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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Arjun's saali sia...interesting
aur shree-sia ka jhagda...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 4- facing the inner demons…

Sia: bhai I mean sir waise jiju hai kahan aaj-kal aur ab wo kaise hai?

Rathore: thodi der ruk jao sab pata chal jayega…

Sia: matlab bhai??

Rathore : tum bas dekhti raho …

At this moment riya enters with 2 mugs of coffee

Riya: sia chal jaldi hume lab set karni hai na.. (she see's rathore ) Sir aap aa gaye arjun sir nahi aaye…

Rathore: nahi riya hum dono alag -alag

SUV's mein gaye the usse koi aur kaam bhi hai tumne last case ka paper work complete kiya?

Riya : yes sir kar diya hai aur ab if you don't mind toh main sia ki help kar sakti hu…

Rathore: yes riya tum uski help kar do..

Sia: chal ree lets get to work…

Here riya & sia set up the lab & clean everything & sit down having their coffee when through the glass door sia notices her jiju aka the super cop Arjun Suryakant Rawte walk towards the conference room…

Sia to herself: hey god ji! Jiju is my senior ab toh pakka band bajegi … didu kahan phasa diya mujhe aapne ek taraf khai aur ek taraf kua hai ab aap hi help karo meri…

In the conference room suddenly the silence is busted by the rings of rathore's cellphone…

Rathore: team we have a new case. He stops midway as he remembers riya & sia are not here so he sends shree to get them..

Shree (to both riya & sia): ree we have a new case chalo tum dono ko conference room mein bulaya hai…

Riya & sia together: ok…

In the conference room…

Rathore: yeh case bandra ke blue waters disco mein se kuch high society ki girls k achanaak se gayab hone ka hai

Reports ke hisaab se 4 ladkiyaan-meenakshi, anuja,ankita& reshma kal raat se gayab hai ye 4 kal blue waters gayi thi apne doston k saath par koi bhi ghar laut k nahi aayi hai case bahut sensitive hai kyunki 4 ladkiyaan apne parents ki only child hai aur kaafi spoilt hai & in 4 ko pichle kuch dinon mein dhamkaya gaya hai…

Riya: sir ye case kidnapping ka ho sakta hai…

Arjun: nahi riya agar kidnapping hoti toh 24hrs mein wo kidnapper ek ransom call toh zarur karta…while saying this his eyes fall on sia who is sitting beside chotu very quietly [mind voice: sia ye yahan kaise ? oh toh ye hai humari nayi member ye toh asset ki jagah sirf ek liability hai dhoka dena hi aata hai isse bas]

Chotu: toh sir ab aapke hisaab se hume kya karna chahiye??

Rathore: pehle toh humein inke gharwalon , doston aur rishtedaaron se baat karni chahiye aur ye pata krna chahiye kya in 4 mein koi link hai?

Team lets get to work – riya tum & arjun meenakshi k yahan jao, shree tum aur sia anuja ki family se milo & chotu aur main baaki dono k gharwalon se milte hai…

Sia to herself: chal sia kaam pe lag ja is Bandar ko jhelna padega…

Shree to himself: uff ye rathore sir bhi na kahan mujhe iske saath bhej rahe hai isse main kaise jhelunga?

Ariya take one SUV & rathore & chotu the other so sia –shree are left with sia's bike…

Sia: chalo isse hi chalte hai…

Shree: theek hai par bike mai n chalaunga…

Sia: tum aur meri beast no never beast ko toh main hi chalaungi toh chup –chap piche baith jao wrna tumhe chod k chali jaungi…

Shree: ok tum chali jao par jaogi kahan address toh mere pass hai Ms. Drama queen…

Sia: oh hello Mr. Bandar chup –chap wo address mujhe de do warna main sir ko keh dungi ki tum mere saath co-operate nahi kar rahe ho…

Shree: ok ek deal karte hai abhi bike tum chalao but aate waqt bike main chalaunga… deal?

Sia : deal…

Meanwhile in the ariya SUV silence is speaking in volumes…

Riya (irritated by the silence): sir

Arjun: ha bolo riya

Riya : wo sia kitni pyaari aur acchi hai na?

Arjun: ha tumhare liye hogi…

Riya: matlab sir?

Arjun : kuch nahi riya ab bekar ki baatien chod kar case pe concentrate karogi…

Riya : yes sir, meenakshi was a very bright student in college abhi abhi usne apni B.com ki degree li hai & apne dad ke saath unka business join kiya hai. No criminal record except for a minor case of ragging a student. Dushmano ki list kaafi lambi hai but zyadatar professional rivals hai personal rivals as such pata nahi…

Arjun: theek hai hum pahunch gaye chalo andar jaake pata krte hai….

Precap:

Sia-shree lost…

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice n precape sounds interesilting conti soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
nice!! 👏 continue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
hey it was superb loved it precap sounds intrestng waitng for nxt prt :) update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice!! 👏 continue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update. Liked it. Why arjun thinks that sia is a cheater? Please cont soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 5- the mystery…

On the other hand sia-shree duo are not able to find anuja's home as they got lost …

Shree : kaha tha tumse bike main chalata hu pata nahi kahan le aayi ho mujhe , jab raasta pata nahi ho toh kissi se puch lena chahiye.

Sia: oh hello Mr. technical expert address tumne likha tha maine nahi toh behter ye hi hoga ki mujhe blame na karo…

just then sia notices a vendor passing by…

Sia(to the vendor): bhaiya ji ye address pata hai aapko??

Vendor: ha madam wo pichli gali mein left pe hai yahan se seedhe jake 1st right mein chale jayiye wahan se pass hi mein hai…

Sia: ji thank you…

Turning back to shree…

Sia: lo ho gayi solve problem ab chale ya kisi shubh muharat ka intezaar kar rahe ho?

Shree: chalo waise bhi agar tum saath ho toh shubh muharat mein bhi mera bhala nahi ho sakta…

Sia: ya whatever…

Rathore-chotu,shree-sia& ariya find out a common thing about the girls…

In the ETF conference room after returning from their respective interrogations …

Riya: sir, meenakshi k parents se bas ye pata chala hai ki usne college mein kissi ki ragging ki thi & wo ladki college chod k chali gayi thi…

Sia: sir anuja k parents ne bhi kuch aisa hi bataya tha…

Chotu: ha ankita & reshma k yahan bhi yehi story thi…

Shree: iska matlab ye sab koi ragging k revenge k liye kar raha hai??

Rathore: shree filhal toh aisa hi lag raha hai… riya & sia un ragging k victims ki saari information nikalo jaldi…

Riya & sia together: ok sir…

Arjun: rathore ye case shayad itna simple nahi hai… kuch toh choot raha hai rathore…

Rathore: rawte ab bhi tumhe lagta hai kuch choot raha hai … sab toh humare saamne hi hai ye bas un girls ko sabak sikhane k liye kiya ja raha hai…

Arjun: mujhe nahi lagta kyunki in girls ne jinhe bhi rag kiya tha unhone ya toh college chod diya ya wahin padhti rahi but kabhi koi complaint nahi ki aisa kyun??

Precap:

Case is solved

Sia- arjun face to face…

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Posted: 12 years ago
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me first
nice update


continue soon...
Edited by srividhya68 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update...
Thnks fr the pm...

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