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sweetfairy007

@sweetfairy007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Hi Krani,

You filled our heart and mind.When i was reading part 25 a lump was there in my throat.I felt how I could help her? Such a irrational husband!!Nobody even our enemy should get such a husband.who doesn't care any thing and any one.

But by part 27 I was feeling a satisfaction.This much is needed.Finally she reacted.There is a limit for everything,Isn't ?

But then all of a sudden he went to take his night dress? why????????????

You stopped like that.I felt the flow of reactions,emotions responses.But all of a sudden it is blocked.

I felt like that.May be you will have your own reason to do like that Isn't?

Just waiting for your next update.(Always greedy)

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

GOD Some people really r gifted to be able to put into words what they envision...u r one of best writers on IF i feel lucky to be able to find ur work...loved the updates..u brought out the helplessness of khushi very well..n felt a sadistic pleasure when she finally showed her anger to arnav...and i hope from now on he treats her like a human

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Devika

@WaterIce

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Wow!!!

That was one powerful update!!!

Can't wait to read more

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ashred12

@ashred12

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

i'm not a regular reader of ur ff...i loooved khushi's outburst... finally !!!

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penguin143

@penguin143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

loved Khushi's outburst...
her each words were perfect..
And Arnav apologised..!! dat was totally unexpected...!!
continue soon..😊

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jeya0301

@jeya0301

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

4parts together!!awesome..:) nd the outburst of khushi just amazing..:) can't wait fr next part..:) thnk u

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ramji.panicker

@ramji.panicker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

I choked up while reading these. I felt anger and frustration when reading these. God, I think I went through all the emotions that Khushi must have gone through and I felt as if I was shouting at Arnav. Puuurrfect!!!!! Just perfect ... !! As I have said earlier ... you are brilliant :-). Keep writing always :)

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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

Finished reading it in one go...i must say u r an amazing writer...i love the way u write...simply fantastic...loved khushi's outburst...eagerly waitin for next chapter...

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bc1972

@bc1972

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

Khushi's outburst - expected...Arnav's apology - totally unexpected. Loved it! Looking forward to the aftermath. Is Arnav going to be civil towards her? Will khushi give him the silent treatment? Wonder what you have in store for us!