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CHAPTER8- the moment of truth…

Both the teams return to the headquaters & they share the information with each other…

Rathore: I think hume us club pe raid krni chahiye tabhi shayd kuch haath lage…

Arjun: nahi Rathore ho sakta hai wo humari movements pe nazar rakhe ho & fir un 4 ki jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai…

Shree: to ab hum kya kare sir…

Arjun: us club mein kisi ko undercover bhejna padega…

Riya: par sir kaun jayega wahan wo ek high society spoilt brats ka club hai…

Rathore, chotu & arjun glance at shree –sia …

Shree-sia(togethr):hum?!?!

Rathore: ha tum dono jaoge wahan & ispe aur discussion nahi chahiye mujhe so guys leave for the day kal subah milte hai…

Sia-shree(in their minds): ye kahan phas gaye yaar !!!

Sia look at arjun & thinks its time for her to speak to him…

Sia(in her mind): jiju se baat karu? Par bolungi kya… [then she remebers about the diary roshni gave her] ek kaam karti hu jiju ko who diary de deti hu … ha yahi sahi hai…

Arjun(in his mind): aaj toh sia ko jawab dene padenge abhi baat kar leta hu usse…

Rathore look at them & thinks: aaj sab theek ho jaaye kaash sab pehle jaisa ho jaye…

Everyone is leaving but sia is busy searching for something in her bag..

Riya: kya dhundh rahi hai? chal na yaar

Its getting late …

Sia: its something important ree tu ja main abhi aati hu…

Arjun is also seeing her search for something & patiently waiting for everyone to leave…

After everyone leaves arjun calls sia…

Arjun: sia idhar aavo…

Sia: coming sir (she is holding the last letter that roshni gave to her for arjun & roshni's old diary)…

Arjun: ek hi sawal aur jawab mein sach hi bolna… tumhe pata tha na?

Sia: ha pata tha …

Arjun: toh fir hume kyun nahi bataya kyun usse jaane k liye chod diya kyun??

Sia: wohi batane aayi hu… ye lijiye isse (hands over the letter & diary) isse padh lijiyega …

Arjun: tumhe aisa nahi krna chahiye tha agar tum hume bata deti toh aaj roshni humare saath hoti… tumhari galti k kaaran roshni humse door ho gayi…

Sia can't take her jiju's harsh word so she runs away with moist eyes…

[mind voice to sia… kaha tha maine kuch toh bolti ab jiyo hamesha hamesha ke liye is guilt ke saath ki didu ki death mein tera bhi haath hai jaante hue bhi tune kuch nahi kiya…]

Sia takes her bike & rides it very roughly & goes & hits a car. Her bad luck that the car belonges to none other than her current hater no.1 SHREEKANT SEN…

Coming out of the car…

Shree(to himself): udi baba ekhon ki korbo ma toh mujhe definitely kha jayegi yeh 3^rd car thi meri aur isse bhi maine … nahi maine nahi..

He turns around & finds sia standing with her eyes closed as if thinking meri aankhen toh band hai wo mujhe nahi dekh payega…

Shree: ye tumne kya kar diya license kisne diya hai tumhe?

Sia: look m sorry galti se ho gaya wo mera control nahi raha bike pe sorry…

Shree: jab bike control nahi kar sakti toh chalati kyun ho? Bada jhansi ki rani banene ka shauk hai na ab dekho kya kar diya…

Sia: dekho m sorry aur tumhe mujhe ye batane ki zarurat toh bilkul nahi hai ki main kya kar sakti hu & kya nahi…

Shree: hello apna ye attitude na kisi aur ko dikhana subah tumhari wajah se hum kho gaye n ab ye … jahan jaati ho definitely problem ko saath lati ho…

Sia: actually you are right jabse tumse mili hu har jagah toh tum pahunch hi rahe ho na…

Shree(in angry voice): how dare you?

Sia(Cooly): ye toh mujhe kehna chahiye tum mujhe underestimate karne wale hote kaun ho?

Shree: dekho tum ladki ho warna…

Sia: warna kya kar lete tum ha…

Shree: don't test my patience…

Sia: whatever…

Just when sia is leaving shree pulls her from behind… she didn't expect it still she counter attacks impressively & they end up falling down on the road…

Sia: eww ab meri dress mein mitti bhi laga di…

Shree(cooly): kaha tha don't test my patience…

Sia:ya whatever like I care a damn about it..

Saying this she goes home taking her bike…

At home she is impressed by the way everything is untouched & left where it was… she moves to a large picture of the 5 of them roshni, arjun, tanvi , rathore & herself…

She remember's the day this photograph was taken…

Flashback….

Sia: nahi didu main nahi aaungi dekho maine waise bhi yahan ke hottest senior se panga liya hai wo pakka fresher's party mein meri band bajayega…

Roshni: arrey baby doll tum kabse loser's se darrne lagi aur fir main hu ,tanvi-sam & tere jiju bhi toh hain na…

Sia: toh kya hua didu who pakka auction mein mujhe pe hi boli lagayega … arrgh mujhe nahi jaane wahan…

Roshni: chup kar ke chal wahan hum hai na sab sambhal lenge …

Sia: pakka didu…

Roshni: ha baba aur waise bhi tu toh entry hi aise person ke saath mar rahi hai ki sab waise hi darr k bhaag jayenge…

Sia: ha toh bhai-bhabhi ke beech mein kabab mein haddi banna right hai mera…

Roshni: bas ab chal meri maa…

In the party as planned the college hottie was behind sia for revenge but his plans failed coz always sia would be either with arjun-roshni or sameer- tanvi…

The time came which sia feared but her bhai-jiju duo saved her & after she came down they all took a pic together with sam-tanvi on her left & arjun-roshni on her right…

Flashback ends….

Sia (to herself):kaash aap yahan hoti didu humare pass….

Saying so she moves towards the kitchen to grab a quick dinner allowing her tears to flow afterall at home she didn't have to hide them or the fact that how guilty & alone she felt… she cried herself to sleep & woke up the next day as nothing ever happened …

Sametime at shree's place he was getting a lecture for not being careful with his 3^rd car…

Shree's mom: kya hai ye this is the 3^rd car you have damaged shree… dhang se gaadi kyun nahi chalate ho tum ha?

Shree: maa meri galti nahi hai wo ek bike pe savar ladki ne peeche se thok di gaadi…

Shree's mom: enough ab isse aur kuch hua toh fir bike se jaana padega… (in her mind) kya karu iska main isse toh koi ladki hi sudharegi… hey durga maa isse kissi aisi ladki se milao jo iske dimaag ko sahi kare…

Shree: thank you maa…( in his mind)iss sia ko toh main dekh lunga iske karan mujhe maa se daant padi hai na ab main isse nahi chodunga…

The next day etf office…

Everyone has arrived but there is no sign of shree or sia…

Rathore: team is everyone here?

Riya: no sir, wo abhi tak shree & sia nahi pahunche…

Rathore: lagta hai in dono ko special invitation dena padega…chotu shree ko call karo & riya tum sia se pucho ki who hai kahan…

Both shree & sia on their way to office are thinking..

Aaj toh late ho gaya yaar ab rathore sir pakka daantenge…

They reach the parking lot simultaneously & park their vehicles…

They both enter the lift & then spot each other…

Sia-shree: tum!!!

Shree: yaar tumhe mere saamne subah-subah kyun aane tha aaj ka din toh gaya…

Sia: jaise tumhari bandar si shakal dekh k mera goodday hone wala hai na…

They both enter the office together & see everyone is in the conference room so they rush towards the conference room…

Sia: good morning sir & sorry sir for being late…

Rathore: good morning … so if everyone's here lets discuss our plan of action…

Precap…

Sia-shree in the club fighting…

The girls are safe & ETF finds them…

Awesome update. Loved it. How can sia too responsible for roshini's death? There should be some misunderstanding, right. Please cont soon. Thanks for pm.

Nice updates. Liked them. So, sia is roshini's junior. That's good! But, why arjun don't like her?! Please cont soon.

Awesome update. Loved it. How can sia be responsible for roshini's death? There should be some misunderstanding, right. Please cont soon.

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shree-sia are awsome
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Chapter 9- meeting the unexpected…

Rathore: so sia –shree you have to go in the club & follow the movement of the people around you & try to get hold of max. info. About those involved in the peddling & their bosses…

Sia-shree: yes sir…

Rathore: riya tum aur arjun uss rehabilation centre ko firse check karo…

Arjun: uska koi fayda nahi hoga rathore wo apne aap ko clean rakhenge even if they are involved…unki uss secret trustee ko dhundhna hoga wahi hai mastermind…

Chotu: par wo milegi kaise sir…

Arjun:mil jayegi ek baar uska koi jr.toh haath lage…

Riya: toh sir aapke hisaab se hume jo bhi milega uss club se hi milega??

Arjun: ha riya jo bhi hai bas wahi hai aur hume wahi usse dhundhna hai…

Rathore: toh theek hai fir arjun-riya tum dono bhi wahan jao & main aur chotu wahan ke aas-paas ka area scan krte hai…get ready team & fast…

After sometime riya & sia enter all dressed up as if going to a party(ria is wearin the dress she wore for kanika case & sia is wearing skin tight black jeans& a red loose one strap top…) & seeing them chotu wolf-whistle's

Sia: yaar ree mast lag rahi hai…

Riya: tu bhi for a change acchi lag rahi hai…

Chotu: acche ? tum dono dhasu lag rahe ho….

Shree(in his mind): ye sia acchi lag rahi hai bolu kya usse? Nahi chod yaar …

(to riya) ree ekdum super-top lag rahi ho tum toh samjhe ya samjhau ko maarne ka plan hai kya??

Riya:shree chup karo…

Sia: samjhe ya samjhau?? Ree kya chakkar hai? Ahem ahem..

Riya: chod na sia tu bhi kiski baaton pe dhyan de rahi hai…

Sia: ok –ok mujhe laga ki tu uss sadu ko pasand karti hai…(looking at shree) tum ye pehn ke aane wale ho?

Shree: ha kyun koi problem hai??

Sia: hume wahan camouflage hona hai stand out nahi karna…

Riya: yes sia sahi bol rahi hai ja change krke aa…

After a while both arjun & shree enter ( arjun is wearing blue jeans & a loose plain white t-shirt & shree is wearing black jeans with a white&silver t-shirt & black jacket)& riya-sia stare them with open mouths…

Riya& sia(whisper to each other): ye kya hai?pinch me(they both pinch each other) hayee kitni acche lag rahe hai….hmmm…

They see them & cough to get attention…

Shree(to sia) & arjun(to riya): chalen?

Riya-sia: ha…

Riya& sia (whispering): sambhalke rehna & all d best…

Sia & shree take sia's bike & ariya is going on arjun's bike both the couples take 2 different routes…

Sia(thinking & talking to herself): seriously sia tune jiju ko diary toh de di but unhone jo kaha who sahi bhi toh tha didu ne wo kiya jo sahi nahi tha par tune bhi toh unka saath diya na? tune didu maara nahi but uss murderer ki help toh ki agar tu bhai ya jiju ko bata deti na dumbo toh aisa hota hi nahi…but ab toh di wapas nahi aa sakti na… (a lone tear escapes her eyes & she quickly wipes it.)chal ab ro ke make-up kharab mat kar… waise sia ree-jiju ki jodi toh super-top lagegi na? but jiju ko samjhayega kaun aise toh duniya ko samjhate firte hai par khudke dil mein kya hai ye kabhi nahi samjh pate… lagta hai ab tujhe hi kuch karna padega but ye kaam tu akele toh nahi kar sakti na? is robot se help mangu waise bhi ye ree ko mujhse behtar janta hai aur ye shayad help bhi karega afterall ree ka bestie jo hai… but mana kiya toh? Don't be a fool sia bas puch ke toh dekh… par kaise puchu wo bandar kya sochega? (aloud) shree!!

Shree: main 4 metre dur nahi hu aise kyun chilla rahi ho kya hua?

Sia: wo mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha??

Shree: pucho…

Sia(murmuring):kaise puchu kya bolu….

Shree: bologi kya puchna tha?

Sia: ha nahi chodo jaane do…

Shree: ok fine waise hum thodi der mein pahunch jayenge..

Sia(in her mind):puch le sia zyada se zyada ye jiju ko jaake sab bata dega aur wo teri band baja denge aur agar maan gaya toh didu ko diya hua 2^nd promise pura kar payegi. Not such a bad deal.

(aloud to shree) ree ko arjun sir pasand hai na? sacchi bolna…

Shree(to himself): sacch bola toh ree fry karke kha jayegi nahi bola toh yeh sia kaccha kha jayegi… karu toh kya??

Chod yaar sach bata deta hu ho sakta hai ye un dono ko mila de…

(aloud to sia) ha but kissiko batana mat khaas karke uss samjhe ya samjhau ko warna wo ree ko kha jayenge waise hi bechari ko ek baar daant pad chuki hai kaha hai unse aur unki life se door rehne ko…

Sia: ok but meri ek help karoge ?

Shree: kya?

Sia: in dono ko milane mein meri help karoge?

Shree: pagal hai kya? Marne ka shauk hai toh kissi gaadi ya train ke samne kud jao na … khud toh maroge mujhe bhi marwaogi… aur plz baaki ki bakwaas baad mein kar lena hum pahunch gaye…

Sia: how mean tumhe nahi dena toh mat do mera saath lekin main in dono ko saath karke hi manungi…aur ab chalo andar , club jaa rahe hai koi shaadi ya function mein nahi jo kisi shubh mahurat ka intezaar karenge…

Shree(in his mind):ye pakka maregi… oh no ye akeli hi chali gayi andar yaar isse jhansi ki rani baneni ki inti kya jaldi thi…

He enter's & sees sia is near the drinks counter he moves towards her & starts shouting…

Shree: sia akele aane ki kya zarurat thi do minute ruk jaati toh pahad tut padta kya??

Sia: chill mr.robot tumhe nahi lagta tum kuch zyad hi overreact kar rahe ho? Tabiyat toh theek hai na tumhari?

Shree(thinking & talking to himself):oye tenu kya hua hai tujhe iski inta fikr kyun ho rahi hai? Bhool mat ye bhi ETF officer hai she is capable of handling herself…

Sia claps a little to bring shree back…

Sia: hello!?! Kya hua tumhe?

Shree: kuch nahi bas kuch soch raha tha… waise ree & sir yahan pahunche ya nahi…

Sia(pointing to ariya sittin on the other side): wo toh rahe tumhare samne…

Are you sure ki tum theek ho? Waise toh tumhe hai ek psychiatrist ki zarurat toh pehle se hi thi ab kya hua hai?

Shree: hello madam psychiatrist ki zarurat na tumhe mujhse zyaada hai…

Sia:no you are wrong you need one more than I do kabhi khudko aaine mein dhyaan se dekha hai pure robot ho…

Shree: khudhko dekha hai lagta hai biology lab se koi specimen bhaag aaya ho…

Sia: whatever waise hume shayad yahan kissi kaam pe bheja tha wo kare toh behtar hoga…

Shree: maine kab kaha kuch main toh wahi krne wala tha but tum hi shuru ho gayi…

Sia: short term memory loss se suffer karte ho kya? bahar tumne jhagda start kiya aur andar aake bhi tum hi mujhpe befaltu chilla rahe the…

Ariya were observing them fight so riya sends a text to them as arjun is getting very angry seeing their antics…

Suddenly they halt to check their fone..

Sia-shree pagal ho gaye ho kya stop fighting & focus on work warna ye samjhe ya samjhau tum dono ko kha jayenge fir main kuch nahi kar paungi…

They remember why they are there & start looking around & sia notices a guy with a packet…

Sia: wo dekho shree hume wahan jana chahiye unke peeche…

Shree: chalo…

They follow them & catch hold of the peddler…

Sia: batao tumhara boss kaun hai?

Peddler: hai koi tumhe kya ? aur wo bahut powerful hai toh panga mat lo chup –chap apna maal lo aur chale jao…

Sia: tum aise nahi manoge afterall jab tak do chaar thappad nahi khaoge toh kuch yaad bhi kaise aayega…

She slaps him & asks again & again but no answer she then calls everyone there…

Arjun: ab tak isne maara hai ab jo pata hai ugal de warna (lookin at chotu) ye maarega toh soch le tera kya hoga…

Peddler: saaheb main kuch nahi janta mujhe bas kaha tha ye packets deliver karne yahan …

Arjun(showing the 4 girls pic):jante ho ye kahan hai?

Peddler: ha saaheb ye peeche wale godown mein bandh hai par saaheb aap unhe mat batayega ki maine apna muh khola hai warna who mere parivaar ko zinda nahi chondenge…

Arjun:theek hai…

They enter the godown a lot of bullets are fires from both the ends & after a lot of dishoom-dishoom the find the girls & when sia & riya are untying them 2 people come & take them on gun-point…

Shadow1: chale jao yahan se warna in dono ko upar pahuncha denge…

Shadow2: hum jhoot nahi bol rahe….

They fire a bullet in the air…

Arjun(in his mind): ye awaze jaani-pehchaani lag rahi hai…

Rathore signals him to keep them busy so he & shree can go & tackle them…

Arjun: theek hai hum apni guns niche rakh denge pehle un 4 ladkiyoon ko chood do…

Shadows: pagal samjha hai kya inhe chood de?

Just then rathore & shree catch hold of them from behind & bring them to light…

All the ETF members are shocked…

Mrs.shikhawat & mrs.d'souza were the culprits… mrs.shikhawat was meenakshi's step mom & mrs.d'souza worked for her in the rehabilation center…

The 4 girls are saved & the culprits were handed over to the police…

Rathore:good job team… kal milthe hai…