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sana khan

@sanakhan.khan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

hey i was so confused on wat 2 cmmnt cause ma dad was sitting ryt beside me on tat tym😆...the convo b/w amit,riya n arjun was v.gud...n d wrk dne by shree n chotu was too gud nd asusual rathod was fab either in show or in ur story loved him...i loved d way u describ each n evrythng in d story poor riya the way she was scared pitty on her if i get a chance na i wanna kich sikender ASS😡 he is itna bura ki i cant describe in words...

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diya

@Diya121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

awww muskan diii...

that was just awwwsome...

paisawusoool update nice...

loved arjun amit and riya scenes...

amit is a reallly cutie pie with his one broken tooth😆

loved arjun concern for riya...

thanku a bigg one for the pm...

gooossh i may hug if u were near🤗

the part was really mindblowing... ur writing skills are awsome...

me reallly loved the part and second thing get welll as fast as possible...

loved the part love you... really good😊👏

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

Hey ...

Brilliant update 👏

I just loved the way Amit acted, just like a typical wife who wants her husband to be there on time, always 😆

N awww Arjun apologized 😃 ... That was so sweet 😉

I just love his princely style ... N yayyy !!! We got to see a lot of it in this update 😃

My poor Riya is just too innocent and undoubtedly selfless 😲

I can't imagine her trying to hide ... But I can indeed imagine Arjun to break the door 😉

* I'm actually dancing * Arjun finally found Riya 😃

His presence of mind is just fantastic ...👏

Ooops Sky, you did the biggest mistake of your life, by actually raising your hand on Riya Suryakant Raute 😉

Arjun Suryakant Raute won't spare you 🤢

N btw thanks for adding me in the list 😃

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Prakrithy

@Arya1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

Res!

~EDITED~

Waah! Aapki ddhamkee badi rang laa rahi hai! 4 pages of comments, within a day of updating!!! Woo-hooo, on your behalf!

Jokes aside... this update was one of those that keep you on the very edge of your seat...

The whole thing, beginning from Rathod figuring out that Arjun's decoding was right, and then Arjun being all super-sexily (::dreamy eyes::😳) prince-like, and setting his entire kingdom on Sky's trail...

and the flashback (ooh-laa-laa! main toh aadhi mary gayi thi... 😉 especially Arjun apologizing to Riya, in front of Amit, and Amit demanding an apology 😆)

And then...the trap for Sky...And Shree's method of communicating with Rathod...Ad how Chotu, Arjun almost help Sky escape...but ultimately a wound inflicted on Riya gives Sky away... And then the ending... God. I'm DYING to read the next update!!!

Much love,

Arya

Edited by Arya1991 - 12 years ago

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Khushboo

@kaybee23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#835

This was a brilliant update as always! Your writing skills are beyond amazing! 👏

Ahh the flashback part was amazing. Loved the way Arjun told Riya how he felt when he first saw her and how he wised he can love her every night. Can't wait till he actually gets to confess his love to her!

I loved how Amit was asking Arjun to say sorry to him. haha

At last they finally found Riya!! 😊 It was so cute how Riya recognized Arjun's voice and the way she called him.

Can't wait to see how Arjun and the whole ETF team will tackle this sick guys Sik and Sky.

I can't wait to read the next part! Update soon 😊

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grad2011

@grad2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#836

omg really really good i was waitng for this and yeah i am on your list ;)

plzz do update and dont stop

again really nice!!!!! cany wait for the next update

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-SREE93-

@-SREE93-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#837

hai muskaan

i was waiting 4 ur pm and update.

and u gave us all the treat we were waiting 4...ariya milan.

yes finaaly arjun met riya...

i was a bit sad after the previous update when i found that arjun has made mistake in understanding the coded msg ang he was at dead end again...

but now i am happy 2 know that our super cop never make any mistake

the fb was very nice.

loved amit.he raised voice 4 riya.riya is such a good girl.even though she feared arjun she can never hate him.

the etf team is indeed very efficient.they are working very hard.

sky's spart too is gud

poor guy (sorry actuallly he s not poor)now he has to face the wrath of our super angry cop

waiting 4 next update

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#838

Hey Muskaan..

Thanks for the PM.. Really appreciate it..
I HAVE to say this; it does get really annoying when u PM nearly buddies and hardly a tenth of them reply back.. So yes, I appreciate your constant provoking dhamkis.. 😉😳

Also, I hope you're doing well.. Get well soon.. 😊

Coming to the update,
Each time I think your Arjun can't get any more hawter, you literally douse him with gallons of kerosene and set him on fire; the flames and heat of which is reflected on our screens.. 😉👏

His anger, patience, love, perseverance, brilliance, lust, passion... Everything about him is just smokin hawt!!

Sikky Sikky... You mess with Arjun.. Pardonable.. You kidnap Riya: You're rotting in hell..
You mess with Rowdy Rathore, You're minced meat, DUDE!! 😡👏

Ri.. My poor doll; felt for her in the Flashback.. She's still afraid of him.. It's strange how his touch and attention can be both soothing and searing for her at the same time..

My heart went out to both of them during that phase.. Coz both are justified and I couldn't really pick sides..

But the surprise package was Amit!! Bravo, my dear.. You've got some guts!! 👏😉

Whoa!! Sky.. Sky.. You shouldn't have done that, baby.. Ab toh khud SKY mein Sitara bane dikhayi doge.. 😉🤣

On a serious note, I'm kinda scared.. That guy had Riya at gunpoint and Arjun lunged at him?!!
Hope no one gets hurt..

Do update sooner..

Sending you a PM with my email-id.. Though I'd still ask you to re-think over your decision..
Rest is your call..

Thanks

Avantika..

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#839

first thank you so much for such a long update 😃 hope you get well soon..

coming to the update it was just superb :) loved it

sikander got slapped by mr. rawte 😃 he deserved it

loved mr. rawte's confidence on arjun :) love him

sik said all that just to misguide them 😡 loser... he got all the training from his uncles..

felt bad for his parents :( they died just because of him...

shree is from Nepal too :) nice... so he asked his informers to find information about sikander...

sky is just sick like his brother 😡 he injected riya with sleeping pills and kept her in a box...he disguised himself as an old lady...

ETF was again disguised chotu as a police officer checking luggage, shree at ticket booking counter and rathore as shop holder... loved their code words...

loved the flashback... it was so hot :) their kiss was so romantic ❤️ was literally blushing 😳

didn't expect arjun to express his wild thoughts to riya.. poor girl got so scared after hearing them...

poor riya she was so afraid of him that she hid in her room and didn't even come out for 8 hours 😭

loved arjun and amit's conversation in the parking lot.. the way he assured her dad would be fine was superb...loved when arjun said I am hungry and then riya's reaction and then he was like for food obviously 🤣

awww he appointed two bodyguards just to keep an eye on her :)

after staying 18days aways from riya he didn't go to pick her up and she had to wait for 4 hours but arjun indeed said sorry to them..

loved amit's dialogue "Arjun is so dead when he meets meets me."😆 he was acting like arjun's wife... amit is just so cute and adorable

finally arjun caught sky and loved the way he snatched out his wig...

arjun is really smart especially in the scene at the airport after seeing the blood drop falling from box he was like dead bodies don't bleed...

felt so bad after seeing riya's condition she was handcuffed, swollen eyes, bleeding lips and injuy on head 😭

that loser sky slapped riya in front of arjun and she is at gun point

hope arjun saves riya without releasing Sikander

as always very well written :)

thanks for the PM :)

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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@Deleted_Account

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Posted: 12 years ago

#840

um... Hi muskydi hw r u! I just read all the parts 2day n comnted 2, ye mat sochna im a silent reader! Aur ha! kya mai jaan sakti hu aap kis school mei parti thi? Kyu ki aapna dhamkiya dene mei topper ho! Pls meri pyaarisi musky di... I knw tum na... Bohooot swweet n achchi ho... Jaldi jaldi update do na.. Yaar yeh baat thik nahi hai ek to tum itne hot n spicy update deti ho k gala sukh jaata hai, n aese update parne ke baad na hosh mei rehna bohot muskil ho jaata hai, toh phir koi kese commnt kare! Sab ko samjhati ho k wo comnt kare par khud nahi samajhti ki aese mazedar n juicy story parhke koi comnt karneke hal mei nahi rehta! I wnt say any praise for ur story kyuki kuch bhi kehna insult hoga, BEYOND WORDS! Im so speechless k itna bara bhashan de gayi! :P phir bhi ek baat samajhlo.. This is the best story i read till now n u r a chummeshwari writer! Samajhlo kyuki ab arjun apne 1 lov k saath thoda tym spend karega, wid me! :P kya karu tum sab use cheen lete ho! Musku di U ROC! samjhe ya samjhau!!