Mohini ff:Life: It's Not a Journey - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by Divyadaya13
😆Rimi , kya yaar tu ain mauke pe khatam kar diya, kya hame soch soch ke pagal karne ka irada hai
Didi aap waise kya soch rahi ho mujhe bhi batao na??
And guys next update mein der hai...it will be on 25th or 30th dec.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Gargi Please Kheer bad diye katha bol(Tell anything else but Kheer).
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
read all the parts at a time..sorry for late...😊
ur amazing at writing Rimi...👏
jus loving the story...❤️
waiting to read next part😃
Mohini
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Outstanding Chapter !!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter Five: Revealation .

Mitin is lying between Ashi and Nahi. She haven't slept yet because she is in some deep thoughts.She still can't believe to her ears that Sid once was a drug addict and alcoholic. As per her knowledge he is dead against of any kind of addiction. Even he used to fight with Kakumoni(Sid's father ….Mitin called him Kakumoni )because he used to smoke cigarettes. She reminds Ashi-Nanhi's words when she asked them about Sid. Because she noticed their reaction when they saw Sid with her. They generally try to set her with some man.It is not their but also her Pisi's and Sreeja's intention. So usually they become happy if they saw their Mamma with some man but yesterday they were shocked .And she also observed that they requested something with their eyes to Sid and she clearly heard the Dude word from Sid's mouth and also Sid's excitement was also seeked her attention when he met them.

Mitin: pehle tum donon mujhe yeh batao tum dono Sid ko kaise jante ho? Aur unhe Dude kyun bula rahe the??

Ashi:wo..actually Mamma…

Mitin:dekho main tumlogon ko nahi dantungi aur mujhe v tumdonon se kuch share karna hai….to pehle tumdonon bolo…

Nanhi:Mamma ye 4yrs pehle ki baat hai…..

Then they told her the entire story.4years earlier they were in London and Mitin was researching on Gyneaneocology from Glassgow University and also was a Fellow of Royal College of Surgery. So she was juggling her life in between as doctor,reasearcher and as mother. So Ashi-Nanhi were staying then with their Diya in London because she was then teaching Physiology in London University. Sreeja too stayed with Mitin in Glassgow then. She remembers whatever Ashi and Nanhi told her….

Ashi:4yrs pehle jab hum London mein the hum Mrs. Denver ke sath ghumne jaate the roz.Woh humare neighbor the.Main aur Nanhi uske bachon se khelte the.

Nanhi:Ashi…hum point se bhatak rahe hai….yeh baat Mamma janti hai..

Ashi:ha woh then…

Mitin:Daro mat bolo main nahin dantungi promise…(She swears by touching her throat)

Nanhi:Tab hum ekdin Dude ko pehlibar dekha…who bohot taklif mein the…unhe kuch padeshani ho rahi thi…bohot bechain the …kuch cheez ke liye ya kissi ke liye…phir who achanak zammen pe gir gaye aur tarapne lage…unka pura sarir pasina pasina ho gaya tha aur woh sirf…P…P..P kar rahe the…

Mitin:Phir???(she frowns unknowingly)

Nanhi:Mrs.Denver ne police aur Social service ko call kiya par woh tabtak unconscious ho chuke the…Toh Maine aur Ashi ne humare water Bottle se Pani lekar unke mooh pe chhirka phir unhe pilaya…unhe hosh aaya to woh hum donon ko dekh ke chaunk gaye au raise dekhte rahe jaise humein pehle se jante ho! Phir achanak …..

Ashi:Achanak…woh Piu kehke mujhe aur Nanhi ko Pakadke rone lage…

Mitin:Piu???Usne Piu kaha tha???Tumlogon ne sahi shuna tha??

Nanhi:Actually Mamma….woh tab kuch adhe jage-adhe neend mein the par usi halat mein unhone humdonon ka hath pakda tha aur keh reh the "Mujhe le chalo..mujhe le chalo"…tabhi unki ghar ki servant jo the woh aye sath ek aur lamba ,thoda meila sa skinke admi v…wo log Dude ko utha ke unke apartment mein le gaye.Tab tak police pahuchi thi par wo uncle ne samhal liya…humlog v Dude ke sath unke flat pe gaye…pata hai wo bilkul humare park ke samne he tha.

Mitin(her forehead shows so many wrinkles as she frowns deeper):Par tum log to use flat mein chhod kar usdin wapas aa gaye the na??…yeh Baat mujhe Liza ne batayi thi…Phir use mulakat hua kaise??

Ashi:Actually next week jab hum phir Park gaye toh humne unhe parkpe udas baithe dekha…Nanhi intellectual ne kahan ye drug ka side effect hai….iss waqt inshan ko drug addicts ke sath hona chahiye.

Mitin:Really???

Ashi:Mamma aise mat dekhiye…dar lag raha hai(about to bring her that fake tears)

Mitin:Continue !!(when she enraged or became angry very much she expressed that through her eyes.That time her small but beautiful and expressive eyes became very wide and fiery.Her lips were pressed by her teeth and she breathed very long and deep in that situation.And unfortunately this is the same situation.)

Nanhi:Sorry Mamma issme Ashi ki koi galti nahi thi….hum usdin jab laut rahe the toh Mrs.Denver ne kahan ki wo unhe jante hai aur unko pata hai ki wo kuch din pehle Rehab se laute hai….unhe Marijuanna aur sarab ki lat lagi thi.They declared him as a cure man par wo hota hai na ek urge jisme inshaan ko jo cheez se use nasha hota hai usko lene ki phir se koshish karta hai….aisa he usdin hua tha…

Next day jab hum ne unhe dekha wo udaas baithe the…aur maine drug addiction ke upar research kari thi net pe …so we went to him and ask why he took that bad thing ??

Ashi:Wo humari ore kafi der tak dekhte rahe par kuch nahi bola…..aisa phir agle aur uske bhi agle din hua.5din bad unhone humare jate hi kahan ki who unki Princess aur Angel ko dhund rahe hai…par wo unhe nahi mile to woh khudko iss duniya se,iske logon se dur rakhne ke liye drug lete hai.

Mitin:Next.

Nanhi:Humne kahan ki aap(pointing on her) kehti ho kissi bhi cheez se bhagna uska solution nahi…unhe bhi situation ko face karke he unhe dhundna hoga….tab unhone kahan ki galti unki thi…unhone apne Princess ko jane diya….usse buda bhala kahan….so she left him and took away his Angel from him.By the way Mamma I feel bad for him because Princess khud gayi thik hai par Angel to Bhagwan hote hai unhe kyun sath le gaye???Aap he toh kehti hai Bhagwan sabke hai…

Mitin:Par sablog Bhagwan ke sath hote huye nahi pehchante aur unhe thukrate hai…to wo Bhagwan ko deserve nahi karte But then what happen???Tum donon ko use itna attachment kaise huya????Kyun Dude bulate ho unhe???

Ashi:Actually ussdin humari kafi baatein huyee aur uske baad humlog best friend ban gaye…aap ko pata hai Dude humein roz London mein School se pick karte the aur kabhi kabhi drop bhi….

Mitin:Pisi yeh allow karti thi?

Ashi:No Diya kuch v nahi janti ……uss waqt hum Diya ko kehte the humlog Joe,John aur Jinny(Mrs.Denver's kids) sath jayenge toh wo humein chhod deti thi aur hum to wapas humesh aunke sath he aate the.

Mitin:Par tum donon

Nanhi:Dude humare sath unko bhi lift dete the….Baad mein hum jab Siattle gaye toh unhone bhi humare sath aane ka faisla kiya aura a gaye……Sirf India aayenge yeh humein nahi pata tha.

Ashi:Aate kyun nahi hum teeenon Best friends hai….unhone kahan tha tumhari Mamma tumhe kahin bhi le jaye main tumlogon ke peeche zaroor aayunga……aur wo kitne handsome,smart aur intelligent hai…toh mere he suggestion se woh khudko Dude kehelwana pasand karte hai…par sirf humse aur koi bolega to bohot gussa karte hai….2mnths pehle

Mitin:2Mnths pehle kya??

Nanhi:2mnths pehle unki ek colleague ne unhe Dude kahan….yaad hai aap ,Mashi conference mein gayi thi aur Diya ko bhi Institute jana pada kuch papers collect karne tab humein Dude School se pick karke aapne office le gaye the unko koi meeting thi…

Mitin:Paramita Jo bhi kehna hai siddha siddha kaho! (Nahi's good name is Paramita nad Ashi's Pragya.Mitin splits her name in two halves and gives it to her daughter as it was someone's wish.Whenever she get angry or disgusted on her daughters she calls them by their good name)

Ashi:Mamma tab Dude ne use kafi danta unko Dude bulane ke liye aur kahan ki ye unhe pasand nahi.Baad mein humko kahan koi unhe Dude bulaye humare siva ye bhi unhe pasand nahi.

Mamma humari unse achchi friendship hai….is liye woh yahan aye hai….aap gussa kyun ho rahe ho??

Mitin:(tells emotionlessly) Because that irresponsible fellow is your father. He helped me little to bring you two in this world.And I will be glad if you two will not talk to him.

Nanhi and Ashi was shocked and dumbstruck and later they both were fallen asleep.And after that Mitin did some calls to some persons and then joined them to bed. And till then she is just thinking about Sid, her past life and Piu.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hv a look fr just 2-4 sec...read it soon & then comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful Rimi, padhte padhte main to emotional ho gayi yaar, and was pisturising our MR's , mera dil joron se dhadak raha hai, kabse wait kar rahi thi tumhare update ka.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

Originally posted by Divyadaya13
😆Rimi , kya yaar tu ain mauke pe khatam kar diya, kya hame soch soch ke pagal karne ka irada hai
Didi aap waise kya soch rahi ho mujhe bhi batao na??
And guys next update mein der hai...it will be on 25th or 30th dec.

Mere kehne ka matlab hai ke aage kya hoga ye soch sochke. Tumne MR"S ko main lead liya hai to main to unke naam se hi crazy hoti hoon, unka FF padkhe mera kya haal hoga, tum hi sochna.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by DivyaDaya13
Beautiful Rimi, padhte padhte main to emotional ho gayi yaar, and was pisturising our MR's , mera dil joron se dhadak raha hai, kabse wait kar rahi thi tumhare update ka.
Aap ko achcha laga to meri mehnat rang layi...I know this part is not so interesting and well described but still you like it...its means a lot for me.
Merry Christmas and happy New Year in Advance.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Hey rimi such an emotnal update. Lovd it. Sid knwd that they both are his angels and remaind with them. Lovly pappa sid. Nw want to knw what went wrong between piu and sid.

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