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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please PM the blog link to me. I am now curious to read this FF.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey read till part 16 could you plz send me a PM to the link to your blog really been waiting really long thank you :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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For Chapter 39:

You've been so loyal and true to Arnav's character, its brilliant. He is protective, controlling, irrational, passionate and madly in love. So fiercely protective, I hope it does not backfire. I know he should tell Khushi everything, but I understand his desperate need to shield her from all this, his "pure one". How does one go and tell their beloved that they've been put on sale on the net by their father and that too on the husband's name ?

Now tell me, are all those details about laws regarding human trafficking true ? If yes, two things. One, brownie points for the research and two, you discussed something which is a very significant issue, but is often ignored by most of us. Human trafficking is a serious crime, and now when I think about it, we hardly pay any attention to it in the midst of all the other issues we face.

They are moving on, so nice :) But there is still a major, major threat looming over their heads. I absolutely loved Anjali and Riya in this update. Ali and Tina are always lovely, not to forget the Arnav-Ali bromance :D Khushi's baking escapades should be fun; I like how Arnav is encouraging her to take up something.

May I say I love Arnav. I mean, he is flawed, but he is totally THE man :) Great update, Masamji !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally Moving on... 😊
It was such a relief dat der lives are somewhat back to normal... not perfect but atleast trying to be...
I seriously feel sad for Arnav, his life is in turmoil,,,, can literally feel it...
Hope dat bas**** is gone away from der lives sooner... and sooner... can't bear him... 😡 😡
So Anjali is going independent too... Hope it does good to her... 😊
HAHA>.. love Aryan to deepest... 😃.. he is a hell replica of his father... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: vgedin

For Chapter 39:


You've been so loyal and true to Arnav's character, its brilliant. He is protective, controlling, irrational, passionate and madly in love. So fiercely protective, I hope it does not backfire. I know he should tell Khushi everything, but I understand his desperate need to shield her from all this, his "pure one". How does one go and tell their beloved that they've been put on sale on the net by their father and that too on the husband's name ?

Now tell me, are all those details about laws regarding human trafficking true ? If yes, two things. One, brownie points for the research and two, you discussed something which is a very significant issue, but is often ignored by most of us. Human trafficking is a serious crime, and now when I think about it, we hardly pay any attention to it in the midst of all the other issues we face.

They are moving on, so nice :) But there is still a major, major threat looming over their heads. I absolutely loved Anjali and Riya in this update. Ali and Tina are always lovely, not to forget the Arnav-Ali bromance :D Khushi's baking escapades should be fun; I like how Arnav is encouraging her to take up something.

May I say I love Arnav. I mean, he is flawed, but he is totally THE man :) Great update, Masamji !





V, thank you for the comment and now coming to your question.
Everything I wrote about human trafficking is true; I wouldn't make it from my own. Yeah I did a lot of research, asked a bunch of people and much stuff more. You are right, the issue is highly ignored and we keep on living our lives, ignoring what's happening to other lives.
One of the illegal crimes and still no effectual actions against it. Sad, really sad.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

For Chapter 39:

That's why Anjali hurts so much. It wasn't as if she had not been loved by Shyam. She was loved by him but not enough for him to be childless because of her...

But then she found her nirvana in Riya. It takes a lot to accept and love your husband's illegitimate kid as your own. Eply in her case since she had undergone so much of trauma- her own abortion, her husband's lack of affection, consequent affair and death.

Shyam on the one hand wanted a child and on the other abandoned his child with the other woman in Anjali's lap? Weirdo!
Of course Arnav will try to protect Khushi from pain. Of course Khushi will try to blame herself. Typical!
The way he called her the pure one I was reminded of Tess by Thomas Hardy.
So, this is how Arnav intends to look into the matter. And am sure he will manage it. Also his kiss and words to Khushi about relief cement that fact for me.
In the Payal-Khushi convo I didn't understand who sabotaged Arnav? Am I missing something again?
Typical Arnav to encourage such fist fights. But am surprised Khushi was looking radiant even after scolding Arnav for feeling proud of their son's "violence"
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Masam...till update 16 i read ur ff "IF ONLY"...CAN U PLZ give ur blog link...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

For Chapter 39:

That's why Anjali hurts so much. It wasn't as if she had not been loved by Shyam. She was loved by him but not enough for him to be childless because of her...

But then she found her nirvana in Riya. It takes a lot to accept and love your husband's illegitimate kid as your own. Eply in her case since she had undergone so much of trauma- her own abortion, her husband's lack of affection, consequent affair and death.

Shyam on the one hand wanted a child and on the other abandoned his child with the other woman in Anjali's lap? Weirdo!
Of course Arnav will try to protect Khushi from pain. Of course Khushi will try to blame herself. Typical!
The way he called her the pure one I was reminded of Tess by Thomas Hardy.
So, this is how Arnav intends to look into the matter. And am sure he will manage it. Also his kiss and words to Khushi about relief cement that fact for me.
In the Payal-Khushi convo I didn't understand who sabotaged Arnav? Am I missing something again?
Typical Arnav to encourage such fist fights. But am surprised Khushi was looking radiant even after scolding Arnav for feeling proud of their son's "violence"




Rasgullaji, just clear your some few things out ji.
Shayam did not abandon Riya, it has been stated quite a lot of times he was going to marry his woman and that's when the accident happened. No such intention of isolating Riya alone with Anjali.
Sabotaged. Clearly they were talking about Shashi here.
And I understand why Khushi did not protest against 'violence' but I don't think the word is suitable for a three year old. That's why atmosphere was kept quite light.

Hope it clarifies! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thankyou for creating this thread...I have been so desperate to comment ...actually i type one after every update to voice down what I felt but to my despair it rarely gets published...As far as I have read few comments above, I have found that i have got some chapters to read so ...I will be back after I read them
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am so glad that Ali is not dead...I was crossing my fingers. It was so sweet to know about how Ali and Tina started dating. Ali was the romantic one. It was kind of emotional.

Regarding Khushi and Arnav conversation...it was so heart-wrenching especially Arnav's confession about his past. The way he said it...it left me with lump in my throat. By the way it's your forte after all-to be able to describe the kind of expressions that is often very hard to potray through words.

P.S. I had been waiting for PMs since long as i received none in december and i found that i wasn't in your buddy list. Well, if you think that i don't read or comment then plz believe me when i say that i read all your works(i am big fan of STB) and I am interested enough to be commenting but for some reasons they don't get published. Nevertheless, I have sent the request once again and i hope you will accept

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