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ritukgarg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

H could u please pm me your blog link:) thnx!

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

OMG!

Just caught up with the last 10 chapters!

You have taken us on a roller coaster ride :P

I love how you've made almost each and every character in your story important. I love the pairing of Ali and Tina, I actually cried when he was shot.

And chapter 38, was just mind blastingly amazing! Finally Arnav opened up to Khushi!

I am really very sorry for the lack of comments from me, I was terribly busy with exams!

But now, I promise I'll comment on every future update of yours!

You, are a brilliant writer! ^^

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

PS - For some reason, I am unable to comment on the blog, so I'll be commenting here, if that's okay with you? :)

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Thank you so much masam :D

I too face problem while posting long comment..and thats the reason why I endup with two words!

This will make easier loading :P!thankx.

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supriya

@supriya.arshi

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

can i get link to this FF chapter one...please???

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crizal

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

thanx fr d thread :))

Edited by crizal - 12 years ago

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SA_nimk

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Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

hainnn u have started the story after the hold 😭

and u didnt even send me the blog link!!!

why why why 😭

i have been waiting kab se

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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

hey masam. i already sent u a pm requesting for if only blog link .i dont know if u have seen it. can u pls pm me the blog link? 😊

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Thread 3!!AWESOME!🥳

Now I'm off to read the new chapters!!!!😳

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago

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luvkkgasr

@luvkkgasr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

"I M LITERALLY AT PEACE AFTER READING D UPDATE"...😊The heart (Arnav) has expanded to accomodate LOVE (Khushi)... AWWW... I love him so much right nowww...

The peace has flowed in der relationship and m hell sure it would cement der relationship for forever...

Amazinggg update... took my breath away ... 😊

Thankuuu for d pm...

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Nice comment on a nice blog like a nice reader, or spamming a thread with ramblings like a stoned reader ? Methinks the latter is more fun.

You painted such a beautiful picture, I would have thought this is the end if I had seen Shashi's corpse. But I haven't seen it AND I know that the man is devil incarnate and will not die easily. So, theres more to come.

Communication. It finally happened. It is almost cathartic, isn't it ? Arnav's outburst was beautifully written. That entire sequence - a stifling silence, the bath, the questioning, the revelation and finally the confession - flawless. And because I know you like Grey's Anatomy, I can tell you this. That bit actually felt like a scene from GA. It has these moments - theres one where after Denny's death, Cristina goes to Burke and pleads "Please don't ever die". And then theres one where Mer calls Derek and asks, "Will you still love me if I fail ?" The whole Tina-Ali bit, the scene with Anjali & Riya, and specially when Khushi begs Arnav to never ever leave her - very GA Masam, very GA.

I really want Arnav to come up with innovative ways to hurt/kill Shashi. Fork through neck. Check. Whats next ? :D