KR SS: The Veiled Temptations (Updated Ch5 Pg44) - Page 12

super hot vaishuu awsomme yaarr.. kya likha haaiii tunee... yaar kriya hads wixked ideas hehee poor rey possesive over her gf nyc 1 loving it yaarr... kreeep it up

hot update...loved kriya in this update...

Vaishu this was cheesy..
Gosh so loved it...
The cuteness,the pout that each other shared..
The making up session was all superb!!!!!!!11

Res
unres

chillana mat...me ek din me hi unres kar rai hu dekh...

And 4 res'ing
ofcourse i can...bcoz its nt 1st pg...u see...

So i can freely unres late..

Isiliye toh 1st pg pe res nai karti...even though many a times am the 1st one to read the update

*dont give me that i-am-bored-ab-comment-kar glares*

haha kar rai hu na...

Hmmm all in all the update was great...

I mean

the airport part was really fabulous...i loved it

and kria seducing him was amazing...even i dint thought she wil cum up with sumthing like that...

And then the pool scene...

Rofl rey ko kya lagta hai only he can make kria jealouse...hehe no way dude...

Hehe i was imagining kria as priyanka in dostana in her golden swim wear...

Rey toh dekh ke hi mar jata

great work

But ya i dont call it cheesy one...i mean look at your 1st part...2nd part...gosh they are mindblowing..


Guess the way u told u are working on cheesy dialogues...

I dint find them...agli baar mast dialogues likhiyo...

and ha teri bhavnayein pauch gayi...hehe

thanx for the pm...ofcourse bolungi itni mehnat karke jo bhejti hai tu...hehe fir bhi late comment milta hai...lol

chalo bye enjoy studying...
adios

super hott updatee...

Awsome Update...Loved it...waiting for the next Update...

sorry for late comment...

amazing update...
HoT one...
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon