FF-PROMISES updated PAGE 57 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

285

Views

63.3k

Users

43

Likes

1k

Frequent Posters

princesshelen thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Excellent update...
Looking forward fr the next part...
abhi_arshilover thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Awesome update. Loved it. Do rathod know sia? Their pairing will be awesome! And she is related to roshini right? Please cont soon. And please pm me whenever u update.
princessaneeka thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#13

Chapter 3- known strangers…

Rathore: tum…

Sia: aap…

Rathore: sia tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? Wait a minute kahin tum hi toh humari nayi member toh nahi ho na?

Sia: wah bhai ,oops… Sir aap toh bade tez ho ha main hi hu aapki new member aur ye raha mera appointment letter.. oops ek minute letter leke aati hu

Sia goes to the coffeemaker & brings her bag & gives rathore her appointment letter…

Rathore: yeh letter chodo yeh batao tum do saal se ho kahan tumse didu kya door ho gayi tumne toh sabko chod hi diya ha? Main aur tanvi tumse bahut gussa hai do saalon se na tumhara koi atta hai na pata kahan kahan nahi dhundha humne tumhe par tum toh jaise hawa mein gayab ho gayi thi….

Sia: gayab hona pada bhai mujhe kaunsa aap sab k bina chain tha par agar main yahan rehti toh apne guilt k karan jee nahi paati ek toh itna sab ho gaya aur main sab jaante hue bhi kuch nahi kar payi didu ko diye hue promise k karan main chahti toh thi jiju ko aap ko n bhabhs ko sab batana but didu ko diye hue promise ne mujhe roke rakha kaash main wo promise tod deti toh kaam se kaam didu toh humare pass hoti ….. with this sia breaks down crying guilt &pain is evident in her voice , even though its been 2 yrs she cud never gather herself completely..

Rathore: arrey baby doll stop crying upar se tumhari didu mujhe curse kar rahi hogi tumhe rulane k liye…chalo idhar aavo n rathore hugs her & says-

Sia tum sabse acchi sister's mein se ek ho main aur roshni bahut lucky hai aisi suljhi ,samjhdar& cute sis ko pane k liye…

Sia: accha bhai bas ab na jhoot mat hi bolo waise jhoot bolna aata toh hai nahi toh pls aap rehne hi do… waise meri bhabhi jaan kaisi hai ha??

Rathore: theek hai shaam ko chal k khudh hi dekh lena tum ok?

Sia: ha theek hai but main apni bike pe hi aaungi …

Rathore: ok bhena jaisa aap chahen…

While rathore & sia were busy chatting little did they notice that someone was observing them…

Shree: (showing the live feed of the camera near the lab to chotu) yaar ye dekh , ye madam toh rathore sir ki behn nikli aur roshni ma'am ki bhi iska matlab iske jiju samjhe ya samjhau hai… nahi !!!

Chotu: yaar shree tu isse panga mat hi lena pata chala tujhe rathore sir ne vip security mein dalwa diya fir main kya karunga??

Shree: nahi chotu panga toh isne mujhse liya hai aur jawab toh main isse dunga hi fir anjaam chahe jo ho…

Chotu: shree tujhe kuch kehna hi bekar hai kyunki tu wahi karega jo tere maan mein aayega…

Precap:

Same as last time

rockz.diva thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#14
heyy very intrestng loving it waitng for nxt part :)
fasiha_rocks thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#15
wow loved shree's dialogue
nice brother-sister bonding
waiting for next part
prava55663 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#16
hey that was interesting...
waiting for the past to unfold...

thanks for pm...
princesshelen thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Awesome...
So rathore and sia r siblings...
Update soon...
Moumimon thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Wow loved it...
Sia & Rathore nice Bro-Sis bonding...
And Just loved Chotu & Sree convo..they are so cute...
abhi_arshilover thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Awesome update. Loved it. So, she is rathode and rosh's sis. No pairing of her with rathode! But it's ok. Sia-shree pairing will also be cute. Please cont soon. Thanks for pm.
Queen.Bee thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#20
nice update!! loved bro-sis union!! hey no ariya in this ff?? is roshini alive??

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

10 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1015 page no 26 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1015 page no 26

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

RiKara SS : Safed (chapter 7 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

7 months ago

NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated) NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated)

[NOCOPY] Cover credits to Shibani aka oh_nakhrewaali P R O L O G U E The whole house was decorated like a bride. The lights were shimmering,...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

8 months ago

SuVeer/RUhaani SS ~ Wedding Bells (ch 5 updated)

This is my first work on SuVeer/RUhaani, I hope you all will like it. The prompt is given by Koeli, thank you so much for that. I have narrated...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".