a banner for this if possible. Or you can teach me how to make one as I have no idea.
For pm pls say so in your comment and I'll buddy you myself. I'll update this ff once week and precap will be given in-between.

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Character Sketch:





1. Arnav Singh Raizada will be same as the show. Monstrosity is the way of life for this 27 year old devil. This untamed and uncontrollable feeling has deep roots from his past. Doesn't believe in anyone except himself and family. Loved his di and jeju.



2. Shyam Manohar Jha, same as the show. Monstrosity is in his blood. This is driven by his unquenchable lust for power, money and women. He is a 30 year old, cunning and manipulative person. He loves only himself.



3. Akash Singh Raizada same as the show. Calm but calculative person. He might not understand a lot about business but is a pro in assessing people. He loves his family. This 26 year old man knows what is right and how to do it.



4. Mama ji and Mami ji are same as the show. Here mama being the wise and calm man and mami, a bit childish can be much matured when needed.



5. Nani is as the show. Her eyes never fail to judge a person.



6. Kushi Kumari Gupta a very naive 17 year old girl. She lives with her mama ji (bauji). She trusts everyone easily. Very obedient person. She is a caring and forgiving girl who loves her family a lot.



7. Anjali Manohar Jha same as the show, but a bit stronger. Her life revolves around her chote and her husband. This 29 year old lady is a calm and caring soul.



8. Payal Gupta/Raizada is same as the show. She loves her sister a lot. Prays for her happiness. She is not happy with kushi's marriage. This 21 year old lady is what people call beauty in and out.



9. Bauji and Amma same as the show. But here Amma (Garima) loves payal more. She feels kushi is bad for the family so is more preferential towards Payal.



10. Buaji same as the show. But here she hates Kushi as she resembles her sister she'd been jealous of. She tries to put down kushi every time. This lady has poisoned Garima's mind and successfully married off Kushi to a guy 13 yrs elder to her.





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This is the cs. Hope you like it. Will give update soon. </font>

Ps: there are lot of power cuts so I try to give updates through my phone, their might be some mistakes which I might edit later also. Pls excuse me for this. I'll try my best to avoid this.






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Posted: 12 years ago
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i liked it but i have one doubt tht if khushi is married off to a guy who is 13 year older to her thn whats arnav's role in her life becoz arnav can't b tht man as he is 27 besides garima & buaji will not send her where payal is right?? i know to clear all this confusion i would have to wait & thts what i'm going to do now so plz do update sooon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SEEMS LIKE A DARK STORY
WOULD LIKE TO KNOW MORE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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stry it seems is very dark wid so much evilness..🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢.wud love to read something wich is so dark nd more closer to reality den some happily evr after..😊😊😊😊interesting prologue nd characterization..👍🏼but will be worried for khushi for being so naive nd innocent...😭😭plz continue soon.😊😊.loved dis stry nd it seems it goono give me "d ugly truth of d world"..👏👏👏👏👏plz continue soon/...w8n for d nxt update...😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept..
Do continue soon..
Please pm me when you update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The prologue is in the future. Approximately a week back from the prologue. I'll first write what happened before that event. The whole story starts in lucknow.

CHAPTER 1:

What are you saying jiji'.. wo tho bacchi hai. Aur babuwa tho usse terah(13) sal bade hai. Said a perturbed Garima.(she is just a child. and he is 13 years older than her)

Tho kya kare us panouti ko hamari payaliya ki zindagi bigadne de. Moreover babuwa accha ladka hai. Pada lika hai aur use pyaar kartha hai.(then what to do, she is a curse to out payaliya's life moreover he is a nice boy, well educated and also loves her)

Par jiji'' kya wo manjayegi? Use tho insaab ke bare me pata bhi nahi he.(but jiji will she agree? she doesnt know anything abt these things?)

Deko Garima, me uske dushman nahi hu. Bitwa accha hai aur matured bhi dikhta hai. Wo usko sambal lega. Tum ha boldo'. Use manvana mera kam hai.(see garima i'm not her enemy. the boy is much matured he'll be able to handle her nicely. you just say yessi'll handle her)

Tek hai jiji. Aap tho janthe hai use. Wo dono kal shyam ko ayengi. Zoha ki shaddi se. aap pls use aram se bath kejiye.(ok jiji. you know better. those two will come tomorrow evening . it is Zoha's wedding. you pls talk to her camly)

Tum fikar math karo me sambhal longi.. buaji smiled slyly on her success.(you dont worry i'll handle it)

Mean while in a havali :

Arre Bitiya dyan see. Yahan sirf ladkiya rehsakte hai. Said an old woman(oh child be carefull. here only ladies are allowed)

Ji khaki ji'.. hum hai na'. sab dekbal karlenge. Said a cheerful kushi(yes aunty.. will handle everything)

Arre aaliya ji agayi kushi' challa' sangeet suru kare'..yelled payal(hey aaliya ji has reached, come we'll start the program)

Suddenly all was quiet and the lights blinked on the stage. Music started and women started dancing. Kushi and payal were enjoying all this. Kushi loved to dance. And danced from where she was sitting.

Just then aaliya pulled kushi on stage and started dancing. Kushi complied and danced along having fun. This was watched by someone standing on the terrace.

Aman I'll be there tomorrow morning. Yes'. Suddenly his eyes turned to see a beautiful girl dance on stage. His eyes were stuck on her. She graceful dance, her smiling face and sparkling eyes were beckoning him. He felt himself aroused looking at her move sensuously.

Arre sahabji aapko wo pasandh ayi kya?? Asked a man's voice. (sir did you like her?)

Hmmm'. He replied absentmindedly

Milva dun sahabji? He asked Arnav enthusiastically(shall i introduce you sir?)

Wo kaun hai? (who is she)

Sahabji wo pass hi ke khote se hai' aap bolenge tho aaj milvadonga' kal wo shehar chod ke jarahi hai.(sir she is from the near by s**t house. if you agree i'll introduce her today as she'd be leaving the city tomorrow)

Before he could say anything he got a cal. Han di' I'll be there by morning. Where is jeju di?

Chote wo kam se gaye hai. He said he'll come after 5 days.(he has gone out for work)

Hmm.. ok di bye.

Bye chote apna tab lena timese'.. saying she cut the call.(take you medicine in time)

Arnav turned his attention to the pimp who stood near him. Sahabji kya khyal hai??(sir what do you say?)

Not interested

Par aap tho' before he said anything Arnav glared at him and left tat place. Bade long aur unke bade chochle' said the pimp dissapointedly.(but you... big people and their big attitude)

Kushi was dead tired. Jiji.. bahut maza aya'' aaliya ji aap bohot accha nachte hai.(jiji it was great fun. aaliya ji you danced very nicely)

Shukriya, she heared someone calling' aaliya begam' aaj ek accha grahak milte milte rah gaya'.. said the pimp(thankyou.. aaliya begum.. we just missed out a really good customer..)

Kya hua? (what happened)

Kya kahen' ek dam suit boot pehenke laad governor jessa admi aapko nachte thad rahatha'. Pucha tho mana karke chala gaya'. Muje laga iss shehar ka akhri raat kuch acchi kamaye hogi par kismet ki bath hai begum'. He Grumbled.(what to do.. one guy dressed in suit boot was ogling you when you were dancing. when i asked him.. he just refused and left.. i thought the last day in this city will give us some income but its just fate..

Chodo mukhi'. Abh hame nikalna chahiye' saying she left with mukhi following her out.(leave it mukhi. now we have to leave.)

Kushi chal ab ghar jana hai' called payal.(kushi now v have to leave)

Par jiji' amma ne tho hume kal aane ki manjoori di thi na? tho fir kya huwa???(but jiji mother had given us permission to stay till tomorrow. then wat happened now?)

Abhi buaji ka phone aya aur jaldi bulaya hai.. chalo she said pulling kushi with her.(just received a phone call from buaji asking us to reach home immediately)

Jiji iss waqt hame gadi nahi milegi'. Kya Karen(jiji we wont get any vehicle at this time what shall we do)

Dekhte hai.(lets see)

Arre' dekho ayush ji jiji roko unhe'. Ayshi ji ayush ji yelled kushi seeing a bike.(hey see its Ayush ji jiji stop him.)

Arre kushiji payalji rath ke iss samay road pe kya kar rahehai? Asked a worred Ayush(what are you doing in the road at this time?)

Arre Ayush ji aap zara jiji ko ghar le jayiye na' hum yaha rukenge. Aap galdi jayiye' saying she pushed an unwilling payal towards Ayush.(oh Ayushji just take jiji to our home. i'll stay here. leave soon..)

Par aap yahan akele'. Iss waqt'. Asked Ayush(but you alone ..here this time)

Aap mere phikar math karo'. Hum ajayenge'(dont worry about me i'll reach there)

Accha' saying he left with payal.(ok)

Yeh aap kya kar rahai hai ayush ji said a worried payal(what do you think you are doing ayushji)

Aap chinta mat kijiye' hum aap ko chodke kushiji keliye wapas ayenge saying he sped towards their home(dont worry i'll leave you and come back for kushiji again)

Kushi was walking towards her home smiling towards her achievement. She wanted to play cupid between payal and ayush for a long time. Ayush was a nice guy. Well mannered and cultured person. Perfect for her jiji. Smiling she skipped towards her home. Suddenly a car stopped in front of her. Jumping for the opportunity, kushi smiled her dazzling smile and sweetly asked the guy to give her lift.

Arnav saw a girl wearing a lehenga walking on the road alone. What kind of a girl walk at 11 in the night in this desserted road. But he applied the break when he saw her face in the rear view mirror. He saw her run towards the car, knock the window and smiled at him. aap muje kripya xyz road thak chod dengey? She said in a very melodious voice. Arnav's hand on its own accord open the passenger door and kushi slipped into it. The drive was quiet. Kushi being tired dint talk much and Arnav was in trance. He dint know what he was doing.

On reaching the road he stopped the car, got down and opened the door for her. He stood frozen seeing her sleep. She looked angelic. Few strands of hair fell on her face, tickling his hands to remove them. Her pallu was slightly moved giving him a clear view of her collar bone and that delectable milky white skin. He raised his hand removing the hair when the back of his hand brushed her lips lightly. Current passes through his spine rocking him up. The sudden thunder woke up kushi. She was embarrassed seeing Arnav so close. But dint know wat to think abt this. Arnav suddenly moved away and sat in the driver's place and drove off leaving a very confused kushi.. ajeeb admi hai, na hi na bye seethe chale gaye'. Laad governer kahika' saying she sprinted towards her house when she saw Ayush coming towards her. He made her sit in his bike and took her to the house. She bid bye to Ayush and turned to be welcomed by a very mad Buaji.(weird man... no hi no bye just left)

Buaji aap' kya bath hai.. she asked with a shaking voice. She knew when buaji looked like this she was in trouble(buaji its you .. what is the matter).

Kyu re tum tho pehele hi panouti thi ab khandan ka naam bhi karab karma chahte ho kya? Shouted a furious Buaji holding kushi through her hair dragging her into the house.(you were already curse to this family now you want to degrade the family name by you activities?)

Buaji bath suniye'.. plz let her talk or listen to me pls' said Payal in a hurring trying to free kushi from her grip.(buaji.. listen to me or let her speak)

Chup Chap kamare me jao. Growled Buaji pointing towards Payal. Payal meekly went off.(shut up and move to you room)

Smack' she slapped kushi on her cheek. And kushi feel down. Kyu apni ma ki kadam par chalna chahte ho kya?? Besharam ladki' ek admi ke sath rath me akeli ate sharam nahi ati kya' jis ghar ne tumhe sabkuch dia use ghar ka naam bigadna chahte ho kya? She shouted at kushi hitting her repeatedly.(do you want to follow your mother's footprints? shamless girl.. coming home alone with a man, are int you ashamed of ur self? this house has given you everything and you want to spoil its name?)

Buaji asa nahi hai'. Pls listen to me'. Begged kushi' hum tho sirf..(its not like that.pls listen to me)

Kya' sirf.. saying she pushed kushi on the floor. Tum meri bath suno'. Tere Amma aur mane tumhare liye ladka dekha hai. Tumhe usse 2 din me shadi karne hai'.(what just... you listen to me.. ur mom and myself has seen a boy for you... we hav planned to get you married in 2 days.)

Par muje aab shadi nahi karni' said a crying kushi(but i dont wanna get married now)

Nahi karni' tho kya kanra hai.. abhi deka na' anjan ladko ke sath gadi me jana hai, gulchde udana hai'. Bolo kya karna hai??? Pehle tumari amma ne hamare nakh katwai abh tum ye sab karke hamri bachi hui izzath karab karna chahte ho??(you dont want to? then what do you want...i just saw it no.. roaming with unknown men, romancing with them, tell me what it is that you want first it was you mother who ashamed us now you'll also planning to do it?) She grabbed kushi through her hair and said in a stern voice. Tumhe man na padega. Yadhi tum iss ghar ke logon se pyar hai tho karna padega samje'. Kal wo a rahe hai' tumhe dekhne' tum unhe apna manjoori he doge samje'. Saying she left a devastated kushi crying her eyes out.(you have to accept it. if you love the people in this house you have to accept. they are coming tomorrow i want a yes from you.)


Precap: shyam ki khushi, kushi ki shadi aur Arnav ki bechani'..

so how was this... here goes the first chapter... as i have told you guys there is not going to be too much of lovely dovely scenes... so pls bear with me... will update next week oly may be by sunday.. i'll try before that but still sorry... ok now press the like button and comment.. its required.

Edited by ar_art - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting. Hate Buaji. 😡 Looking forward to next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SOMEHOW I DONT LIKE THE FACT THAT 13 YEAR OLD KHUSHI WILL GET MARRIED TO SHYAM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update..
Arnav felt something for Khushi..
Shayam is out for some works and Khushi is getting married with a guy who is 13 years older than her.. That means shayam is the groom..
Now Arnav will definitely get mad to know this news and will think Khushi as home wrecker..
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohh such a dark chp wid arnav lusting over khushi...w8n for dnxt update..

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