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Venicestar88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Good Lord!!!! I've been sitting here laughing my head off for the last 10 mins!! and still grinning like an idiot!😃

WHAT AN UPDATE!!!!! Rasgulla... you're a total genius! This is bloody brilliant! the way she was negotiating with him on the compensation... or the way she decided Arnav is better than the dog because he doesn't bite 🤣🤣

thanks for the PM :)

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

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"Fine. Whatever! I will pay you. Paise se ameer, dil ke gareeb. My jhola is in the green room. Let me go there and I will throw good money on your face. How much do you want? 1000? 2000? 2500? 2700? 2750? Umm' 27652765??? 🤣 ONLY Khushi!

Gota's her babies and ASR has already called her "sweeetheart. AWESOME!

He asked her for a date?? I did not see that coming. Great update.

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9424976

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

HAHA OMG This was too awesome! Love how Khushi decided that ASR was better than a dog and believed that she could actually pay him with some rupees oh gosh. And now a date? Oh my gosh I am waiting haha!!

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Vee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Ooohhh this update was such a rasgulla! Sweet and delish :')

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Aysha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

you defo made me laugh and smile

very funny and cute update

so they going on a date nice

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anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

That was fab !!!!!! Noticed that she was angry at the " Gota " remark and not about the " Sweetheart " !!!!! And it was hilarious I loved the update 😊 . Haha she rather face ASR than the dog . That was a master stroke 🤣 !!!!! Only Khushi kumari Gupta is capable of it 😉 now eagerly waiting for their rocking date 😊

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Rhysenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

You succeeded in making me smile. Great work, I'm so ready for Arnav to be stumped speechless by Khushi's oomph factor!

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Swetyz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Smile????
I am laughing like a maniac here...
Its just awesome...

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: niharika111
Their exchange was funny indeed. But isn't it slightly out of ASR's character to ask someone like Khushi, who is so different from him in every which way, out on an official date so soon? I can understand the instant attraction, admiration and appreciation...but I would have imagined ASR to be a bit more hesitant! He is after all the mighty ASR...Khushi with all her spunk and zest, is still from a league very different from that of ASR. I did not expect ASR to give in to his temptations so early on.Then again, these are your characters and your story to tell.😊 Waiting for the rest of the story to unfold...

I can't speak for all of them but the way I see it, we haven't really established his character yet, so he isn't the "ASR" we knew. For all I know at this point, his maa and paa could still be alive and well, and he is just behaving like an Angry Young Man cause well, most of the young men are. So him asking her out on a date isn't OOC because we haven't even established his character yet. :)