KR SS: The Veiled Temptations (Updated Ch5 Pg44)

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I never knew Tom n Jerry cud b like this... lol..

but seriously... I loved this TJ KriYaansh...

attraction chupane k liye... playing pranks on the other ..

n vice versa...

hadh hai.. inke jhagde ka majaa toh pura office loot ta hai.. n on top of that bechara Boss sar pakad kar baitha hai...

office blog n ek dusre ke mailing accounts bhi nhi chode in logone...

Boss pareshaan... KR ki duniyaa aabaad.. (I heard this kinda dialogue sumwhere)

waah kya boos hai.. what an idea Bossji...

bandh kar do room mein...

finally spitted out the reason.. Attraction..

haye that barsaat romance... maine kya kya expect kiya tha.. but u... tune kuch nhi karaya...

I know tu kuch karati bhi nhi..

mujhe toh laga tha bahut badaa hoga but tune toh cut short kar diya...

shortcut mar rahi hai.. huh

anyways mujhe toh bada majaa aaya OS padh kar..

I loved it..n aise aur likhna.. I'll enjoy reading them...

waise concept bada sahi tha...

dil khush kar ditta... (phir dialogue copying)

a lots of puppies n jhappies for this...

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

reshwaaa!!!!!

unreshwa!!!!!!!😆

okay first as usual i like the start...

haha can imagine she storming into the cabin and

rey sitting peacefully in his chir making her fume more 😆

i thought u would continue the same...

but i didnt expect rey to shout back ...

but i liked their tom and jerry fight too..

lolz..ye donon itne faaltu ke kaam kyun karte hai???

cartoons...spamming systems...🤣 kaha se socha re???

lolz...again.,...he spammed her inbox??

he for sure is a cassinova 😆

hahahahaha still laughing at the cat fight😆

and that just a second...uske baad kriyaansh ki expression when they realise its their boss 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

ummm 3 hrs locked??????? achi idea hai...

waise i liked the talk between them ...

mostly that im attracted to u wala line😳

oohhh!!!!

and the next part is sensous u see...

its simple yet sensuous

and mostly i like rey's excuse a lot...

hahaha 😆

hmmm...i siad na it is awesome...

its just awesome awesome😳

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awsome...Awsome...Awsome...Awsome
hayeee dat was Amazinggg!!!!!!!!!!! vaishu 😃

full tym while reading i m smilling lyk an idoit...n sister was lyk "tu pagal ho gyi h kya" 😆

teko bola tha na mjhe ache wali feeling aa ri h is OS ke liye b jaise wo CONTRACT wale tym ki ayi thi...bs ye smile usi ka ek reaction tha 😆

hahaha i love dere TOM-JERRY fight alot...n den wo ek dam attraction wali line bolna...hayeee 😳 😳

awwiiieee barsat romance lovly
rey kitna cute h...no no hot n sexy 😉 😳
n kria ki dress...haha mil gyi shaanti use hot si formal phenwa kr 🤣

i love da most last part wen chief ph was come n dere silly n awsome exuse...hehe i love rey excuse alot
kya dhundh kr likha h rey tune...lol mjhe computers pasand ni waise 😆

n i m also ready for nxt round of ur update weather it is of FF or another OS...bbuhaaa 🤣 🤣

loved it alot vaishu
fadu tha...mast 😃

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Shukti_19

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Posted: 12 years ago

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OMG!!! wt an OS!!! amazing.. fabulous..
U rocked it...
luvd their Tom-Jerry fights a lot... 😃
n Romance in d Rain!!! hayyeee...😳
bt last part was simply d Best.. especially their Convo wid d Chief... "I unlocked a program which I had been trying for a long time and have decided to explore it." 🤣🤣 Gosh! ye Rey bhi na...😳

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madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Omg di. . . . .
It was,
superb,
awsome,
mindblowing,
fantastic,
out of the world. . .
I jst lovd it. . . . .. . .
Ha ha ha,
tom and jerry fight. . .
Sach mai jinta yeh kriyaansh lad rahe the utna toh mai and mera bestie bhi nahi ladte. . . .
Last part was totaly hawtt. . . .
Bilkul fadu os tha. . . .
Lovd it. . . . . .

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CHOCOLATEKRIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

hmm coming to os wow wow ow actually it was fab

rey and kria kitna jagad rahi hai dono aur

nice idea chief you made them alone for three hours that had given them big cute and great turning for thier friendship

wow when they fighted i thought they are really how chief said like they are kg kids

["Reyansh"

Rey didn't speak and continued his doings.

"Reyansh..."

Kria moaned as he clutched a piece of flesh strongly.

"Rey... Call me Rey."

He spoke gazing her intently.

"Rey... I think u shud check where ur hands are. I believe they r at wrong place."

"Are they?"

He moved his hand little above and moving it in front and in the process bring her more closer. Kria dug her nails in his back to refrain herself from losing out in the moment.

"Well... I don't think so. They are where they should be."

He pulled her more towards him.

"U got a problem. Strange... ur actions speak otherwise."

"R...Rey.. Don't do something u might regret."

"Who said I am gonna regret? I didn't."

With this he brought her more closer as their lips almost came in contact.

"Are u?"]

this part of their conversion wow i liked it no no i loved it

yes at lastly it took my breath really an amazing os

i appreciate your work

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

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see i stayed away 4rm the 1st pg...

AWESOMEST OS vaisu...

Hayeee i am so in love with

from start till the end everything was perfect...

Their tom and jerry fight...it was so entertaining...

Ofcourse aise fights roz dekhne mile toh office walo ki chandi hai...

Gosh they both really did that with the system...gr8 hai dono...

Then start of friendship part was really sweet...

And you know how much i liked the rain romance...hayeee...perfect

obviously kria aise dikhegi...then how can the poor soul control himself...
No way

waha par bhi kria usse sawal kar rai hai...as if she dont know wat he is doing...the same wat she wants...

for me the best part was rey's excuse...he gave 4 nt cuming...

It was super amazing

proposal toh ab tak 22 times padh chuki hu...pata nai yeh kitni bar padhungi...

Aise mast mast os likhti ja...

Bada maza ata hai padhne me

thanx for the pm

Edited by --Kinjal-- - 12 years ago