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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice update...

waiting for the case to unfold...

Arjun and sia face to face...
interesting precap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
forgot to comment!! sorry...

nice update!!! loved it.. shree-sia is cute!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
nice precap
eagerly waiting to know y arjun dislikes sia
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 6- memories…

Riya & sia are researching about the 4 girls when sia goes into flashback…

Flashback.

Doon college: one of the most respected & coolest college of Panchgani where ragging was common but rules of it were weird too

rule no:1 every senior can /may adopt a newbie & stop him/her from being ragged..

rule no:2 fresher's party will see the auctioning of all the popular newbies.. in short to be safe stay backstage…

It was her first day in college & sameer, roshni & arjun were the most popular & mischievous senior trio. Everyone warned sia to stay away from them but little did she know that all had different plans for her. She entered the hostel & found out that she would be sharing her room with roshni. She plastered a smile & went into her room…

on supposedly her bed she found a white rose & a note which said..

dear sia,

come in the basement in an hour

ur secret admirer…

Sia knew it was a trap but still out of curiosity she went down in the basement where all the seniors were waiting for her…

They introduced her & were going to rag her when roshni entered the scene & saved her… as per the rules each senior would adopt a first year student & then he/she could protect them from ragging so roshni adopted sia…

Shocked about how to react sia ran & hugged roshni & was about to cry… when roshni said..

Shh dnt cry yaar ye sab toh life k saath chalta hi rehta hai waise as per rules now they can't touch you so chill.. btw I am roshni your room mate waise toh inki stupid k baatonka bura mat mano & yes you can call me rosh or di…

Sia smiled & said ok didu but ye jaan lo k badi wali musibaat ko invitation diya hai aapne…

Saying this sia & roshni went back to their room….

In the following days sia & roshni bonded up like real sister's with roshni always taking care of sia like a real older sister…

Flashback ends…

Ria: sia sia uth na yaar kya soch rahi hai??

Sia( coming out of her trance): kuch khaas nahi ree bas college days yaad aa gaye…

Riya: ab jaldi haath chala warna wo dono sir's hume kaccha hi kha jayenge..

Sia(mumurs): tera toh pata nahi arjun sir mujhe pakka kha jayenge…

Riya: kuch kaha tune??

Sia: nahi yaar…

Precap:

Same as last time…

Chapter 6- memories…

Riya & sia are researching about the 4 girls when sia goes into flashback…

Flashback.

Doon college: one of the most respected & coolest college of Panchgani where ragging was common but rules of it were weird too

rule no:1 every senior can /may adopt a newbie & stop him/her from being ragged..

rule no:2 fresher's party will see the auctioning of all the popular newbies.. in short to be safe stay backstage…

It was her first day in college & sameer, roshni & arjun were the most popular & mischievous senior trio. Everyone warned sia to stay away from them but little did she know that all had different plans for her. She entered the hostel & found out that she would be sharing her room with roshni. She plastered a smile & went into her room…

on supposedly her bed she found a white rose & a note which said..

dear sia,

come in the basement in an hour

ur secret admirer…

Sia knew it was a trap but still out of curiosity she went down in the basement where all the seniors were waiting for her…

They introduced her & were going to rag her when roshni entered the scene & saved her… as per the rules each senior would adopt a first year student & then he/she could protect them from ragging so roshni adopted sia…

Shocked about how to react sia ran & hugged roshni & was about to cry… when roshni said..

Shh dnt cry yaar ye sab toh life k saath chalta hi rehta hai waise as per rules now they can't touch you so chill.. btw I am roshni your room mate waise toh inki stupid k baaton ka bura mat mano & yes you can call me rosh or di…

Sia smiled & said ok didu but ye jaan lo k badi wali musibaat ko invitation diya hai aapne…

Saying this sia & roshni went back to their room….

In the following days sia & roshni bonded up like real sister's with roshni always taking care of sia like a real older sister…

Flashback ends…

Ria: sia sia uth na yaar kya soch rahi hai??

Sia( coming out of her trance): kuch khaas nahi ree bas college days yaad aa gaye…

Riya: ab jaldi haath chala warna wo dono sir's hume kaccha hi kha jayenge..

Sia(mumurs): tera toh pata nahi arjun sir mujhe pakka kha jayenge…

Riya: kuch kaha tune??

Sia: nahi yaar…

Precap:

Same as last time…

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
nice update..:) falshback was sweet :) bt a shrt update :o continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Nice update :) flashback was so sweet... loved it
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Nice updates. Liked them. So, sia is roshini's junior. That's good! But, why arjun don't like her?! Please cont soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Chapter 7- the meeting…

Meanwhile in the conference room

Rathore & our super cop are having a heated argument…

Arjun: tum samjh nahi rahe rathore ye personal dushmani nahi hai ye shayad koi racket ka kaam hai…

Rathore: jo 4 ladkiyaan gayab hui hai unhe sirf wo ragging k cases & wo club join karta hai rawte…

Here riya & sia are shocked to see the other connection between the 4 girls…

Riya: pinch me sia pls…

Sia: omg!!! Chal jaldi….

They enter the conference room a little out of breath

Riya & sia together: sir wo un 4 ne haal-filhaal kissi drug racket ko follow krna shuru kiya tha…

Sia: sir unke call records k hisaab se wo kisi "aasha" NGO se contact mein the jo drug abusers ki rehabilitation k liye responsible the….

Rawte: kaha tha koi aur connection hai….

Rathore: toh theek hai fir tum , shree & riya is NGO jao & main, sia aur chotu club jaate hai…

Sia-shree(together in their mind): thank god!!! Peecha toh choota…

Both the teams team Rawte & team Rathore leave for their destination's…

In the team rathore SUV…

Sia: sir jab hum meenakshi,anuja,ankita& reshma ke family ne humse toh kuch kaha hi nahi iss baare mein…

Rathore: ho sakta hai unhe pata na ho ya koi unhe dhamka raha ho…

Sia: hmm ho sakta

Just then sia turns on the radio on & starts singing along seeing her rathore remember's the old times ( He remember's how roshni & sia would always tease him & tanvi the world biggest rivals with this song & when he would say he hates her they both would say nafraat toh bhai pyaar ki shruat hai & they would giggle & continue singing)& chotu is just staring her with an open mouth the song is…

Na bole tum na maine kuch kaha kaha.

Magar na jaane aisa kyun laga laga.

K dhoop mein khila hai chaand din mein raat ho gayi k pyaar ki bina kahe sune hi baat ho gayi….

Sia well she could sing this song on & on after all she loved this song a lot but poor sia before her song could get over properly they reached the club…

Meanwhile in team Rawte's SUV ,shree is busy showing riya his new software & riya is listening to him half-attentively…

And arjun is driving but is in deep thoughts…

[ mind voice: ye yahan ab kyun aayi hai… isse kya laga tha ki iski involvement ke baare mein mujhe kabhi pata hi nahi chalega? Kitna trust kiya tha maine aur roshni ne isse but … ye humari baby doll nahi rahi… mujhe usse saare jawab mangne hi honge…]

Thinking about all this arjun can feel his blood boil. He halts the car very roughly & announces that they have reached.no reply..

Arjun(angrily):maine kaha hum pahunche gaye hai ab agar tum dono ki time pass khatam ho gayi ho toh andar chalke thodi puch-tach kar le…

Here team Rathore has also reached the club from where they find out that the girls were behind the biggest local drug peddling gang & that they were the cause for a huge loss to the gang b'coz they were rehabilitating youngster's at a very fast rate…

Team Rawte found out that the girls were bringing in a lot of youngster's for rehabilitation…

While our teams were at work little did they know the mastermind was watching them, he was known to all yet hidden from all…

Precap:

Same as last time…

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
wow.!! me frst one to cmnt..:) nice update dear :) continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Loved the flashback...

Roshni was sia's savior...good update

Finally rawte solved case...😆😆
loved it:)
Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago

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