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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

Wow..u actually updated all the four parts in one go!!!! That's a good surprise..

How can Arnav be so careless. even if he doesn't accept her as his wife, she's here in a new country with him, as his responsibility. He's not supposed to leave her in market just to save his ass from Di & Nani... I'm thoroughly upset with this behavior of his.

Ooo.. feel so bad for Khushi.. First he came so late & then without giving her a reason for the delay just got bsy on his phone. What kind of callous attitude is that??

I was expecting Khushi would yell at him in the street itself when he came looking for her. But she still had patience. .. I really wanted Khushi to yell at him more.. he deserves some more loathing than wht he just received. I as a reader know the reason behind Arnav's attitude - to hide the attraction on name of temper. But when I think myself in Khushi's shoes I feel so much pain for the girl who has left behind her home, family & trying to adjust with a temperamental husband still getting hatred & ill-treatment in return - it just feels more than enough...

I can understand why she thought in the end that this marriage can't work. She can't make it work single-handedly.

It was amazingly written, superb.

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#612

hey read all 4 parts...khushi's such an outburst was surprise but was necessary at this moment...the way arnav is treating her is totally unaccepted and when she is trying hard to stay out of his way and not to disturb him...perfectly written and smartly penned down the emotions...loved all 4 part a lot...waiting anxiously to know what will happen next...thanks for updates :)

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AbdulloveIPKKND

@AbdulloveIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

#613

OKthat was the most amazing outburst of Khushi. I loved the outburst and I am trying my best to control the tears as I can't cry in front of the my friends or they will think I am stupid😭.Let me just tell you that was amazing. Khushi sure did an amazing job and Arnav did said sorry. He must be feeling bad. I hope his behavior change and the end line of Khushi sure made me more upset but she is right in her ways too. Arnav should do something to make it work. He was a little bit hesitant to say that he just wanted to ignore her. I hope this time Arnav changes himself. Lets see what happens. :😃

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jd08

@jd08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#614

I am glad I found this link to your FF read all parts, pretty realistic and gripping excellent pace waiting to read more

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#615

wow! amazing update. finally arnav has accepted his mistake.

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Aparna Mohan

@zoyadarkrose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#616

What happened Krani? No news of you for a long time & suddenly FOUR freaking updates??!!Wow. .if this is how you're going,I've no complaints for late updates 😉
Now about the update.That was amazing . .👏No other words for it,it was incredible the way Khushi finally lashed out.You wrote so well,I went & read it once more.I could picture each & every expression & gesture of her.I felt like I myself was doing the talk! How she told him how much she suffered,how much of faults he had & when she said she loathed him that was the cherry on the top Arnav seems to genuinly regret what he did,is he going to try to work on the marriagd too? Will Khushi forgive him & give him another chance? eagerly waiting for the next update 😊
p.s.You're right,slow pace is best & this is THAT update when a silent reader can't keep her silence but appreciate the writer for her brilliance

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dazzlerabi

@dazzlerabi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#617

Came across this os,read all parts in one go,awesome,loved it!Please pm me next update..

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meghnas

@meghnas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#618

wow just wow!!! thank you sooo much for the marathon updates :) I was craving for more evn after reading 4 back to back updates!

lovvved the way you expressed Khushi's emotions when she was waiting for him...and the outburst was amazing!! ASR totally deserved it! Khushi has suffered and it was high time he was made to realize it!

good to see Arnav apologizing :) looking forward to the next update!

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renee

@renee27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#619

Before jumping down to write my 'Longish' comment... I must share with you that as soon as I opened IF today I screamed...Yes SCREAMED... never before it has happened with me...I have bookmarked this thread and happen to check it regularly...but today is special... Diwali Bumper Dhamaka sort of 😆 ...Was expecting 2... got 4 updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... that too of my favorite FF... U made my day... 😃😃😃

Chpt 24# Khushi's cultural shock is very well described here. The cold fear and the lonliness takes her back to the time where she misses her parents... there is a limit to the amount of neglect a human being can take... and when we are invariably put into an alien surrounding, the only comfort is our near and dear ones... the distraught, helpless girl i a foreign land... i would not have used the word 'helpless' if she was in a more familiar surrounding... i.e., India... but here she is Helpless. Language, Culture, Lifestyle, Weather, People... in stark contrast to your own place... I felt sorry for this girl.

Chpt 25# What an Arrogant Prick...!!!!! A Royal Jerk...!!!!!!!!!! You don't leave a woman alone on streets you moron... no one told him to babysit her... she was perfectly fine in hotel... He couldn't stand it... or lets put this way wanted to avoid queries from his family and so left her on the streets... Oh How very Convenient Mr. Prick... He is so engrossed in avoiding her that he actually forgot that she is his responsibility... No affection, No love, No consideration... Just a Responsibility... He is fighting his attraction... this mental war he is waging against his own desires could have caused her physical harm... he doesn't realize... What he did was unforgivable.

Chpt 26# Pure Awesomeness!!!!!! I am a sucker for silent treatments... They work wonders... it spares you the time and energy and your precious tears... and almost always manages to attract attention. 😆😆😆 Less noise pollution more Impact... Wooohhh

He is confused... And the Prick still doesn't realize that he is the reason for her Silence... So, Mr. Prick is also Mr. Dimwit... Alarm and confusion clouds his mind and I got this weird satisfaction that her silence disturbs him... But Concern? There is a long way to go...

Chpt 27# And then she drops the bomb!!!!!!... And not just any other bomb... ATOM BOMB... Every word was like daggers flying. And her idea of hurting him to maximum suited me just fine. Words have the capability to change the course of a nation. ASR is just human.

I loved that she brought his Mom, Only then it he understood what shame he has brought upon himself and all the people who have loved him and looked up to him as a son or a brother.

His teeny-weeny- tiny bit of concern for her is interesting. He thinks that something happened on the streets... and softens a little but his arrogantly thick brain takes offence at being blatantly ignored and fires up... And *BOOM*

Every word made him realize the extent of his mistakes. Loathed because of lower class, she has shown more character in handling the situation and he knows that. She respects his family. He can never deny it.

And when she brings his Mom, The final dagger pierces his heart... and maybe with the tears to wash away his soul he may start seeing her in an new light.

He can start by showing some concern and being civil. Because she has clearly given up on him.

Why do I feel this is going to be a turning point? She has given up and will grow distant & maybe he will try and be nice and still would fail to get a response. Get frustrated. Concern will develop I think now...Love I don't know... Its upto you... I am in no mood for brisk walking... Loving this stroll on the moist turf... so take your time...

As for me... You are keeping my Arnav -Khushi alive... And I love u for this 😃

P.S: Its not that long... I hope you read it...
P.P.S.: More than being satisfied with 4 updates I am curious to know Arnav's reaction now... He apologized... That is a silver lining... Mr. Prick is not very good with words... Sorry is one thing he can repeat on a loop... It may help him 😊

Edited by renee27 - 12 years ago