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citi

@citi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#911

A beautifully written story that goes right to the heart. She is grace and dignity in face of all the bad and good he hands her. This man really has earned the right to woo her. Loved it.

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A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#912

I am literally a little speechless right now at your ability to convey so many emotions and feelings. Honestly, my words of praise will be inadequate as not only this last chapter, but the whole story was amazingly written; the details, the back and forth between times, the emotions that were conveyed, and how Arnav and Khushi made key realizations - it was all just perfect.

The scene when Arnav came back for Khushi when the lights went out was so touching, and the way you described it made me feel like I was watching it on the big screen.

So glad I stumbled upon this story and got a chance to read it. You did a great job👏

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#913

Fabulously written.

Arnav's emotional baggage and Kushi's resolute spirit, captured by you so sincerely.

Thanks for a great read.

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#914

I m in awe of this story...
Girl,Ur vocabulary is impressive...I remeber once complaining to U about difficult words bUt while reading this story,,I have realised that every writer has its own way of writing ...N this is ur style clearly...U dissect each n evry emotion n feeling of character that I feel connected to that character at a much higher level...This story is fantasttiicc...I actually wantd to keep reading On n On...
Amazing one...Thankuuu for all the pms...

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#915

Awesome! Read all the parts in the last couple of days.

I could see that your writing skill has notably improved from chapter to chapter. I wish I had read each chapter when you wrote them, that way I could comment on each of the times in each of the chapters - but well, better late than never. You have written about emotions so well.

The way Arnav redeemed himself and won back Khushi's trust was very beautifully written. And the ending was so well written - just what Khushi and Arnav would have done - impulsive, intense yet so very romantic! I hope you write an epilogue to this story.

Thanks for sharing this story with us!

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#916

Absolutely loved this ss!!!! I am so glad I got a chance to read it from the beginning till the end. Even though it had seemed like you stopped for a bit, the wait was totally worth it!! You are an amazing writer and I absolutely love reading very single piece of your writing! I hope you never stop!!!!
It's kinda bittersweet that the story ended, I'm happy because Arnav was finally able to open up to Khushi and make amends for his mistakes, and they can finally be together now! But I'm sad that it ended :( ahah, can't wait to see what happens in MDJND

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bworm

@bworm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#917

Thank you for the beautiful story. It was lovely to read through. What a beautiful gift to all ArHi fans. Kind od sad its ended. But looking forward to your other stories.

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shutter

@shutter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#918

Just finished reading the story and it was mind-blowing!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏

I was on a goosebumpy ride all throughout the plot...😳😉

New Year's eve and the following days in this fic took on a whole new meaning, what with Khushi using her diary to jot down her resolutions for the coming year and trying so hard to abide by them!!!!!!

Coming to Arnav, I don't know what I'm supposed to say... He's such a complex character and you have so amazingly deciphered each and every layer to this enigma of a man!!!! 👏 👏

He getting hold of Khushi's diary and realising what he was missing in the happy-go-lucky ways concealing the more thoughtful persona and staying in denial of what he ought to have noticed and understood far earlier, was very well portrayed!!!!!

Their inner conflicts, Khushi befuddled mind, Arnav's sincere efforts at redeeming himself without hurting Khushi's sentiments - Everything seemed so real and vivid!!!!

Also, the way you have developed the other characters, viz., Payal, Akash, Nk and Anjali... WOW!!!!

The bits with NK in the picture were hilarious... Arnav acknowledging the fact that beneath that buffoon-ic persona, there's a sane and a very mature analytic mind, which he might be lacking!!!!

Towards the end of the last chapter, I even felt like reading 'Twilight'...😉

Will just say that I had a great time reading this story!!!!!!👍🏼

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UV_Arshi

@UV_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#919

hey...it was a wonderful end to a brilliantly written story...or should I say a beautiful start to a lovely life...

I don't see why you were so apprehensive about it...I really loved it. Loved how Arnav went about his apology, how he should his love and care through little things... I'd have loved for the show to take this turn I guess...although I must admit I'd have never imagined Arnav writing a diary for her, it somehow seems out of character...but hey, it's always cool to find a new side to your favourite characters...I loved the story, every bit of it! i'm a bit sad to see it end...

Hope to see more of your brilliant writing in future! Good luck!

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UV_Arshi

@UV_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#920

hey...it was a wonderful end to a brilliantly written story...or should I say a beautiful start to a lovely life...

I don't see why you were so apprehensive about it...I really loved it. Loved how Arnav went about his apology, how he showed his love and care through little things... I'd have loved for the show to take this turn I guess...although I must admit I'd have never imagined Arnav writing a diary for her, it somehow seems out of character...but hey, it's always cool to find a new side to your favourite characters...I loved the story, every bit of it! i'm a bit sad to see it end...

Thank you for choosing to share your work with us in spite of everything... Hope to see more of your brilliant writing in future! Good luck!😊

Edited by UV_Arshi - 11 years ago