SwaRon Story: 2 Strangers

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Phew finally I finished reading the update...it was something big and worth reading... 😊
I dunno whom to appreciate...coz both of u r busy praising each other... 😛

Coming to the update...it was just brilliant...swayam trying his maximum to convince Sharon and Sharon in a dilemma whether to listen to her heart or her mind...totally can understand both of their thoughts...specially swayam's feelings were just beautifully penned down...and the family description was also a treat to read...:D

Hats off to both of u guys...it was indeed a grand update... 👏 😊

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Amazzzinggg!!

Loved it!!

Especially this part😆

desire of daughter that remains unfulfilled...

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Trupti Sawant

@Trupti09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

this was so beautiful.the way swayam express his feeling koi bhi ladki impress ho jayegi.loved it.

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Ria

@Ria_SwaRon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

liked the os to the core...!!! aww swayam is so cute in this one...!!

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

awesome os👏

loved ittt😊

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

lovelyupdate guys

ha😆😆😆

par ager swayam kk family say bhi mulaakat ho jati sharon ki toh

fun kuch jayada bad jada y/n

Great work / os

Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
RES

Pratik and Deeps i won't say the flirt Swayam or the Diva Sharon is any different approach but the meet as strangers was nicely done..SwaRon convo was like the battle of word games which was good to read. The start to me was like who are they kidding..talking n numbers of gfs and bfs..complete stereotypes..Nil and Swayam as in the show made a fun addition to the OS.

To picture Swayam as the CA and be interested in dance as well was interesting :)

Looking forward to the next part. Thanks for the PM Deeps :) but i was here even before that :) though i am editing it late..

@ Pratik - i hope you did good in your exams and its always been a pleasure talking to you as well.

Hey Sudha my dear dear friend...thank you so very much reading this piece of work and being here before you get the PM i notice your Res post as soon as i completed the posting procedures...You have been always there to support my writings and i must say you have been one of the storngest reasons why i am really writing anything on this forum... Talking to you always gives me new energy and i feel very happy whenever i talk to you...

And about the update ya this was little bit different as we have fitted our SwaRon in the style of Shahrukh and Kajol who are considered as king and queen of romance...so SwaRon have looked more convincing than ShahRukh and Kajol in this style...we enjoyed this silly word game we played so thought to post it as OS...some editing was done on the game and words and the update was ready...i am gald you liked the changes and the update itself...

Ya sudha my exams were very good and i hope some positive results this time...thank you for commenting and liking the work...you pressence is very important for me always...

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: nature2
res

yes yes yes this time m first

Awosm update

87 bf 😆😆😆😆

one of the Best part

love it👏👏👏

Hey thanks for commenting and reading... You know what your style of commenting is very unique... I had to wait like updates to find out your full opinion on this OS but i must say i really enjoyed the way you have given comment in unique Nature 2 style... I dont really know your name but you are really sweet with your comments...keep supporting the write ups like this...thanks again for liking the update...

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Tanuka_TanHa
A SwaRon os by deepu di and monster 🤗

RES

unres

Now that was super Amazing and Long... story .

the swayam and nil conversation was well written . actually the whole ss was well written 👏

Loved swayam's character and the way he was trying to flirt with sharon .

sharon acting smart and pretending that she is not getting affected .

In all had such a great time while reading this .

can't wait to read what happens next .

eagerly waiting for the next part , update soon..

thanks for the PM.

P.S - MONSTER its so nice to see u posting something after so long 😃

Heya Big Monster 🤗... so nice to see you again here... Ya i am back after exams with one the best writers on this Forum to write something... You know i wanted that everybody should get a surprise when i return so what better than an OS with the great deepika... well i really enjoyed your comment...you are really so sweet...Everything was a bit different than usual SwaRon story in this one yet the love element was there...so i hope you liked it as much as we liked it while writing...and Monster I am happy that you liked our long post after Long time...

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
Reserved.

P.S : I did not receive a PM for this!

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Hey Nivi the PM's were sent a bit late but you must have received a PM from Deepika's ID as all the PM's were sent by her...and if you dont have received any PM than i am really very sorry for that...but please ab maan bhi ja and apna comment comment Unres kar de yar...