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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: aishu3003
woww awesome update👏

waiting for d next part😃

Thanks Aishu for liking the update...we are really happy to know that you liked it...and yes next part is updated...we hope you will enjoy it too...

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shaani2209

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

holding on...will edit later..or 2mrw may be...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Karen_sharon
RES😎

{A Big Comment On the way for my Pratik Bhai and Deepu di}

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My dear Pratik Bhai & Deepu di,

At 1st place...Pratik..kitna intro dete ho...and btw how were ur exams..and promise yad hai na?

For sure the OS's concept is amazing...I always luv Shantanu/Swayam as a flirt...😆 but I don't know why this OS has something different I meant usually we pair Swayam with Rey...but u both paired him with "NILESH"...I think u guys wanted to create the Tannu-Maccy bond here...and thats the reason u so badly wanted us to imagine TanHa as SwaRon here...but I can't stop laughing bcoz thats my normal reaction when Swayam teases Sharon...how cute would they be (Dreamy Mode)...but jokes apart for sure this was a Fab work...and GR8 team work Pratik Bhai & Deepu di & Pratik u r rite di is a Fab writer...and I forgot to tell UPD8 ASAP...PLZ...btw Di & Bhai...how r my siggies?

Ab maine bohot bak bak kar li...Hope so yeh comment kafi tha next Upd8 tak..but ek request ho sake toh nxt Upd8 ke bad mere liye comment RES kar de na...bcoz like nishu I luv being 1st!

With lots of love

Karen (Maria)

Hey maria thank you for liking and giving such a sweet comment dear...we are so happy to read your comment...you are really so sweet...and yes we wanted to create something new thats why we came up with nil and swayam bond which is unique in itself and yes swayam teasing sharon is the most cutest thing for swaron fans...my exams were good and i remember my promise actually i have fulfilled my promise dear...next part is updated now...we really liked your siggies you are actually very good with preparing siggies dear...thanks again for long and lovely comment...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: bhanumathitanha
it was nicely written. da conversation between dem was awesome ya looking forwards for next part

Thank you for reading the part and liking it... we are really glad that we were able to give you something really enjoyable...next part is already updated we hope you will enjoy that too just like this...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3
OMG!!😃
wooowww this OS has something really special.. something new...
so starting with the OS...oh!gosh!!OS ko bhi aapne choda nahi bhaiya n di ...sooo long!! 😡 but i had a great time!!😉😳
So hmmm kajol n srk haan!!😆 instead of ReYam you guys showed neil n swayam ...innovative!😉
i loved their convo...from the start...marking the gals...discussing their ex's!!😆... then swayam's eyes finaly landing up on our Sharon opps Senorita!!😉 n the way their cono started off... the best part was like how you guys linked them with their minds!!!loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏⭐️
two of my Fav n best writers on IF!!!😉 🤗 your 1st work together...it was like ...ummm... totally amazing ...entertaining...just everything...!!!
can't wait 4 the update!!!!!!please dont keep a high demand update 😡!
great combine effort!!!...i mean i was shocked as soon as i saw the pm saying combine OS!!n woh bhi aap dono!! 😉 i mean... chalo...abhi bahut ho gayi tarif... mein bahut thak gayi hu!!😆coz you'll have done my work!!!😆 praising each other...n thanking n dedicating your frnds on IF... (di-thanks di for dedicating it to me! 😊🤗)
n please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!...😡😡
forget ur FF,SS... n concentrate on this 1 plz!!😭 😆 now plz dont take my previous line seriously!!!!😆
love you guys!!🤗never ever leave writing!!...

Hey I am here to the Sattu comment...Previously I used to call it My Sattu comment...but It has become the Sattu comment now... I had thought not to reply this initially as actually deeps have already replied to you...but than i felt you already are angry on me for not dedicating the update to you...but trust to me muje bhi deeps ne bola tab pata chala ke tumhara name chut gaya hai...maine jaan buj ke nahi choda tha dear jaise hi muje pata chala ki maine dediction mein tumhara name omit kiya hai i went back and edited it...but i guess it was too late than and maine uska effect dekha tumhare comment mein on the dancing star as you were asking me that what have you done wrong but believe me you have done nothing wrong vo sirf ek typing error ki vajah se chut gaya tha...us waqt muje laga maine likh diya hai tera name but actualy nahi tha usme tera name...and haan meri galti thi so main on forum publically tujse forgiveness mangta hun...please forgive me...

Well comming back to your comment yes we have likned SRK and Kajol to SwaRon to this time and yes innovation ke liye ReYam ki jagah Nil aur Swayam ko laya hai iss bar...and We are happy ke tuje sab kuch pasand aaya...i agree ke hum dono tere pasandgi ke writers hai IF pe but one the best writers yaha pe sirf Deepika hain and it was my previlage ke muje uske sath kuch likhne ka chance mila...I am sorry the delay in update was just because of me...as i am too much busy these days with my teaching job... but we have updated it now... we hope you will like the update...and ya we have done enough praises for each other..so its nice to hear some from you...specially deepu ko praise kar because uske bina ye kuch bhi nahi tha...

Thank you again for the Sattu comment...Deepu ne already reply kar diya hai iss comment ko to ye reply uska addition hi samaj le... ok love you dear...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Wantubak
outstanding profamance u to 👏👏

Thank you Thank you so much for liking the update...we are really glad that you liked the update...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
I know its late bt still RES for now...till den thumbs up to Deeps di nd CA Bro :))
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I know i took a longg tym to edit but i had to make it big and good! 😳

Soo Di and Bro! Thanx a lot for this Amazingg and hatke OS! I loved itt! Aap dono ka collaboration toh mast thaa! 👏
Bro gud luck for your result..i wish aap CA ban jao aur meri koi bhi Cs ki problem ho toh aap solve bhi krdo!! 😆
Lol..but seriously..finally you are free!!!

Now cumin to the OS..!
Hahaha swayam ko bhi CA bna diya ismei!! Hadh hai 🤣
Swayam aur nilesh kitne bade tharki hai yaar!! Limits!! 😆
The way they were giving to numbers and counting their gf's! Gawd! Big tym jerks!
Then sharon ki entry! Lol swayam toh fida ho gyaa!
And kya gazab ka flirt maara hai usne...sharon ko majboor kr diya convo ke liye! 😉
Aur pat hi gyi finally!! 😃

It was awesomeness!! 👍🏼
Thanx for the dedication deeps di! 🤗

Hey Surbhi thank you very much dear for reading it and liking it... we are so glad to read your beautiful comment...it brought a big smile on our faces dear...We really like ke you liked our collabration very much...and thank for saying ke i become a CA soon...so you will be happy to know that i have become a tutor for professional examinations of CA and CS so i can solve your problems whenever you want...

Now we are really happy that you liked nil and swayam ki tharki convo and all...kuch alag karna tha so aisa kiya and Jab SwaRon aata hai to ye sab hona to natural hai a dear...thaks for liking it again...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: reet_26
Awesome update
update soon

Thank you for liking the work and we are very gald to see that you liked it...and next part is updated now...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Wow Pratik bhai what an dhamakedhar entry after a long time👏 😆and deeps ke sath hai to kya kehna, deeps is like sugar, jiske sath milao sishe will spread her sweetness.😳 aap dono ka SS likkna together is our achi kismat hai, lovely. Bhai dont forget you have more to update.

Moving on to this update, it is AWESOME! Swayam baba😆 well deeps and Pratik you guys are simply amazing, Pratik always narrates the story so well taking in to considerations even the minutest detail, and deeps has a flair for a flowing flowrey language which i am fida on.❤️ Each scene is so well written, especially the bit where they are fighting. Super sweet!!!!!!

Hey Suku thanks for welcome you showed to me...and ya deeps ke sathe re entry mari hai taki sab notice karein ke IF ki one the best writters apni khas friend hai hahahah...but seriously you quoted so right that deeps is like a suger kisike sath bhi ghul jati hai...and sweetness spread karti hai...She is one the best writers we have to write on SwaRon so it was just amazing experience to write something with her...I haven't forgot i have to update some chindi stories jisko log kabhi kabar pad bhi lete hai...hahaha...

Thanks for saying that suku that i narrate every minute detail in the story...but the credit this time goes to deepu kya likhti hai yar uske narration itne mindblowing hote hai ki main to sochta hi reh jata hu ki what do i write to match with her...But we are so very happy that you all have liked the update...and thank you from both of us for such a sweet comment dear...