KR SS: The Veiled Temptations (Updated Ch5 Pg44)

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chandrima

@chand91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
yaar 3 din pehle hi diya tha...

abhi toh i am stuck with diagrams...

its nt 3 din

its teeen din

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

u aren't going to leave me nah???? 😳

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

First...Sorry for late comment.

Awesome update.

Rey toh bada romantic ban raha hai..:P

Even though Kria tries to resist, in the end she too wants Rey like he wants her. :D

I should say the same thing..The Chief is pretty awesome...

Kria and Rey had the same idea...and boom! Phir se ladai shuru...

But chief saved the day! :D

They have to work together..lekin kaam ke alaava kuch aur ho raha haii...

Kria left Rey amazed.

Update the next part soon.

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chandrima

@chand91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
u aren't going to leave me nah???? 😳

funny qstn bt ans s NAAA

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

finally got a chance to read this one...

well sachh bolo ya nahi😕

aaj pure din mein ab tak ka yeh best update tha..

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so shuru se shuru karne pe yeh pata chalta hai ki...

Rey is restless all the time.. its not that she doesnt likes it.. but publicly? are u serious???

hadh hai airport bhi nahi choda?? pata nahi office mein kaise survive karte hain dono...

dono ko gussa kuch zyada hi aata hai... par unke gusse ka fayda hume hota hai 😉

tujhse achhe se super s*xy wale updates mil jate hain...😆

I wanted to see their expressions while Kria seducing Rey.. n then both getting jealous...

n then the way described it was too good...

I am loving this..

jaldi se next update bhi de de😳

Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

firstly i m really really really sorry *baby face*
i knw maine tera full dimag khaya iske piche...n den read b ni kia
i m very bad na 😔

bt you knw my situation na
too baat kr na
plijjj...meri sexy machine ke bina mera kya hoga 😆
SORRRYYY AGAIN 😃

n now to update!!!!!
AH-MAZING vaishu 😉
Hayeee!!!!!!! dis was ahhh i m dreaming still 😆

dat new version was just wow
tu kaha se lati h itne awsome dialouges
jaan tu itna dimag kaise lga leti h
thoda sa mjhe b de de 🤣 🤣

n yiippiieee dekha bola tha na dress ko fully backless rakh
bt jo tune uska use kia...n jo xplain kia dat was breath-taking
hayeee

i love da ending
hahaha tu ending to waise b dhasu krti h
i just loved it
again going to read it 😃 😉

Edited by shaffy_arsha - 12 years ago

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Vaishu !😉 😳

See i came ! yoho !😆

abhi i have a bit time as ... sab bore kar rahe hai ! Crazy cousin's🤢 !

Coming to update ...

Starting ! yey ! they are finally alone and there !

Fir that air port scene ! Loved it !

U showed it exactly real !

The fight was sensible ! 😆

Kriya's dress shit i want such dress ! Lol ! It really appeared amazing !

Now u awoken animal inside me hehaha !

" he cursed off his vow to keep his anger up when she was dressed like that. " awww !!!!!! Loved this !!

" but she was looking for those hazel pair of eyes in which she drowned everytime she saw them. " Yes ! it was amazing

"It has got a new version. The previous version is no more working for me."

Rey said looking straight into her eyes making Kria highly conscious.

"Did u try out the new version?"

"Didn't try. Don't want to."

Ladki ! kahan se laatii hai aise idea's !??? haan ! i damn like the conversation's you wrote !! 😳

It seemed as if he was an addict and his weakness was just in his hands. awww !! ladki tu gayi hehe .. i loved this line as well !

And the ending was good as well ! i loved it ! damn ! i want next update now !!😉

achcha me leaving ..bye jaan !Louv u😳

Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 years ago

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Hawtt n tempting . . . . . Loved it 😃
u knw . . . . I just love 'plane me romance' . . . . Although it was in airport,,, so it was kinda rare n daring approach 😎
coz . . . . They are in the middle of the crowd . . . . & rey still wanna enjoy the time 😉
behind the pillar . . . . . That move is so sexy,,, the rising passion . . . . Amazing 🤗
poor kriya . . . . Her big mouth spat out her uneasyness in the worst way 😔
although it worked her wish . . . . . . But rey to hurt ho gya na
seductive dress . . . . . . Enough to turn him on again 😉
but a side effect . . . . . . All the males are equally effected 🤣
ohh . . . . He's still upset wid her . . . . . New version pe itna shaq 😆
I really like the way a gal takes the lead,,, just driving him crazy wid her gestures & teasing wid her kisses ☺️
lol . . . . Wat was he doing actually wid those gals,, in swimwear 😆
ohk . . . . Kriya's swimwear gives me a picture of 'priyanka in dostana' . . . Although u did'nt write golden . . . . But thats the best I can imagine 😛
hehehe . . . . Possesive rey is awake now 😃
thakte nhi hai kya . . . . . Itna stamina kahan se aata hai? 🤣

Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago