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Factitious

@Factitious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Krani , you done it again girl. *standing ovation*. AMAZING update. I completely am short of words. 4 beautifully written updates with absolutely well portrayed emotions and feelings , insecure , hurt and alone khushi with insensitive arnav. Very well written krani. I am not goods with words but u did a great job. Well done.

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inajnar

@inajnar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

4 Chapters ...all at once ...amazing ...

I thought Khushi' outburst was well portrayed...Her wait followed by the relief on seeing Arnav...the helplessness on being lost ...the absolute loathing and fury building in her and then exploding at Arnav...

What was interesting was the Arnav's facade seems to be cracking ...

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anu14

@anu14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Krani Krani Krani!!rendered speechless..pehle toh u shocked me out of my wits by posting 4 chapters at once!n if that wasn't enough..the updates...don't even get me started on those

I can totally understand Khushi's plight..having been in a similar situation once..arrggghhh..don't wanna even think abt it!!!

I'm surprised how much crap Khushi took b4 she finally exploded..honestly..main khushi ki jagah hoti toh itna nahin seh paati..

The outburst was completely justified..n plz don't worry..u did a brilliant job in portraying Khishi's anger n anguish

n the last part..when Arnav pushes her against d wall...trust me Krani I could hear my heatbeats go haywire!!that was d first tym Arnav ever admitted he's made a mistake n apologized..

Can't wait 4 what u've in store..update when u can..but try 2 make it early plz?

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#604

4 parts! it's like an early Christmas present!😃 (though this doesn't mean you don't update again till after Xmas!)

The build-up was excellent! Khushi's distress firstly when she got lost was so heart wrenching, and then when Arnav was shouting at her, her anger and the rage. ah, brilliant.

Of course the outburst was my favourite. All the pent up anger and frustration finally coming to surface.. I think this will be the turning point for their relationship- where maybe Arnav will try making an effort in their relationship and Khushi will refuse (only in the beginning ;) )

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@-memorable-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#605

this outburst was very much necessary for both Khushi and Arnav

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Vaiga

@Aashmin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Is dat our xmas treat...!!! Khushis reaction was much needed...hw can she take anymore indifference from him...her feelings n line of emotions were well plotted...visualised each bi t of it in mind...amazing work..continu soon...

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indiavizion

@indiavizion

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Posted: 12 years ago

#607

wow..4 updates at a time...still reading 4 i wanted to read more...its good now that khushi is also avoiding after he left her stranded at an unknown...i think i would have also gone thugh those mixed feelings which she went thugh if i were her

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123vava

@123vava

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#608

was stalkinf in ur profile for updates...awesomee update

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#609

loved the updates...just finished reading your fic...loved every bit of it...

loved the realistic approach of this fic in which people are extremely flawed like normal human beings..loving the slow pace of this story where arnav and khushi are still fighting to accept this relationship instead of falling for each other...

cont soon

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asdfgh456

@asdfgh456

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Posted: 12 years ago

#610

Aaah this fic is amazing! I love your writing style and how you're portraying the gradual development in their relationship! Can't wait to read more!
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