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bablubli

@bablubli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#621

Wow! A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. is all I can say!
That outburst from Khushi was just fabulously written!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#622

awesome loved it and it was high time for arnav to know wat khushi feels with his indifference

i hope nw arnav will try to change

do update soon

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smittap

@smittap

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Posted: 12 years ago

#623

👏👏👏👏👏👏Wow!!! You have a great way with words. I enjoy reading ur works. Thanks

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#624

Wowww... it couldnt hv been more perfct... reading this chptr made me so content... potryed perfctly...

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#625

THAT was absolutely breathtaking! oh god! and so many chapters.
you go khushi! WOOHOOO! I'm so so sooo happy now, finally khushi spoke up. I'm really so happy. And goodness, you've portrayed the whole scenario so beautifully, it really felt like I had the whole thing happening in front of me, he emotions so raw, the screaming so relevant, the blazing fury in the dialogues, the stiffness, everything was perfect and so strikingly believable, fantastic.

lots of love
sonia

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Ok i just loved this!! Best yet!

You defined Khushi emotions to the point!! Finally she spoke up! I just wanted her to stand up and fight for herself and she did!!
I just LOVED LOVED LOVED Khushi outburst, BAS.

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#627

Hi K,

Not sure why you were so worried...this is one of the best breakdown of Khushi I have read in recent times.

And the best part is you covered every emotion that she went through beautifully...be it fear, dejection, grief, wistfullness, despair, anger and heartache. It was multi-dimensional and that made it even more real.

It is always a pleasure to read your updates...and you kind, kind soul gave us 4 in one ago... 😃. But I am really glad you did that becoz IMO the multitude of Khushi's emotions and the depth of her pain would have diminished if they were spread across time. A big Thank You for this one.

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Mamatha

@mamathasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

this is awesome...read all the 27 parts at a go...:)

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san123456

@san123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

#629

Four updates in one go, it's too good to be true.

Go Khushi, i'm glad she finally got her point across to him, he really needed to hear it. Somehow i think the tables have turned and Arnav will try to redeem himself while Khushi will adopt his attitude. That would be interesting if it happens.

Great update, or updates.

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#630

Hi dear I just found this ff few days earlier but didn't read it all even I forget the name of ff my bad memory 😕just remembering the story line then today I find it again hurray😊 while checking thread must read ff it's such a nice n different ff loved it tc