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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Loved it K!
As I was reading through it, All I though was this is something I would have so loved to see on-screen.
in stead we got stupid movie outing where Khushi looked like a fool.

In this OS, all her worries, havan, her research about the country.
I was hoping that Arnav is gonna take Khushi along with him on the trip. And you did it. thanks.
the song is my favorite and suited very well too.
Well done K, again.

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

hehehe... nice... but why does he have to bug her so much always!! seriously.. come on man!! too much bhaav... hehehe.. nice one :)

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Aww ...it was superb !

I'm new to this forum, but your stories have already hooked me!

Read all your OSs in one go.

Still reading 'The Pursuit of Love'... and boy do I tell you...it is fantastic. The plot is so intricate that you can give the CVs of all current daily soaps a run for their money!!!

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barunxoxo

@barunxoxo

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

I'm a new reader to your works. I've just read your OS and i must say it's beautiful. You have your own unique style of writing . I also love the way you've described their intimate moments without making it sound vulgar at all.

I have heard about your works quite a few times mentioned by other readers and writers but i never really got a chance to take a look at it.

But now i definitely will and I will surely comment :)

Off to read your other works. :)

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

That was a lovely OS!

Quite an unexpected ending and a lovely one too.

Thank you dear.

You have been giving us such good stuff one after the other, that we feel all your characters are live, not fictitious!

Enjoy reading all that you churn out!

Waiting for whatever you want to give us next!

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horizon123

@horizon123

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

That was simply awsum👏Loved it.

Thanks for the pm.😊

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

I love that song. Hariharan has God in that throat of his.

My favorite line is - mil yun ki daud jayein, nas nas me bijliyaan. Now come to think of it, the line is very ArShi.

Nice OS - very Khushi-like, very Arnav-like.

Like a child un-wrapping his birthday gift, Arnav removed her dress and picked her up.

He drew her in his arms scared to hurt her; she looked that delicate and beautiful.

Walking to the bed, he lowered her gently lest he hurt her.

Whats with all the child-like innocence, K ? It is very beautiful, angelic almost. Khushi - that innocent doll looking like a sexy siren - yet Arnav is able to see the child-woman in her. Don't write like this, I will cry. (Like Khushi's single-eye-cry ! )

PS - it is not khulte badan hote in the second verse, it is khulte band hote.