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RebeccaDaphne

@RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#901

Oh my goodness it was just so beautiful! Doe-eyes, my heart soared with joy reading it, you ended it perfectly!

It was astounding to read how he finally admitted everything, we got repentance, remorse and a full proper confession of love, I feel very satisfied! The description of Khushi in the dark and Arnav coming back to comfort her and hug her was brilliant, a deeply romantic hug, full of possessiveness and protection...made butterflies in my stomach! Thank you for such a lovely story! 👏

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 11 years ago

#902

I think you were being seriously hard on yourself...if the last parts were screwed up then I'd love to read your seriously crap writing!!!

It came to just the right crescendo...and I wondered whether Fortunate Events is a continuation of this story...I think I'm going to have to go back and read that one from the beginning again.

I loved the fact that their feelings were left unsaid but were screaming out in the implied meanings...that was so so beautifully done. You could feel the strength of Arnav's feelings and the fact that they were supremely reigned in...and you could feel Khushi's joy which was humming rather than beaming.

I could actually picture that last scene in my head...and it was so wonderfully subtle yet totally in your face...if you know what I mean!! The fact that they've both taken that step towards each other was the in your face bit but the way it happened was totally sublime. It makes my heart sigh!!

Absolutely loved it and I'm totally depressed that it's over...please, please update Fortunate Events soon!!! Or at least some more of those hilarious OS scenes...love them.

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vgedin

@vgedin

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#903

Awww! Nafisa, you be the nicestestest! And sweetestestest! Bas!

Those comments were just my way of telling you how I loved this story, the concept and the writing. I know you have been hardpressed for time, yet you completed this one. Thank you so much! 😃

Coming to the final installment of NYR, I have just one word to some it up - perfect!

Arnav redemption would not have been complete unless there was complete honesty, including the revelation about the diary. His apology so heartfelt, Khushi's forgiveness so natural and generous. It was like the both of them managed to heal each other, and in doing so, complete each other. Two halves of a whole, truly.

Amazing, Nafi. And I couldn't thank you enough for writing this. More importantly, completing this. Love ya!

Edited by vgedin - 11 years ago

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vgedin

@vgedin

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#904

Oh and one more thing. I remember you saying there was only one more chapter left in A Series of Most Fortunate Events. Perhaps you could put that up and then you'll have two complete stories in your kitty 😃

Just a suggestion, I love MDJND just as much :)

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kamtokdin

@kamtokdin

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#905

This is the most wonderful, apt and touching redemption piece I have read in this forum. You have conveyed Arnav's remorse, regret and conviction to redeem himself without going ott. No buckets of tears, throwing himself over the cliff and that sort..which just didn't jive with Arnav's character in the first place.

This seems more profound, real and heartfelt. Love it. Going to miss it.

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1987Trisha

@1987Trisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#906

you really left me speechless...

i really can't think of a better ending of this beautiful story...

loved every line of...

I really want you to write an epilogue of this SS

plzzz

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IPKKNDTheWorld

@IPKKNDTheWorld

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#907

Congrats for finishing your SS!!👏

Arnav & Khushi's banter in the last part is what uniquely makes them.Kudos for bringing that out exceptionally well.I'm liking your way of writing more & more with each piece I read.

Are you planning to write an epilogue?

Thnx for the PM.

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parjay

@parjay

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#908

it was an amazing piece of creation. . Lovely. . Read it in a go.. each n every words reflected indepth emotions of d characters. .
It was so tender n blissful. . Der love... thanks for such a beautiful story..

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Devika

@WaterIce

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Posted: 11 years ago

#909

That was just too beautiful!!! Made me cry in the end

Beautifully written

Loved it

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#910

nafisa, though I have read the last part as soon as it was updated, iam holding myself from commenting on this - how can I get over the feeling that this is over - oh no -