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Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Great update! I loved it!

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Awesome os
Lines swayam said to convience sharon was really beautifull!!.Even sharon can't resist swayam's charm.Loved the ending.
Great job guys..😎

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

This was one OS which was steeped in things which r so inspired by the life around us...the feeling that i got was ke yaar yeh toh hamare type ki kahani hai kyunki basically the sentiments echoed were rooted in our values...cheesy with a cute touch, sumtimes downright philosophical tooo, but all the same the way the feelings, misgivings and even the reasoning expressed was relatable...as i said b4 too, Maddy ne apna longwala 😊 chapp choda hai..badey dialogues, badi badi baatein, ladki pataane ka lamba-chauda wala funda ...it made interesting reading and this combination of a strong concept maker and screenplay ka baap was nice...yaar Maddy & Deeps i know kuch zyaada ho gaya but cant help it...iss OS ka asar hai 😳

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Deeps Di and Bro! 👏
Awesome yaar..i mean...literally awesome...kya detailed dissection kar daala swayam and sharon ka..i bet aaj tak kisi ne itna detail mein SwaRon ki feelings ko kabhi nahin likha hoga...i am highly impressed by this! 😎
Aur mujhe toh har part acha laga..kya point out karun..but two things hai...
firstly..when swayam impresses sharon by explaining his family..that was actually bulls eye! 👍🏼
And secondly..i loved how you explained sharon's thoughts...they were changing so naturally..i could actually relate to that..! So real...! ⭐️
I loved this! ❤️

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-Shravzz-

@-Shravzz-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Deepika and bhai ull are amazing writers...
Awesome OS...
Each and everything was perfect in this OS...
Ull explained everything very nicely...
Loved it to the core...😃

Deepika I hav not spoken to u...but thanks a lot to pm me about dis OS...
But bhai u r in danger now...yeh OS ke bare mein mujhe bataya hi nahi...
Im really very angry...ur dead...😡

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

RES

I ask for some time before i edit my comment.

My apologies that i am terribly late to edit my comment.

Looks like more then SwaRon spoke to themselves they were speaking to God or lost in their own set of thoughts..and i liked how you both handled that part..

To Swayam, she was senorita till the very end and i liked how the name was revealed..and what Swayam's thought were. Liked few references Swayam thought of Sharon..she the lightning to his life..nicely done.

Edited by Sudha-SK - 12 years ago

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Aashik MS

@Aashu14

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Wow this is a nice story i just loved it..👏

The way u made swayam and sharon story line was nice... The way swayam opened his feeling for her was awesome... wen i was reading d story the only question i had is wen ll he know her real name.. So finally its revealed and i relieved..😆

Thanx for the PM...😊

Edited by Aashu14 - 12 years ago

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

dat was a beautiful work guyz..

hatz of to deepu n pratik..!!

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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

OMG!!!!!!!this was sobeautiful and awesome update!!!⭐️
this time it took me a lot of time to read!!😆hush!such a long update toh long comment banta hai boss!! 😉so 4 two really special ppl on IF here comes the satu comment...😳
In the start,where you described the view...wooow it was beautiful 😊 following swayam's reason to why this place.
then the convo started where swayam was trying to impress her n poor sharon was confused till she arrived to the decision!😳
right form the start he presented himself like an open book in front of her...😳 just as apna Majnu does!😉❤️❤️
from taking her to this place where he always comes alone n enjoys the beautiful scenery in front of his eyes... to telling about the fact that he uses girls so that he doesnt get used by them to reach fame...to the FINAL idea of his family picture n then describing the beautifully knitted family... 😳and most important reason that he has never ever spoken about to anyone not even to his bestie neilesh...

You Know senorita I feel that you are the girl who has come like lightening in my life...
awww

Just look at yourself first... you are the best creature of God... Just look at your face it gives a feeling of peace...Your smile is like eighth wonder of the world... you know if anyone is about die he can get some extra breaths if he/she sees you smile...
❤️❤️
next,the way you'll described swayam's family here...awww it was so pleasant n beautiful to read... wooowww
n then the proposal unfolded...it was like THE PROPOSAL I WOULD SAY!!i was awestruck
n was smiling like an idiot as if he is proposing me!!😆brilliant job⭐️it touched my heart!!...oh!gosh...loved it to the core!!❤️
Will you be a part of my cutest family? Will be there with me spend lovely time with this entire people? Will you be there to help my Paa in executing his plans to irritate us? Will you be there to complete that unclaimed spot in my heart which belongs to somebody who can please my family? Will you be the reason to fulfil my parent's unfulfilled dream? Will you be the most loved daughter of my Mom and Dad? Will you be the mother of cutest children on mine? Can you be the reason of all the happiness that will come to my family because of their daughter in law? Can you be that person who can give me a peaceful time and make me feel alive with a single smile? Can you be the first person whose face I see when I wake up every morning? Will you be my life Senorita?❤️❤️
everything was super great...followed by sharon's realization that she should give him a chance n respect his feelings from the bottom of HIS heart...
n sharon's reply was really beautiful!!😳
yes you heard me right I don't want to be a part of your memories because I want to live those memories with you idiot... I want to be the perfect daughter of you parents... I want to be the mother like sister cum best friend of Purab... I want to help your dad in irritating you all... I want to be the reason of your happiness... I want to be that reason which can make your day... I want to be your life but remember I will own this life now... and yes I want to be a part of this family picture which is the cutest I have ever seen... I want to live with this dream family swayam... I want to marry you swayam...❤️❤️
oh!gosh!why did you'll end?i wanted to see how will things turn out in future for them!sharon's relationship with HIS family n visa versa... plz continue this one...plzzzi need more combine works of both of you!!!😡 😆
the 1st update was damn entertaining...and what do i say?FILMY!😆
and 2nd totally Swa...wait for it SwaRon-licious...😆😳😳😳
wooww it was amazing to see 2 strangers who fell in love then met then frnds(as u'l said😉)
unique story written by unique SwaRon writers on IF!! 🤗love you both!!! ❤️❤️❤️(aila!bahut zyada lamba ho gaya...😛 )