Arhi SS|New Year's Resolutions|LastPart- B&C p130 *complete!*

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varshapan

@varshapan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#871

Oh this has been such a wonderful journey wiyh arnav and khushi. I have loved reading and re-reading every chapter and absolutely adore the wonderful way the story has progressed.

Here I would also like to compliment you on your writing sryle. You would have made Jane Austen proud.

So now awaiting to read other stories from you apart from the existing MDJND.

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#872

it was a tender heartwarming and beautiful end to this coming of age love story

i love the way u portrayed arnavs feelings and the way kushi reacted

i care for u :) so so beautiful admition of feelings

super like

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disha7

@disha7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#873

Beautiful ending! Couldn't have expected anything else from you :)

Both of them seem so transparent to each other- all their faults and defects were lying in the open. I hope they see each other every midnight rather than on new year midnights only 😆

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#874

D confession ws very tender, heart touching...u have beautifully penned down arnavs insecuties, love, fear of losing her...beautifully n khushis response ws beautiful too...finally she got her laad governor n he got his sankadevi!! Perfect end to this amazing love story!!😳

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faffy

@faffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#875

Wonderfully scripted!! Its a joy reading your creations as they reflect the sincerity and purity of the human mind and soul.

I have just, just discovered you and your incredible writings - and Thank God for that, otherwise I would have missed out on some exceptional Arnav-Khushi pieces.

I am also in the process of reading MDJND - an exquisite insight into the heart and mind of two adorable characters. You have fathomed the depths of their soul with breathtaking clarity.

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#876

u write so well; it was only the breaks that were irritating. i plan to read this in one go soon :)

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nnhk

@nnhk

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#877

what an end :)
am going to miss this story :(

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#878

Awesome update

I love the black out scene. I think it was Arnav six sense that he knew Khushi was scared again and it was n is his job to make it fade away. The way he gather her in his arms, brought her near to his heart and console using soothing words was just beautiful. You did an awesome job penning down this scene.

Wow Arnav said yes to dance on the sing with Khushi in exchange of Hindi lessons. I could picture Arnav and Khushi dancing and mesmerizing each other.

Love the way Arnav proposed Khushi. He want to see Khushi every New Years night, so romantic. His wish is already fulfill because when she saw Khushi back on New Year's Eve she was destine to him.

I love Arnav honesty, he wrote everything in a letter and justify his sorry's to Khushi.

Arnav and Khushi are back on track, it's so nice.

I wish you could continue it but the point on which you ended the story is perfect.

Congratulations on completing the story.

I had a wonderful time reading it.

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rati123

@rati123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#879

Beauttiful story a as always, your writing is amazing. One can actually feel all the emotions with all the nuances.

I would have loved to see this happening on the show

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#880

Bang on update...the diary written by arnav for khushi awed me...his honesty n care for khushi was so heart touching...marvelous piece of writing...d credit goes to u nafisa n ur flawless writing skills...kudos to u..