KR SS: The Veiled Temptations (Updated Ch5 Pg44) - Page 28

u surely are a amazing writer haan..!!

oh sorry first i forget when i read this last...
i had to read all this over again...
superb and fabulous end done...
i liked whole of the last chapter that was loved it...
kria had realized her love for rey on the second day it self...
then rey in detective heard all her conversation with her friends...
then rey plan to make her jealously...
in the end finally got her confession out...
and they are together as kriyaansh

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congratz yaar
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Re read the 1st chapter
its a pure bliss

Pehle maine padhna strt kiya toh meko laga ke love hate relationship hoga ...
But fir pata chala what was the actual plot ... ^_^
Hayyye Ilove such intense hollywood masala stuff ...and you wrote it kitne acche se...
I loved the way you kept everything simple and kept the flow smooth and proceeded with plot as the story progressed
No loudness and no melodrama ...bass woh ekdum alluring.wala romance
And the tharkiness not to forget ;)...
The way you made them confess that they
were attracted to themselves made the story more gripping and intriguin
One-sided hua hota toh predictable drama but this was whatgave u the story the much needed edge ...

Tere tharkipana waale ideas ...kya baat ;)
The portrayal was made with utmost wiseness ...ekdum sensous and crispy...!
And it adds flavor.to the story ...! I loved the varous encounters and the sneak outs ...and the way they used to express their feelings...in the most natural way ...

I loved the sudden proposal ... ^_^
Glad he was so sure about his feelngs because guys in such cases are asses lol
And the way he understood her insecurities ...and her state ...awwwiiee
Lol kria wanted to exp the courtship moments hahahah
Game kheling reyu ke saaath ^_^

And riya ke saath convo...the way she said she has never loved someone else itna zyada ...it made me squeal in delight ...kinna cheek-pulling cahhuute tha woh ^_^
And fir end mein ... ILOVED the way kria authoritively said Ihave all the rights over u ...it expressed.the extent of her love
And the end ...she asked for the ring ...hayyeee
I loved such crispy , teekhe and tharki write ups ...
Meko belong karte h sab lol ^_^
Aur likho !

simply amazing...!