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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vgedin


Oh tell me about it, all my nights I am dreaming about one of her Arnav-s.

And about K, I started with PoL, caught up with R&S a little later, but without realising it was the same writer. I was so surprised to see Kalyaani has written them both, poles apart in plot and premise, yet equally brilliant. And see how popular she has become, I had people PM me asking about her holiday and when she plans to return. She has managed to find herself a very loyal audience.

This is why it annoys me a tad bit when she says she wants to end these stories fast, tell me is it fair ? We have enjoyed her languid pace, and then she talks about rushing to the end. I am telling you, she has trained us so well on Arnav-s, I will do a full on ASR on her if she even thinks about ending either of these stories prematurely.



When I once asked K she told me that she wanted to write about a married ArHi and an unmarried one. But even apart from it I can not point that this thing in RnS is similar to PoL. Certainly not.

Trust me, if I had not known her personally, I would have been asking you about her whereabouts too 😃

Arrey one thing is similar. Sexy Arnavs. Don't worry Twiggy. Even if she wants to she can't fastforward to the end. She cannot write that way.

I remember in one update of PoL Arnav and Mahi are talking and she has actually described how Arnav is drinking and using his hands. And the entire update had just one scene. So, just rest assured we have a long way to go with K.

Btw, do you know she is writing the 11th part of The Mistake?

Please don't hate us K, for spamming your thread!

What is The Mistake ?

And your words are like poetry to my eyes, I know theres a LOT more of Arnav(s) in store for us :D

PS - About the pace, how can we forget the whole Hi! sequence post Khushi's holiday - smirking Arnav and speechless Khushi. Just a Hi after that "unnecessarily long holiday" that all of us waited through patiently. K can be wicked, I tell you.


The Mistake is a collab FF some of the writers on the Forum are writing. It is a happy story.

Oh yes! The "Hi" sequence. I remember spamming her thread with "His" to make her update sooner. Haiyee tha woh hiii

I told her after that, that it breaks my heart there are no ASRs in my office. Life!

And even if she stops these two stories in the distant future we will always fangirl her to write more [:D}

PS: Sorry for the late reply. Saiyu ko bhook lagi thi

PPS: She won't be mad. K aur mera chalta hain

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update and happy new year to you
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Posted: 12 years ago
love that update
above this love ur writing

u handle every piece of this in fab way

now both arnav khushi...start from hate
now here madly in love
understanding
comfort
trust
everything is there

both have different ways to express their love to each other.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Kalyaani, this one of your stories I find very intense and with very strong characters (specially all the women) specially Arnav and Khushi... its amazing the kind and level of understanding they have developed for each other and also the ultimate support system they are to each other... too good !!!! I just don't like Arjun at all !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was an awesome update dear...loved ur way of showhng the feelings and the development in arshi relationship...i be very happy if u cld PM Me pls
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Posted: 12 years ago

I loved your update and hope you had a good holiday season !!

Arnav and Khushi have covered so many emotions in their married, life hatred that developed into full love. I admire them and your ability to portray them, even their intimate scenes are so perfect. They fight they make up and resolve things as adults and as a couple should.
Indira, I feel sad for but also wonder why she was unable win her husband only for herself, I would like to read about their marriage too.
Bhavna as a mother to two different individuals in her sons faces so much conflict and I hope she learns the truth about her older son and is able to help Indira. She does not appear to be a meddling mother in law and appreciates that her sons have flaws and truly loves her Daughter in laws esp Khushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was an awesome update dear...loved ur way of showhng the feelings and the developmenpt in arshi relationship...i be very happy if u cld PM Me pls
ps:HAPPY NEW YEAR
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hawww,,,,,,,Awww
So sweet
Loved Arshi bonding
Waiting for next update
Merry Christmas
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update...
I really loved it...

⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago

It was very nice of Khushi to see a concerned Arnav and she knew exactly how to unburden the emotional turmoil he was going through. After knowing the real reason for Arnav getting married to her, she developed a certain amount of respect for him, where I had thought the exact opposite that she would withdraw into a shell again holding herself back for hiding it from her.

I just love how they express their emotions physically, and how comfortable they are in doing it.
But today's update, wow really nice...he just sleeps in her lap...how thoughtful...
Assuming she will let Arnav know about her past sometime soon and tell him about the scum bags Viren and Suraj, and I just wish and hope that this does'nt create any misunderstanding between them...just don't want to see them go through what they had been through all this while.
Edited by vtan - 12 years ago

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