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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#891

And this story couldn't have ended on a better note N! I have no idea how you do it but you create these very real yet magical moments that one can't help but be awestruck. At this point in time I just want to thank you for sharing this beautiful journey with us, I have enjoyed every single update immensely and have ended up wanting more except in this last chapter and last part you covered everything incredibly well. And you say you are not happy with the way you ended this story, I say there is no room for you to be unhappy N because you did more than full justice to this story. I haven't been on IF for a while but when I saw a PM about the last part to this story I couldn't help logging in just so I could read the latest update on this story and boy am I glad or am I glad! Did I love the latest update or did I love it?! :D

The very unique way Arnav penned down his confessions was simply splendid. He not only apologized for reading Khushi's diary entry that happened in the beginning of this story, he also put his heart and soul into that entry without going out of character. He assured her just how much he wanted her to be a part of his life forever without being extra dramatic, he did in his own way which was perfectly suited to his character. Loved the fact that he left the important bits for the in person talk because he did not want to be a coward anymore, he told her about wanting to spend every new year with her for the rest of their lives and I was left in awe yet again. I am a little pressed for time so I won't ramble away but I just wanted to congratulate you on completing this special journey of New Year's Resolutions and I can hardly wait to read more and more of your work! 🤗

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RainyDays

@RainyDays

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Posted: 11 years ago

#892

Superb ending to a superb story !
Loved how Arnav finally opened up to Khushi and that too he gave it written in a diary ! So adorable !

Loved the Story , Love your writing. Love the story to bits.
Waiting for the epilogue !

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#893

This was so beautiful and such a perfect beginning. Yes I won't call it an end but a beginning to their fresh start ahead, to a journey where they now understand each other.

I was wondering in the beginning what Arnav could have given to her? Of all my thoughts a hand written journal was nowhere in my list. 😛

He came back for her and for once he didn't lie to her. They have come a long way. He has come a long way in making amends. He is being honest and I loved that he decided to tell Khushi about her diary. This shows how genuinely he is sorry for all his mistakes in the past.

I'm so happy that Khushi believed him - what he said in the dark confines of the room and what he wrote in his journal.

Her condition - the way they were talking was so good.

His amendments, his words of honesty, his expressing himself gave courage to him where she could not only lay such condition in front of him but also suggest the song which is so perfect for them. He brought her bubbly self back.

This has made me so happy Nafisa!!! Resolutions - some were broken and some new were made - like seeing each others face in the midnight of every new year.

Loved every bit of it.

Nafisa you've a great capability to tap emotions and you pen them down so beautifully.

It has been a treat reading your works. Thank you for sharing your work with all of us!!

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#894

Wonderful!!! It is this word of expression I had when I finished reading the story. What I like the most in this fiction is there is no "love" word. Yet, all roads lead to it; trust, acceptance, care, never let go and so many more. I might sound selfish if I would say that I want to read much more of this story, but I get it that this is how you want it and I respect that. I loved the way this story started, continued and parted with your writing. Thank you for writing and sharing with us. Take care!

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mandeep

@mandy15

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#895

loved it dear :)

superb update:)

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#896

That was a beautiful story. I loved the way it started with reading a diary and ended by reading a diary. I have read it all in one go. And I almost cried reading both the diaries literally there were tears in my eyes. All throughout the story I loved the way you expressed their feelings so vividly. It was so beautifully written I was in awe. I really loved this story. Thank you for the Pm it was an amzing story.

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#897

awesome story..

thanks 4 d pm

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

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Posted: 11 years ago

#898

Arnav's confessions in the diary he wrote were so heartfelt and he really was pouring it out without holding back. Very, very touching. Redemption in those few weeks after he read her diary was so sincere and again very touching. He really tried to do things right and went about it with single minded determination and patience.

The last scene by the poolside is just amazingly beautiful. Her forgiveness and finally trusting him and his trying to trust himself and believing in a future together.

I do hope you will keep writing more new stories. Will look forward to your updates on MDJND - that is another beautiful story too.

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#899

Read from 8 onwards to the end . Loved the luxury of a continuous wallow in my favourite story ...loved the beautiful words and emotions that you employ to transport us to the world of your Arnav and Khushi. Always have felt that amongst all the talented writers on IF your A and K are the closest to my heart . Keep writing always .

Thank you dear.

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anonyasr

@anonyasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#900

Beautifully written chapters. This entire story has been an emotional ride. Liked it that Arnav confessed to reading Khushi's diary. The proposal is very well written. Thank you for this story!