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panck

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Thanks for the PM

What a cute as well as touching tale

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oceanssea

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

That was super romantic.
And Arnav's comparison of his patience with her strand of hair was funny.😆

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

wow that was awsuuum hun!!!!

loved it very much n tnnx 4da pm hun!!!

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sj_arhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

I had a few spare minutes and decided to read your OS am glad I did. This concept was something I had wanted to read about ever since the kidnappng track. Khushi's concern regarding her husband's safety in an international trip after what happened the last time, Arnav soothing her in a manner he knows best.

I loved the depiction of her fears, the manner in which she worked about cooking, praying as if her idle mind will otherwise cause her fears to transform into to various possible casualties. Time that could be spent with her husband lay forgotten as she held a puja for his well-being.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

awww..loved it Kalyaani...very sweet..nice...good work..😊

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mishti_17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

That was really wonderful.. Arnav is such a sweetheart.. ❤️

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ranjanatripathi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

A very beautiful, romantic SS...the song you selected was super...the last dialogue was the icing in the cake...

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Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

K - Truly soul food for the Arhi deprived heart. I am reading and re-reading this. When I started reading about Khushi's worry and feverish preparation, I kept thinking...why does she not go with him and had to smile at the last paragraph. What a love story.

Thank you for your writing. I just smile as soon as I see an update from you!!!😊.

You showed that you understand these two people and have nailed who they are 100%. Every thought, every action and every reaction was in character.

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MagicalKash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Beautiful. Such apt title for such an awesome os. You write wonderfully dear! :-)

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

K, your writing always moves me. This was beautiful.Is he taking her to Egypt? Or was that supposed o be metaphorical? Either way, beautiful update. When are we getting the next updates on POL and Raizada&Sons?

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