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Pisces_Gurl

@Pisces_Gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#821

Hey..Nooo Nooo u cant end this FF like this..😭

this is 1 one the Best FF n my favourite...😊

Itna bara zulm mat keroo yaaar...

n abt the update..

Ur first longest chptr n best...

all the scenes were really good...

finally thy met...

He actually said SORRY to him n Amit..shoo cute...

n abt the PM part..I'll b sending u my email address...

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#822

poor riya... she was lot scared... i dont think she will accept him easily..
lol he is scared to tell he is hungry.. he need to clarify it for her to not to freak out... i was laughing when he said "for food obviously"... but i dont get it how this moron can forget to pick her up after 18 days??

n also riya seemed happy he didnt came... gosh.. he made her that scared of him... hope he will b gentler in the future like she expects.. n next time its her who asks him for it.. not him..

that sky... arjun should kill both brothers in worst way...

update soon

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jumbo_dumbo

@jumbo_dumbo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#823

Hey Muskaan,

I was patiently waiting for the update n atlast got it.. They say nah that sabhar ka phal meetha hota hai.. N what a update.. It was worth waiting for..

I dont know y but I feel Arjun in ur story is somewhat similar to Christian Grey..

For once Arjun's heart overpowered his head.. I mean it is true that how much time even Arjun wait? Or till what extent will he let that psycho control their lives..

Even in that moment of passion and love, he ended up hurting his love of his life.

I cracked up reading the line "I am hungry... obviously for food"

Loved the way when Riya defended Arjun to Amit..

Hope that both psycho bros r caught n made to pay for their sins soon..

Thanx for the superb update...

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sana khan

@sanakhan.khan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#824

just fnshd d part n it was beyond any words👏...n wen u gve d altimatum foh d part i was lyk should i read it or not bt nahi padne ka toh no sawal hi read it🤢...d way she was scared n d way our hero behave yaar maana padega daring k saat saat shameless bhi hai...d part eas absolutely awsm cant describe in words

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beatrice_89

@beatrice_89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#825

Wow. Like always you have left me speechless. Loved the way you portrayed rathore, his ability to understand the psychology of a criminal even in grave situation is probably what makes him a remarkable chief. Arjun asked sorry to riya and amit wow twas unexpected but still great. Riya at gun point sounds so scary i hope she is safe. And a very big thanks for adding me on your pm list thank you so much dear. Btw i will pm you my mail id. Plz check. One again about the update it was amazing fabulous fantastic etc etc etc. Do continue soon. And get well soon.

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Seenavas

@Seenavas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#826

ohhh my god

actually iam scratching my head

its very difficult for me to comment on ur update

i have no words

even i dont know how many time i read d update

wow rathore and sree scored well

lovd the airport scene

just felt like watching a movie

some times i didnt get arjun

some time he is so gentle and sometimes so arrogant

feeling very bad for both arjun and riya

arjun really need patience with riya

omg the confession of arjunn was ☺️

lovd every bit of it

waiting for the next update

thanksss alot for add me on the list

just like the attitude of Prince Arjun Suryakant Rawte i love ur attitude

u greedy dhamki queen

respect and prayers

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Sabia Khan

@BDCTG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#827

Muskaaan Aaapiii... Finally got the 10th part...was egerly waiting 4 it.
I'm loving the prince Arjun. Loved Shree very much in this part. Rathod was as usual a great leader and true chief of the team...who had a strong confidence on Arjun and other members of his team. But loved Rathod-Shree convo in the airport. Shree's dailog, 'cappuccino...I always have cappuccino'!! The hidden meaning of the line made me laugh in that serious situatn too...hats off to your written skills Aapi.
Ohh...thank u very much 4 your pm. I was confused that I'll pm u my e-mail address or not. Becaz u don't read pm's and you've said that strictly. But now as u gave permission 2 send u pm...I'm going 2 pm u my e-mail address right now Aapi.

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#828

First of all..take care of urself nd get well soon...
Bahot lamba intazaar karwaya iss update k liye muskaan di aapne...
fir v koi baat nahi kyu ki ye chap padh k mai bahot khus ho gayi.. plz update stop mat kijye...
Now coming to the chapter...
Just loved it..
Arjun just loves Riya so much...but she is too innocent nd doesn't understand his such talks..
So caring dat uske piche bodyguards v lagwa diya arjun ne.. aur riya ko kuch pata v nahi chala..
Amit so happy for being treated like celebreties...
Felt bad in airport scene.. Riya ne 4 hrs wait kiya par Arjun vul gaya...aur apni biwi ko lene he nahi gaya...
Loved the part when Arjun actually said sorry to Riya... she was so surprised... but I knew that he would say sorry at dat point... *my sense of humour :p:p*
Shree too from Nepal.. aap ne toh mujhe kitna khus kardiya dii.. me too from Nepal *smiling* ...but dat bloody Sik should not have been from here..neway
And Amit's antics nearly cracked me up.. bedroom se out aur karatee skills...lol *so funny*
Dead bodies donot bleed...Arjun really is very intelligent!!!! *so proud*
Now Riya at cliff that too at gun point...
Arjun save her plz...

AWESOME!!!!
m in LOVE with this FF so plz don't stop updating...
really great chap..

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#829

WOW... AMAZING part... AARGGHHH I HATE SKY!!!! poor Arjun... true... love makes people do things they don't even Dream of... Saying "sorry" in Arjun's case...

Thnxx 4 keeping me in the list on pg 105... love ur story and waiting 4 more!!!!

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#830

OMG!!!!!! Awesome update yaar!!!!!!!

I was glued to the screen from the beginning to the end. I mean How can you write such a good chapter. Agar ye maine likhha hot a toh mujhe 10 main se 0 bhi nahi milta. I would have probably gotten a number in the negatives! lol

Ahem! The flashback part was really really... I don't know what to say. Honestly. When I started reading the flashback my hands and feet started sweating!!! And the funny think is they are always freezing cold. They never get hot. So today after reading this Mujhe each mein boat garmi lag rahi. But I loved the Ariya romance as always!!!!

I really love the character Amit playes. He is so cute, yet so bold!!! I loved that little part where he was acting like Arjun's wife!🤣 I couldn't stop laughing at that. So innocent!!! But he was really cute. I love how he is scared of Arjun yet he always say something to defend Riya!! So cute!!!

And yaar chill kar. iTNA ghussa sehat ke liye acha nahi hota! Okay?

and please don't stop writing this ff. Please?I just love this ff and I don't want it to end.

Please? don't stop. Okay?

Now smile!!!!!!!😊

P.S- Goddd!!! Mujhe abhi bhi bhi garmi lag rahi hai!!! I should probably go drink lots of water!!! Yaar teri wajhe se mujhe ab need nahi ane wali hai!!!! Sach main.

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