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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Neeti96
Res

*Edited*

Both of you, I am very sorry for this late edit.

I didn't realise i had reserved and not edited.

I loved this funny OS i hope ull will continue it

Sorry again.

-Neeti

Hey Neeti you liked it and commented it that is what matters to us...and no issues even if you commented late but atlist you commented... you are one of the sweetest readers we have neeti...keep supporting like that...thanks again for reading...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: sweetsimi123
Awesome Part dear...⭐️

Hey Thanks for liking it dear... we are really glad to know that you liked it...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Awesome
Swayam n Nilesh part was hilarious,counting their gf lol
Swaron meet was really different.Swayam the cassonova attracted towards sharon in the first place n even sharon start liking him..:)
Waiting for next part

Hey Sadiya thanks for being here and reading the update dear... We are very glad to see you here...and yes we have tried to put up the Swayam and Nilesh chemistry and which people have really enjoyed very much so we are gald to know that...and you know they say that when you meet the person who is meant for you what ever type of person you are you will feel like this... I haven't have felt but we have written this on the basis of experience of our friends that they have shared with us...next part is updated...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: shaani2209
Awesome...and a pretty long one...
nicely penned and a different meet yet close enough to justifying the characters they already are for many of us...

would like to read further...

thanks for the pm deep...

Hey Rosh thank you very much for reading it dear... You know your opinion always means alot to me and us...we are really happy that you liked the update...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: yogini64
Wow . . . That was indeed a fab work 👏
swayam as Mr. Flirt 😉
Itne sweet n decent se swayam ko cassinova Imagine karne ke liye 1 scene to de hi diya tha cv's ne 😆
42 gf's . . . 😲
but vo gal ke toh 87 bf's . . . Hadd hai 🤣
true love na kehte kehte . . . . Pasand aa hi gyi senorita 😃
indirectly thanx to nilesh . . . . 😛
ye toh achha khasa chep ho gya 😆
no wonder,, majnu impressed diva . . . . . . & she could not resist him going away from her 😎
wat a challenge . . . . . . . Seems like an unplanned date
waiting for next part 😊

Hey Yogini Thank you for reading the work and appreciation you showed... I know you are here because you know deep so it really means alot to us that being a Kriyansh fan you are here to read a SwaRon work... and We are very happy that we able to provide you with entertainment...Seems like you have really enjoyed yourself reading this...Yes next part is unplanned date and it is already updated now... We hope you will enjoy that also...thank you again for such lovely words we really are happy to read them...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: --Rose--
Wow its amazing dear:-):-) :-):-) PLEASE PM ME WHEN U UPDATE:-):-) jus loved it:-):-)

Hey Rashi thank you very much reading and acknowledging the work...that is so really sweet of you that you never miss reading a single update... we really are happy to see you here...thank you again...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: meevee
Hey Maddy gud to see u bac in writing mode...i am sure Deep ka bohat influence raha hoga iss concept mein but the screenplay is typically u...lambe chaude common man slang wale dialogues ... r a big give-away there...liked the theme coz this was sumthing different to read...interesting first part - two buddies discussing their flirting conquests only to b outdone by a female who is one step ahead of it...the SwaRon part was a nice duel of wordplay more enjoyable coz the language and sentiments were kept simple...effective jugalbandi this...luking forward to how u guys hav turned out the rest of the encounter...gud one!!!

Hey Meera even I am very happy to see you agian dear... You are one of special friends i have meera thank you for always acknowledging the work i am invovled in...hahahah really Meera we are always left dumbstruck with your comments because you pick up the main points in the update so easily yar... Yes the concept was of Deepika and Screenplay was influence somewhat by me as you can see the unimaginable size of the update...But yes this was surely something different so that excited us to post...actually Deepika had more confidance that people will like more than what i had actually... and to see all the lovely comments i can say that deepu was right...next part is already updated i hope you will read it soon...thank you for reading it Meera we are really gald that you liked it...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: sweetangelpayal
Dis one is sooo guddd!!! I love dis concept...n d way nil n swayam were boastin n dey get a huge chop by dat chic was hilarious...swayam's dialogues were sooo cheesy yet soo himm... N
n sharon..stil confused!!! I lykd hw she waz giving him piece of her mind in d start n yet wen he was leavin she wanted him to stay...
I was singing pehli nazar mein throughout d convo...
Gosh swaron...y SOOO cuteee??????!!!!!!!!
Swayam as a CA...???evn m studyin dat..kash mere Paas bhi tym hota inna...

N plzzz update soon...

Hey Payal thank you so much for liking this work...and we are really happy that you liked this concept and nil swayam bonding...this was just an effort to make something new from our side but we are really happy that you all liked it...that song pehli nazar mein is actually perfect for the situation swaron were in the story...and ya they are cute...well swayam was shown as CA because it was my imagination as like you i am also a CA student and Deepy allowed me to portray swayam like that so all thanks to deepy...we are gald that you liked the update..the next part is updated now...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: sw1234
It was nice.the conversation between them is awesome.thnx for pm.loved it.

Thanks very much for liking it... We are really very happy to know that you liked it..keep giving us such sweet reviews...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007
Welcome Back Pratik!!😊
I loved it to the core!!😃
oh and..Happy Belated Diwali!🤗

Pls post the next part asap...can't wait to read it😉

Hey Vedika thanks so much for such a warm welcome...🤗 and thank you for diwali greetings dear...we are really gald to know that you liked it very much...and next part is updated now... We hope you will also like that..