Arhi SS|New Year's Resolutions|LastPart- B&C p130 *complete!*

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dreamgirlrus23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#931

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kurinji

@kurinji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#932

You have the great way of switching the times and readers to stick to it too. The characters and the way they emote is like a cake walk of writing, the story is not build only by the leads but by all te characters and the situation they are tied up.
Arnav reading Kushi's diary, isn't it said that curiosity killed the cat, yes here his big fat ego is killed. I liked how arnav knowing what kushi is feeling about him didn't showed his high handed attitude, by giving her the space and time to understand him.
That is nice way of proposing arnav, no flowery words straight to the point.
SS that Every new year to remember. :)

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ocean28

@ocean28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#933

What a beautiful story. Introspective that the series lacked. You have given so much depth to both arnav and khushi that their characters have become even more enduaring. I never watched the show in full as the episodes after the real marriage were so unbereable. Thus your story gives a certain degree of closure to the development of the characters of both arnav and khushi. Thank you so much for filling the void. Are you thinking of writing more on this beautiful couple? Please say yes. I am sure that plenty of us are still around eager to read anything that comes out of your genius.

Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.

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9424976

@9424976

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Posted: 10 years ago

#934

This is such a beautiful story. I love your version of Arnav and Khushi and how everything unfolded. You have a talent for writing and I loved this story so much!

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Kowsi

@Kowsi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#935

Awesome! Read it in one go! And I don't know what's best in your story: the emotions or the situations or the confessions or the way it is written and as a bonus you quoted Jane Austen my favourite!

Everything is so beautiful!

Thank you so much for this awesome piece of work and keep continuing!

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#936

I just caMe across this story n omg this was fantastic... One of the best redemption story I have read so far on a liter note ...just too good ..., thanks a lot for sharing... I loved nk in this story... Actually all of them...loved to read wat each character was thinking n analyzing...

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#937

Thais was a beautiful story. Can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading it. You wrote it brilliantly. The way you showed Arnav's realizations of his mistakes and how he wants to make amends for his previous actions was just fantastic. Totally loved it. 😳

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#938

OMG!! I missed this wonderful SS!!

I am glad that I came across a gem of a story that is very well written. I loved your take for the New Year Resolutions. I wish, the CVs had explored the angle. Arnav in his own way regretted and made up for all the hurt he gave to Khushi. Kushi's decision not to come in Arnav's way, made him realize how much he needs her in his way..he was living by the nok-jhoks unknowingly and it had come the bane of his existence..I am glad that ASR came to know Kushi's thoughts about himself. I liked how he said, that we he came across his name in her diary, he had to know what she thought of him, what was her opinion of him..I loved how Payal could see through Kushi's facade. I am so in love with your NK. I wish this NK was there in the series. Anjali as usual was protective of her chotte and her chotte made sure that he came out of the Payal first marriage fiasco with the family.

Sorry for the muddled up thoughts. And what I looked forward in your updates was the Jane Austen quotes..she is one of my favorites..I dont know what about her, she so understood the nuances of emotion and articulately expressed it. Even you brought their confusions, grief, regret, hope, fear, and what not very well..Take a bow lady..👍🏼

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sanjuarshi

@sanjuarshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#939

am really...spell bound...awed so much that i became tongue-tied and...ohhh...how can i express my LOVE for THIS STORY in words...it impossible...i can just say i LOVE this so much that it will always stay close to my heart

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Namrata

@Nammrata

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#940

Hii...I read the entire story and I really loved it..you gave a new form of redemption to Arnav...although in some places I felt he was being a little too harsh on himself but I guess that ultimately ensures a happy ending coz he'll keep striving to keep his happiness happy 😳. I don't know if you still read the comments on this story but I hope you do and I hope to read more of what you write...I'm off to start reading MDJND and whatever else I find in your index 😃