FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

What the heck just happened there???? I'm laughing at how ridiculous this is.

This is crazy, CRAZY stuff. I'll go made laughing if you guys keep this up. LOL!!

You maintained the flow very well. Excellent update! :-)

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

updated pg 50 😊

Edited by blahblah16 - 12 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

part 3
awesome part...
OMG i enjoyed reading this...
excellent...
u should write more like this...
gotta read another hearty update other than unnamed...
cont soon dear...

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panck

@panck

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

Thanks for the PM

What a Chapter

Khushi would rather face ASR than a dog.

AND he discovers that she IS the gota seamstress and blackmails her into a dinner date.

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Ashi

@TheThoughtCrime

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

You surely pressed the chuckle button!

You mind your language...body language!😆

And love it when he demands that she let her hair down, no champi & wear red.

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Preity

@pepples_joy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#366

U were really successful... I had a wide grin thru out the update... Lovely... Infact.. Cutee.. :D Waiting for THE DATE..

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

well, you've achieved your aim because you had me in splits with khushi's antics and repartee! god, what a comparison: a dog and arnav... and she prefers arnav to the dog 😆!

"I was measuring the size of the window! Of course I was trying to run away Laad Governor!"... "You mind your… your body language!" arnav is absolutely right about khushi not knowing whether he bites or not! khushi standing up to arnav and unselfconsciously complaining about the oil was a hoot! loved seeing her surprise him again and again! prefer this milder version of asr who is already smitten by khushi and has invited her out on a date... can't wait to see how it goes!

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niharika111

@niharika111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: BlueMystique

I can't speak for all of them but the way I see it, we haven't really established his character yet, so he isn't the "ASR" we knew. For all I know at this point, his maa and paa could still be alive and well, and he is just behaving like an Angry Young Man cause well, most of the young men are. So him asking her out on a date isn't OOC because we haven't even established his character yet. :)

Its true that we have not yet gotten to understand ASR's character ...But if I were the CEO of AR industries which is big enough to host fashion shows of the order of magnitude of Miss India, I would deliberate over my decision before I ask out a girl on a date, whom I have met barely a few hours ago and who is from a social strata very different from the one I belong to and who is miles apart from the kind of people I usually hob nob with. I'm not saying that he will not be attracted to her. But if I were under the constant media glare, I would be particularly careful about whom I'm spotted with. This ASR just comes across as frivolous and impulsive. Not that anything is wrong with that. But I guess it somehow does not gel with my image of a shrewd businessman who is running such a successful venture. That is all.

Edited by niharika111 - 12 years ago