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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello Readers!

So a general thread for all the people who can't comment on blog.

All yours!

-M.

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Congrats! Thread 3. Whoopie! 🥳

I have an exam tomorrow, after that I will read IF ONLY

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Finally I am back!

It feels so good. I missed you "If only" *wipes tear*

Okay I loved this chapter. Too good!

Everything was so perfect, just like a fairytale. I just hope that this never changes, this atmosphere of happiness *sigh*

This update was so beautifully written. I loved each & every scene, starting from khushi tucking Aryan into bed to Khushi winking back at Arnav. Adorable!

Ooh it's their anniversary. I liked the way you portrayed their emotions, the way they stared at the candle & thought about their life. Beautiful.

That cake looks delicious. Can I have some? *pouts*

Awww! Arnav got her a ring. I love Arnav, he is so loving & caring now.

LOL! Khushi's surprise went down the drain :P

Eeps! Aryan started walking. He is a big guy now.

I loved their bickering, please tell them that they fight like kids & this is not a good sign considering the fact that they are the proud parents on a year old kid :P

The birthday party was cool.

I love the fact that they are so protective towards Aryan, they both try to bring in the best thing for him. The way they both observe Aryan makes me go awww! It's really cute to see them bickering over their son's favorite flavor. And I love the fact that Arnav wants Aryan to be manly, abhi se :P

*off to read 33*

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I want 7 spots 😈

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I think I have mentioned this before but I would say it again, you write love making scenes beautifully. They are not vulgar & cheap, they are beautiful & perfect.

Nice chapter. Nothing much happened in this one apart from Anjali's story. But I liked it. The pace of this story is perfect & I like the fact that you are not rushing it, it's not too slow & not too fast. Just perfect!

Arnav's story of running away was funny & I was like this> 😳 when I read that he had a reputation to maintain in class 8 *stunned* And I loved the way they were strolling, snuggled into each other. So cute.

Errr..I don't want to say anything about Alizah *shrugs*

Oh I forgot to mention that mamaji's decision was also the turning point in this update. I am glad that he has decide to return back with his family. I hope everything is fine.

Tina invented a dish? Eh? Ummm okay. I liked their (Tina-Anjali-Khushi) bonding. Why do I still feel that khushi is a bit uncomfortable around Tina? Am I thinking too much?

I felt sad for Anjali but I am glad that she is free. No husband is better than a cheater husband.

One question: Riya is Shyam & the other woman's daughter right? I remember I read this in the initial chapters, correct me if I am wrong.

Why do I feel that something big is coming up?

*off to read 34*

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I hope I'll be able to comment about all the chapters on page 1 *fingers crossed*

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Okay so Ali & Khushi are so close 😲 I didn't know that. I loved their convo & their cheerful attitude.

And khushi is close to Tina too so all my doubts are clear now. Phew!

Did I mention that I loved Tina & Ali's love story. Adorable. Tina was a tough nut to crack, I must say.

And I can totally imagine Ali being dressed up like a girl by his sisters *falls down laughing* :p

Arnav is a sweetypie. Loved the way he went to look at his son after coming back.

And the seductress. Hayee!

Arnav's monologue in the end was really meaningful. I actually smacked myself for not realizing that khushi is still stuck up in the past & intentionally or unintentionally the mask slips out. I hope she'll forget everything soon.

Mamaji sent divorce papers? What the! I hope Manorma will agree & they'll return back to India.

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Again a lovely chapter. I didn't even blink while reading it.

Khushi & Arnav are in Love. I love their interactions, their talks, fights, communications & everything else.

I am so scared for Ali. Don't know what happened to him. I hope they'll inform Tina before leaving, she's so worried.

I love Alizah. Awww Arnav scared her, can he learn to be polite? That girl literally jumped out of her skin :/ I am glad khushi talked to her sweetly. And Masam why physics? Why? Why? Why? I almost stabbed myself at the mention of that deadly subject.Bah.

Oh & did I mention that I love the fact that Arnav cares so much for Aryan. Left to him, he would never let him go out of his sigh :)

Why do I feel that there is something wrong with khushi going out to drop Alizah? I hope she'll return back safely. Yes I know you can give us a heart attack anytime so I try to be more cautious :p

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Thank god Khushi is safe. Phew! I was so worried.

Now let's talk business. Can I kill Shashi? Seriously what kind of a man is he? Someone tell him that khushi is NOT his property. Just keep your sick thoughts away from her, you jerk. Why is he still carrying out the bidding for her? And that too in Arnav's name. Such a psycho. I feel like puking on his face & showing him my middle finger & dancing on his head & singing a ridiculous song into his ears. Damn him!

God I felt so bad for Arnav. So bad! He deserves some peace & happiness in life. I hope he'll do something soon. He has to buy khushi? Sheesh. How will khushi react to this?

Ali was shot 😲 OMG! Why is this happening. I am so shocked. *runs to read 37*

Oh did I mention that Alizah's mom is really sweet?

And did I mention that khushi's concern for Arnav made me teary?

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Masam & S would be proud of me

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Yes I read it all *pats herself*

I was crying, literally crying when I read Tina's plans of having breakfast, making dishes & all that. I knew she'll be shattered & I was right. I felt so sad when that nurse told her about Ali.

I hope he'll be back to his senses soon :)

Shashi is behind all this right? I..I am speechless *sigh* It will be an insult to call him a devil, he's much more than that :/

Arnav is heartbroken. I hope he'll tell everything to khushi. Their scenes were Perfect, as always.

I loved all the flashbacks of Ali & Tina.They had a rocking love story.

Tina acted so pricey but later gave in. Sweet I'd say.

And Ali is cute beyond words. Stalker eh? :p

Well let's see what happens next!

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