Mohini ff:Life: It's Not a Journey - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rimi gret, superb, brilliant. I always thought you are talented, but this was mind blowing, tumhe script aur story writer hona chahiye, thaks a lot mujhe lag raha hai main koi beautiful novel padh rahi hoon. Ab raha nahi ja raha mujhse, jaldi jaldi update karti rehna dear.
Ek aur baat, hero ka photo kahan gaya, mujhe dikha nahi. Mouni ke dono photos superb hain, but 2nd wala aur bhi intellectual aur simple hai so 2nd one hi choose kar.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊@Divyadidi Hero matlab MR ka pic to hai na last mein...Siddharth Shashtri ka...
And okay I will keep MR's 2nd wala photo.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry guys my laptop does dhoka to me. I can't copy large amount of contents on my clip board.😡 Will update the rest of part tomorrow.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb story yar kya likha hai tune.
Hamari mouni Dr. hai nice.
Every character is so wel chosen.
And realy sid was a drup addict or he was just kiding.
Dr. Ray has twin kids wheres her husband.
And who is sid??
Great suspance lovd it.
Hope to get some mohini scene soon.
I likd the story its dif frm al sorts of luv stories.
Story luks so real.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊@Foram di Kya tween kids ki Mom hone ke liye husband ka rehna zaroori hai??
😆Just kidding ...dil pe mat lijiye...Actually she has very bad temper . If anyone does any wrong deed she becomes Ma Chandika and for this reason she has lots of enemies(I guess they not take revenge on her because at a time she is very sweetheart). But still her Lord always comes to protect every kind of problems.😉Dekhna yahan bhi aa he jayenge.
P.S. Aap ko yeh baat agewale updates pe pata chalegi about Sid's addiction.

Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovved it totally , MOHINI is the best , Mohit n Mouni cute nhawwt pair , Tui khub bhalo likhis , continue kar . 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks Gargi.🤗 for your compliment and bengali words. Shune khub bhalo laglo.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for late comment..mitin is for me a combination of miu and sati..bapre kya gussewali hai

this tween kids r too too awesome i am falling in love with them..and what a doctor's family..its great
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter Three: Conversation

Mitin is very disturbed since the last night. After Mr. Chanchal's self-amputation attempt she faces so much questions in her work place. Because no surgeons or specialists were available on last night and the Dean and Principal of this college Dr. Mathur gave her the responsibility to keep the hospital working properly and also gave her the power to take decision about patient's treatment. So she operated Mr. Chanchal with assistance of Sreeja. Now in morning the chief of Orthopedic surgery throws so much tantrums why did he not inform about this case? And Mr. Chanchal's family also blame her why didn't she take care of him? She didn't understand what to do and not to do?

She is sitting in her chamber covering her face with her beautiful palms.She dips into sea of questions.

"Hello sweet heart why sad?"she looks at the talker and replies "Please Sid I am too tired to answer you right now. And why are you here? What you have done to me is not enough for you?"

Sid stares at her sadly and doesn't tell a word and after some moment he passes a cup to her. She surprises to his silence and takes the cup from him and takes a sip.

Mitin:Cappuucino

Sid:Yeah!

Mitin:You still remember.

Sid:When do I forget?

Mitin(softly):Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Sid(laughing silently): Abhi to tumhe tumhari favourite cappuccino pila raha hoon.Phir tumhe ghar drop kar ke hotel wapas jayunga.

Mitin:(shocked to listen that)Hotel!(She just yells) Kyun??Tumhare ghar ka …….

Sid:Without you nothing is important for me. Tum nahi thi aur main bhi bahar tha,socha maintain karne se achcha bech doon toh ……

Mitin:(Angrily)Bravo!Toh tumne ghar bech diya……….tabhi main sochun wahan ke exterior itna change kyun ho gaya aur wahan itne log kahan se aaye???By the way wahan 10-12kids the woh kya ghar ke malik ke bachche the??

Sid:Ghar ke malik nahin……….(now he bursts out in laughter ) par iss Duniyan ke jo malik hai yeh log unke bachche hai.

Mitin:(angrily) Kabhi toh serious ho jao…..and kiske bachche?

Sid:(now he becomes little serious) Well yeh na mujhe aur na unhe pata hai.Shayad unke Ma-Baap ko pata honge agar unhe pata ho ki jinhe woh najais man kar chhod rahe hai woh zinda hai.

His answer brings tears in Mitin's eyes and she can't tell anything for a moment. After some pause she tells

Mitin:Tumne aapna ghar orphanage bana diya.

Sid notices her mood's sudden change. He takes her hand in his hands and answers

Sid:Nahi Piu. I donated this 8 years ago…..us waqt main 8-10days ke liye India aya tha…tab.By the way chalo main tumhe ghar chhodta hoon because you give your car to Sreeja to go back home.

Mitin:Hmm……..Actually she is too tired to take this hazards. Peechle 12hrs se without break duty kar rahi thi…..OMG!Mujhe toh Nanhi-Ashi ke school jana hai unhe pick karne.

Sid:Okay.Pehle wahan jayenge….Angels ko pick karenge phir…

Mitin:Kya? Kisko pick karoge tum?Aur Angels matlab?

Sid:Hum…..I mean tumhari be…..matlab jinhe tum pick karne ja rahi ho …..chalo jaldi warna der ho jayegi.

Suddenly he shows so much hurry that makes Mitin doubtful about his intention. But she silently follows him and sits in his car. He sits besides her on driving seat and starts the car.

Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow
stranger is sid.
And he is so nice.
Cn imagine our MRs there☺️
so suspense ha!
How are they both relatd. Are they couple?
And Mr chanchal needs phsychytrist. He didnt only put his life in danger but also others.

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